Very nice and touching. It does bring a tear to the eye - especially for those of us who have lost a parent. I still want to talk to my mother after ten years of being gone. God Bless.
That was beautiful!
That was really sweet, I loved it.
wow. this was amazing. you are the closest, out of all the stories that i have read on here, to JKR. i hope to see something very familiar in DH.
hi.... seriously i registered here to write a review for u........ Brilliant is a lesser adjective... because yours was more than that...... you have the magic touch of JKR..... are you a creative writing student????? Amazing...... kudos....
Wonderfully written. Excellent appeals to emotions of readers. Wish it were in the next book!
Absolutely amazing. That was just... oh my Lordy. You are extremely talented and if I had the power to change the next HP book I would put that part in there. :)
How movingly poignant and eloquently written. Sniff! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
I cried...and I don't cry at just anything....wow...I've always said that Ron Hermione and Harry was a family of their own and I'm glad someone wrote about it...This fanfic is good and I don't normally like one shots.
This is such a sad, sweet, emotional, and beautiful story. You did such an amazing job. ^_^
Words cannot describe the feeling that you get when you read a fic like this. All of these emotions come over you like a wave. You have a real talent for writing fics like this, and you can really make the story come to life and let the readers feel the emotions. Ten out of ten.
your warning was right i should have brought tissues. Anyway this story was lovley. i really enjoyed it. it was just like i imagined ths moment would happen
Tear-jerker! I love it!
tearjerking good. sad story that makes you anticipate the final book.
ZOMG! 10! Very good, wonderfully written, a real tear-jerker! Very, very good. Keep up the good work and stay humble! ~Bonnie
That really was quite amazing. I've read quite a few one-shots, not on here, and I can honestly say that none of them which were meant to be emotional brought me to tears like yours did. Bravo, my dear. Bravo.
Made me cry...*sniff*
That was so good! It made me cry ='( I really enjoyed it!
that was really nice but sad. it made me cry. good writing though :p