I think it's very cool how you linked it back to Harry by making it Harry's great x? grandfather who fought in the war. It was interesting to read how the wizards fought alongside the Muggles in the war, and it's sad that so many people died.
It was pretty good, the only part I didn't like was that there were never any letters from Chloe, except the last one. But I did like how it was the Potters you were talking about, and how you incorperated Dumbledore in there. Well planned, very good.
I like the idea of that being Harry's ansestors, that is really neat. Also you are on my favorites.
Very good ending. I liked the last letter very much. It was sweet and you made me feel for poor little John. I would also like to add that I found the plot/idea very interesting and rare. Especially because I'm interested in Historical things and wars. :)
Firstly, I like the style of it in the form of a letter, very original, and putting it between OC's gives it a sense that these are events that are happening to everyone, not specifically them.
2. Back by Christmas, I'm studying WWI at the moment (not for the first time) so those words do have an added poignancy
3. So Aberforth was named after his father, why do I get a bad feeling it was in memory of him. Ah well...
4. Well Done on the subject matter, it's something that I've never seen done before, so originality is always welcome.
5.Have to finish this later, but well done
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I really liked your story "An Insider's View"
carolyn that was amazing i dont no who daniel and chloe are but i think that u should be an author. cottade cheese whould be proud. he he. no one but uare going to understand that. it was awsome. u should write him a poem aboubt how the cookiemonster jumped into a cactus he he . i like ur story. this was a really long review (:
Author's Response: hehe, aly, nice. ok, I will, and you'll be in it!
as your first reviewer, I'd like to say....AWESOME JOB Carolyn!! keep it up.