very good...i mean it...VERY good job...i can see how you won...congrats on that...you're a really great writer
Absolutly perfect, beautifully written, just feels so cannon. I'm definetly checking out the rest of your work later, this is so incredibly fantastic. It really is Harry, exactly as he would speak to his parents if he had one last chance to tell them everything. I don't know what to say...amazing.
Definitely one of my favorites. Makes me tear up every time. :)
Excellent! Very well written, the emotion laced between the lines really brings home the point of the story. You captured the real sadness and muddle of emotions Harry must have inside his head. :) Truly a wonderfully written piece!
This story was fantastic. Sad but hopeful all at the same time. You expressed all the emotions i always think people should get a chance to say. it was really heart touching.
Oh congrats!!! I saw that this story won runner up, and i was like, "i remember reading that!" it origanally made me cry. great story!
o.....m.....g.....!!!! that was amazing. I swear! It made me cry. that was really good.
sorry accidentally sent it twice! >_
Oh my goodness. That was so wonderful. I got a bit teary myself, and the only writing that's caused me to really cry is Where the Red Fern Grows. I want to thank you for writing this. You see, just yesterday a school mate of mine lost his dad in a chemical accident in a well, along with another family member and two others. I don't know him well at all, but I still felt his suffering somehow. He wasn't at school today, and when I found out about his dad I just felt... empty. I think I'm probably a little too proficient at putting myself in someone else's shoes. You've made me realize that he's going to be okay, and that his dad will be watching over him. Thank you so much.
Oh my goodness. That was so wonderful. I got a bit teary myself, and the only writing that's caused me to really cry is Where the Red Fern Grows. I want to thank you for writing this. You see, just yesterday a school mate of mine lost his dad in a chemical accident in a well, along with another family member and two others. I don't know him well at all, but I still felt his suffering somehow. He wasn't at school today, and when I found out about his dad I just felt... empty. I think I'm probably a little too proficient at putting myself in someone else's shoes. You've made me realize that he's going to be okay, and that his dad will be watching over him. Thank you so much.
I cried. A lot.
Congratulations on getting runner-up in the QsQs. You really deserve it! This sotry was wonderful, and definitely one of the best fics I've ever read. Harrys emotions were captured so well that I can't even describe how wonderful you did it.
Well done!
YAY!!! V, you did it!!! Runner-up, OMG you rock!!! WHOOT!!! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! yeah!!!! *eats a chocolate bar* 10/10 WHOOT!! *Runner-up victory dance*lol roflmao!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! It was so sweet. Made me cry...I LVOE IT!
WOW. soo good! it made me want to cry and laugh at the sa me time. this was a wonderful idea - you wrote it beautifully.
great job!
Oh my god, i cried so much! It my me cry almost as much as the actual scene in Deathly Hallows... and that's saying something. Beautifully written, i loved it.
This is absolutely beautiful... Merlin, I'm getting the keyboard all wet, I'm crying so hard.
I loved the line:
Alone. The word seemed to hang in the dead calm like a shadow.
And the last lines:
As the three sat in silent reflection, a pair of unseen spectators gazed upon the trio.
What a lovely family portrait, they thought.
Are the unseen spectators supposed to be Lily and James? (That's what I thought, anyway.)
Now my keyboard is positively soaked. I've never technically lost a parent... well, kind of... it's hard to explain, actually, and I'm not going to go into all the details.
What I'm trying to say in this (probably confusing) review is that you captured Harry's emotions in ways I never thought that words could. And for that, my tears and I thank you.
- Katie
that was so sad i was acctually crying. you really described the emotions well. awesome fic!
