Reviews For Imperius
Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 02/08/08 22:32
Chapter: Cornered

Oh my gosh, I was almost in tears!!! The only thing that kept me from bawling is the fact that I KNOW Remus won't die......right?

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 10/29/07 15:22
Chapter: A Werewolf's Soul

This is shaping up to be just as good as 'Oblivious'. I wish I had read it immediately afterward. I just wasn't in the mood for it at the time. Your writing is superb, as always.

I want to address the dementor's kiss on a werewolf. If a feral being kissed leaves behind the human mind and the wolf mind is gone for good, then wouldn't the opposite also be true? If a non-feral were to be kissed, the human mind would be gone and the wolf mind would be left behind. That much seems obvious, but what about a transformed werewolf who is not on wolfsbane? Could this be a cure for the danger? They would still be a werewolf, but not lose their mind when transformed. Sort of a permanent wolfsbane? But who would volunteer to test this? Hmmm.....

Reviewer: hpheart
Date: 10/28/07 14:24
Chapter: Braced

Remus’ eyes had drifted to the blade pressed against his neck. His golden eyes offered her a very pointed look.

Any remote and cloudy hint of doubt that it was Remus running the show inside that furry body vanished in an instant. Only Remus could look at her quite like that.

That has possiblt got to be one of the best quotes i've read!
Amazing story by the way

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/23/07 17:07
Chapter: Epilogue

thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank yout han kty ou than ky oytu yahtn katyoiswl yathab owoolcfl,woflk .alfjoi ;oiaj;siof

I really really enjoyed all the backstory and werewolf-personality building that you created for this story (and oblivious). so much more creation went into this than usually I see in fanfiction. what I kind of want to do now is combine your perceptions of being a werewolf with Kerichi's writings (she's one of my fave authors here).
and I just love all the crazy-complex ideas you've had. and cliffies. and you absolutely must not be american, because I have definitley learned some new british-isms (or whatever) while reading this fic (I did have to look up "throwing a paddy", I just wasn't sure :P ). anyway...thank you.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/23/07 16:58
Chapter: Awakenings

this story was really rather exhausting to read. not to mention that I really have to do my homework. full of too much genius to list.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/23/07 14:09
Chapter: What Lies Beneath


Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/22/07 15:46
Chapter: Epiphany

it was heart-wrenching to read that description of the two of them (while tonks was asleep) and think of the end of book seven with both of them dead. really terrible, worse than anything in canon.
and I wondered how long it would be before you ended up writing in romance...tee hee.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/22/07 15:34
Chapter: Under Cover

"He folded his arms and raised a pointed eyebrow. “I don’t suppose your father hails from Cheshire, does he?”"---my favorite part!

I cannot believe you would have them trapped like this. I cannot believe I did not think about cymone coming back for her wand. arg...alternatively tho, now rebekah's behavior is somewhat explained...

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/21/07 22:28
Chapter: Hidden Meanings

is felisha genuine?

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/16/07 22:38
Chapter: At The Gate

so now felisha knows tonks's name...will that be important?

Reviewer: Jazzy3113
Date: 10/10/07 13:02
Chapter: Where Angels Fear To Tread

Another solid chapter, but wouldn't Tonks and Lupin not openly discuss with strangers that Snape is in the Order? Is that supposed to be a secret?

Reviewer: Jazzy3113
Date: 10/10/07 12:09
Chapter: The Organised Mind

What a great cliffhanger.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/18/07 12:52
Chapter: Necessity

Wow! What a way to write the first chapter. Very interesting and well written!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/17/07 12:27
Chapter: Epilogue

Thank you for such a good and action packed story! I have enjoyed the roide and I'm very content with how you left this. :)

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 09/17/07 0:11
Chapter: Epilogue

Thank you, once again, for this fantastic fic. There is no praise I can offer that I haven't offer before. I can only repeat, you are up there in my top five all time favorite fan-fic authors. You have woven a story here that I will come back to read again and again.

I will eagerly await anything you decide to write in future. I would be absolutely frantic with joy if you choose to write a new lovely looooong story with new characters (such as a Snap-centric, Ginny-centric, or even something completely original like a Alice/Frank Longbottom fic.)

Tally-ho. And another round of applause for the awesomely-wonderful Pallas! *clapclapclap*

Pax (peace)

Reviewer: Merope Gaunt
Date: 09/16/07 2:12
Chapter: Epilogue

"Amazing", I think sums it up. I wouldn't say 'no' to a sequel if you were to change your mind... ;)

I'll be happily awaiting any other fanfics you write!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 09/15/07 23:10
Chapter: Epilogue

I have to thank you for writing such a great story! You don't know how many times I've been having a bad day and then I saw that this was updated and the world felt like a happier place! Your characterizations are spot on and I love love love your Remus! You are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to see more of your work.

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 09/15/07 22:44
Chapter: Epilogue

I for one have truely enjoyed the ride. :) The epilogue was just right. Tonks & Remus alone but still tying up loose ends. I like Winter Hollow for the newest Mr. & Mrs. Lupin home. Okay so they weren't married (yet) in the epilogue, you get the idea. ;-) Job Well Done!

Reviewer: bluemoon13
Date: 09/15/07 12:38
Chapter: Epilogue

That was a sweet ending! I loved this fic and I really hope you keep writing R/T!

Reviewer: real_life
Date: 09/15/07 12:28
Chapter: Epilogue

That was great! I loved it.
Keep up the good work :)

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