You shouldn't end it like that, you should make another chapter or something
you should keep writing that is a lovely story :]
you should keep writing that is a lovely story :]
i like that its nice :) you shud ttly rite another chapter
Pretty good you could definitly turn it into a series!
Very good story! I especially like the line, "Ugh. Boys were so complicated." Loved it!
Very good story! I especially like the line, "Ugh. Boys were so complicated." Loved it!
I love it! I am in love with this fiction! Very cute! MJ
will you make a second chapter
=D
Wow. It was really good. I loved the beginning where it described the snow. You are a very talented writer. Also, I thought the whole early mid-life crisis was pretty funny... but that's just me. Good work!
Cute story. I really like the Transfiguration tutor part. I have a bit of a smirk on my face just thinking about it. Great job and I hope to read anything else that you might have.
Hey! That's nice. You don't even see James the whole time, but you get to see how she made her decision.
hey, u have a great story but u have to complete it, this is not nearly enough
I WOULD REALLY REALLY ENJOY A LOT OF BEFORE AND AFTER CHAPTERS!! *demanding voice* How did she "get a glimps" of James? What is going to happen next? You're a good writer so if you have time, you could really build upon this chapter!!
DUDE!!!! WHY IS THERE ONLY ONE CHAPTER?!?!?! UPDATE ALREADY!!! I MUST KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! (well it has been... *counts* a month? about a month i think.... since you put chapter 1 up and now i NEED chapter 2!!)
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! I'm really flattered that you keep checking back here to see if I've updated. But to tell you the truth, I'm not planning on taking his story any farther. I'm afraid if I start to make it into anything bigger/longer I'll eventually get bored of it and start slacking off and not putting in my best work (it's happened before... lol). But thanks so much for being a loyal reader! Right now I'm working on another one-shot that's related to Lily Potter. It'll be coming out soon so be on the lookout! Thanks again!
Great story. I love reading a story with familar faces like Marlene McKinnon, Alice Longbottom and Dorcas Meadows- although now that I think about it who exactly is Dorcas Meadows? The name sounds familar.... Keep up the great work!
It's showing promise! Please put more chapters up here!!!
