That was so deep and powerful! I loved it! The song fits the situation perfectly! It made me cry! 10! Keep writing that was amazing!
nice it's a great story write another..Please I beg of you... Sorry a little dramatic.. great story
Wow... (stares blankly in awe at the screen... in a stupor) that was wicked! I'm just so... so... wow... that was really cool!!! Nice addition and I wish you would add this to ff.net so I could add it to my C2 archive "Sirius Lovers". It's so so good and I really think it belongs in a list of fics/poems/sonnets devoted to Padfoot/the Marauders. Very clever and very well thought out. Excellent. -Amalynne O'hara
Author's Response: I think I will ;)
Heh. You already know what I think of this, loff.