Reviews For London
Reviewer: rissarose
Date: 02/23/07 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

it says d/g where's ginny?

Author's Response: She's right there!

Reviewer: ginny777
Date: 04/19/06 13:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

yay! Very good!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Yoda14
Date: 02/26/06 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

While I really like the story, I think you're moving way too fast; Belinda (Ginny) and Draco have just met... and no matter what, I don't think Draco would be so gentle and kind to a stranger, even if he is out of his natural "habitat"... Also, Ginny-whoops- Belinda is only barely 15... I dunno, she and Draco seem to be moving along to quickly at too young an age, but what do I know? Anyway, excellent writing, it'll be interesting to see where you go from here.

Author's Response: I appreciate your constructive criticism. They do like each other rather quickly, but I think that's fairly typical of teenagers. At first, it's all about attraction. The next chapter, when I finally get it posted, will show a bit more of their innocence.

Reviewer: JaneA
Date: 12/09/05 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

It's weird, because if it's GInny, she would have recognized that it was Draco, right? Well, anyway: I really like the story, and the chapter was long, which is good! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. She does recognize him (that's why she was so surprised by his attitude). She just didn't clue him in to the fact that they already know each other.

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 10/22/05 23:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have a nice start going here, don't stop. I guess it's true what they say, sometimes it's easier to be nice to strangers. Which could explain Draco's behavior. I'm surprised Belinda didn't recognize Draco once he introduced himself.

Author's Response: Thanks! There is another chapter ready that I'll get posted eventually. She does recognize him, but if she tolds him then his attitude towards her would probably not be as pleasant, right?

Reviewer: MrsDMalfoy
Date: 10/22/05 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

I quite enjoyed your writing style and I ope to see more of it. You are moving fast, but not overtly so. Will Belinda let it be known that she really is't Belinda.I am assuming that she is Ginny or will she wait till school starts and she is back at Hogwarts? Oh! Do Update Soon1

Author's Response: I'm sorry I haven't updated. There is another chapter ready, I just need to get it posted. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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