Reviewer: born2BaRavenclaw
Date: 11/06/07 12:06
Chapter: One-Shot

very good...i mean it...VERY good job...i can see how you won...congrats on that...you're a really great writer

Reviewer: lovesron
Date: 11/05/07 18:12
Chapter: One-Shot

Absolutly perfect, beautifully written, just feels so cannon. I'm definetly checking out the rest of your work later, this is so incredibly fantastic. It really is Harry, exactly as he would speak to his parents if he had one last chance to tell them everything. I don't know what to say...amazing.

Reviewer: soprano1
Date: 11/05/07 12:25
Chapter: One-Shot

Definitely one of my favorites. Makes me tear up every time. :)

Reviewer: ebonydawnpotter
Date: 11/04/07 18:51
Chapter: One-Shot

Excellent! Very well written, the emotion laced between the lines really brings home the point of the story. You captured the real sadness and muddle of emotions Harry must have inside his head. :) Truly a wonderfully written piece!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 11/04/07 16:37
Chapter: One-Shot

This story was fantastic. Sad but hopeful all at the same time. You expressed all the emotions i always think people should get a chance to say. it was really heart touching.

Reviewer: Magdalene Rose
Date: 11/04/07 9:06
Chapter: One-Shot

oooh, very nice.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 11/03/07 11:29
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh congrats!!! I saw that this story won runner up, and i was like, "i remember reading that!" it origanally made me cry. great story!

Reviewer: NorbertRulez
Date: 11/03/07 9:12
Chapter: One-Shot

o.....m.....g.....!!!! that was amazing. I swear! It made me cry. that was really good.

Reviewer: searchingforthesun29
Date: 11/02/07 22:48
Chapter: One-Shot

sorry accidentally sent it twice! >_

Reviewer: searchingforthesun29
Date: 11/02/07 22:46
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh my goodness. That was so wonderful. I got a bit teary myself, and the only writing that's caused me to really cry is Where the Red Fern Grows. I want to thank you for writing this. You see, just yesterday a school mate of mine lost his dad in a chemical accident in a well, along with another family member and two others. I don't know him well at all, but I still felt his suffering somehow. He wasn't at school today, and when I found out about his dad I just felt... empty. I think I'm probably a little too proficient at putting myself in someone else's shoes. You've made me realize that he's going to be okay, and that his dad will be watching over him. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: searchingforthesun29
Date: 11/02/07 22:42
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh my goodness. That was so wonderful. I got a bit teary myself, and the only writing that's caused me to really cry is Where the Red Fern Grows. I want to thank you for writing this. You see, just yesterday a school mate of mine lost his dad in a chemical accident in a well, along with another family member and two others. I don't know him well at all, but I still felt his suffering somehow. He wasn't at school today, and when I found out about his dad I just felt... empty. I think I'm probably a little too proficient at putting myself in someone else's shoes. You've made me realize that he's going to be okay, and that his dad will be watching over him. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 11/02/07 21:27
Chapter: One-Shot

I cried. A lot.

Congratulations on getting runner-up in the QsQs. You really deserve it! This sotry was wonderful, and definitely one of the best fics I've ever read. Harrys emotions were captured so well that I can't even describe how wonderful you did it.

Well done!

Reviewer: chicago_grl
Date: 11/02/07 19:55
Chapter: One-Shot

that was really good. good job

Reviewer: viktor n me
Date: 11/02/07 19:47
Chapter: One-Shot

great story!!!! made me shed tears

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 11/02/07 12:03
Chapter: One-Shot

YAY!!! V, you did it!!! Runner-up, OMG you rock!!! WHOOT!!! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! Go V! yeah!!!! *eats a chocolate bar* 10/10 WHOOT!! *Runner-up victory dance*lol roflmao!!!!!!

Reviewer: voldy_mort
Date: 10/26/07 12:01
Chapter: One-Shot

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! It was so sweet. Made me cry...I LVOE IT!

Reviewer: junior_achievement
Date: 10/12/07 17:33
Chapter: One-Shot

WOW. soo good! it made me want to cry and laugh at the sa me time. this was a wonderful idea - you wrote it beautifully.

great job!

Reviewer: ginnyluvly
Date: 10/07/07 13:00
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh my god, i cried so much! It my me cry almost as much as the actual scene in Deathly Hallows... and that's saying something. Beautifully written, i loved it.

Reviewer: harrypotterfangirl21
Date: 09/27/07 13:18
Chapter: One-Shot

This is absolutely beautiful... Merlin, I'm getting the keyboard all wet, I'm crying so hard.

I loved the line:

Alone. The word seemed to hang in the dead calm like a shadow.

And the last lines:

As the three sat in silent reflection, a pair of unseen spectators gazed upon the trio.

What a lovely family portrait, they thought.


Are the unseen spectators supposed to be Lily and James? (That's what I thought, anyway.)

Now my keyboard is positively soaked. I've never technically lost a parent... well, kind of... it's hard to explain, actually, and I'm not going to go into all the details.

What I'm trying to say in this (probably confusing) review is that you captured Harry's emotions in ways I never thought that words could. And for that, my tears and I thank you.

- Katie

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 09/25/07 17:46
Chapter: One-Shot

that was so sad i was acctually crying. you really described the emotions well. awesome fic!

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