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Name: harrypotterfangirl21 (Signed) · Date: 09/27/07 13:18 · For: One-Shot
This is absolutely beautiful... Merlin, I'm getting the keyboard all wet, I'm crying so hard.

I loved the line:

Alone. The word seemed to hang in the dead calm like a shadow.

And the last lines:

As the three sat in silent reflection, a pair of unseen spectators gazed upon the trio.

What a lovely family portrait, they thought.

Are the unseen spectators supposed to be Lily and James? (That's what I thought, anyway.)

Now my keyboard is positively soaked. I've never technically lost a parent... well, kind of... it's hard to explain, actually, and I'm not going to go into all the details.

What I'm trying to say in this (probably confusing) review is that you captured Harry's emotions in ways I never thought that words could. And for that, my tears and I thank you.

- Katie

Name: lily_death_flower (Signed) · Date: 09/25/07 17:46 · For: One-Shot
that was so sad i was acctually crying. you really described the emotions well. awesome fic!

Name: dumbledoreismyhero (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 21:17 · For: One-Shot
Oh my god: tear-jerker if there ever was one!! you're really good... that made me cry...

Name: worse_than_death (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 9:41 · For: One-Shot
-sniffle sniflle- Mkay, hand over the tissues. -sob sob cry cry-

Name: ynnig (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 20:44 · For: One-Shot
Who were the two people?

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 16:51 · For: One-Shot
Aww amazingly tearfful and awesomeee ahh im still crying *whipes tears* aww thanks for the good cry!

Name: superman83000 (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 16:55 · For: One-Shot
that was realy good!

Name: JaqualinnMalfoy (Signed) · Date: 08/27/07 23:19 · For: One-Shot
That was so beautiful

Name: HermioneIsLucky (Signed) · Date: 08/24/07 12:26 · For: One-Shot
It's sooo sad i am crying and my sister is saying "what's wrong with you?"but it was nice

Name: Harry4Ginny (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 14:01 · For: One-Shot
I mayy have reviewed this before, but I just re-read it and, once again, I cried.
I love your style of writing, with particular emphasis on word choice...
Beautiful fic :)

Name: Madam Puddifoot (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 8:05 · For: One-Shot

One word. Beautiful. x

Name: GetOutOfMyHead (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 3:44 · For: One-Shot
That was beautiful, and sad. Very good story. =)

Name: tha_looney_one (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 17:10 · For: One-Shot
you really captured harry's grief in that. i was sniffling the whole way through, and i dont cry alot, so thats saying something. you can really convay emotion through your writing. keep going

Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 08/03/07 23:03 · For: One-Shot
This could have been pulled from any book written by the top writers of the day. I really believed what you were writing and to me that is the mark of a great writer.
You had tears rolling on my face, and only one other author on this site has managed that.
Thank you for writing this, I really think you nailed the emotion he would feel at that time.

Name: madhatter71889 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/07 15:55 · For: One-Shot
i loved this story i think u did a great job really describing what harry would say to his mum and dad it made cry a little and i couldnt find my tissues so i have to go find some but again it's an emotional story that i liked it wasn't to over the top with harry crying and it wasn't boring either it was just right

Name: potterfreak13 (Signed) · Date: 07/16/07 6:34 · For: One-Shot
I just wanted to say that i don't cry often(or easily,i hate myself crying) but i lost my dad when i was 6 and that made me cry. it was beautiful.

Name: ChoChang123 (Signed) · Date: 07/15/07 13:54 · For: One-Shot
wow that was great, it made me cry. what did it mean at the end witht the two unseen spcetators, were they James and Lily?

Name: 4evatonks (Signed) · Date: 07/13/07 11:12 · For: One-Shot
wow, that was amazing, great work!

Name: amzing (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 16:53 · For: One-Shot
omg .....this is the only fic ive had 2 cry at....waaaa..how sad..it is really really really well written....wow ure a fab writer ....i especially liked the last part...."

What a lovely family portrait, they thought

what a good ending.....u have a lot of talent writing sob fics...im going to go and look for any more of ur stories..:)

Name: eviltwin2000 (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 17:06 · For: One-Shot
lovely. it was wonderful. very good. keep it up.

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