Reviews For Imperius
Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 06/24/07 9:16
Chapter: Dies Irae Part One

NO NO NO! REMUS! I'm glad you got the next chapter up, I was starting to think that you may have abandoned it, which would have been really sad, as this is like my favorite story.

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/24/07 6:15
Chapter: Dies Irae Part One

OHHHH! Hysterical Pettigrew?? UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 06/24/07 5:38
Chapter: Dies Irae Part One

Oh my gosh. You are dead! I can't believe you left us with that! What did we ever do to you? *cries*

Anyway, while she does that, I'll tell you how good a chapter this was. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Mistress of Potions
Date: 06/16/07 14:30
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

Will there be an update soon? This is one of my favorites so I get antsy waiting.

Reviewer: Natida
Date: 06/14/07 12:54
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

Oh lord! What is he going to do now?!!! I can't wait! Hurry up please Pallas, I've been looking at Imperius over and over again, but you haven't sent chapter 43!

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 06/12/07 0:22
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

Awesome! I'm a loyal fan.

Next chapter please, please, please!

Pax.

Reviewer: ThessalyRose
Date: 06/05/07 1:11
Chapter: Caged

Oh my goodness, I think "Caged" is your best chapter yet. "Do you smell blackcurrant?" is hilarious! JKR would totally have written that. I love it. And your characterization of Ron is great, too. "I got him! I got him! Did you see?" Lol.

What a rush, I've been up way past my bedtime reading this. I just adore all your work; keep on writing and update soon!

Reviewer: skywalker
Date: 05/31/07 12:53
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

I hate cliffhangers! Go on, give us the next chap! This is amazingly awesome. :D

Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 05/29/07 12:14
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

Damn, I thought Pettigerew would kill him.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 05/29/07 1:04
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

Remus is so brave! He is amaizing and your story is awesome! What is peter going to do? will he have an attack of conscience? I can hardly wait for more!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/28/07 10:47
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

ACK!!! That is such a CRUEL ending! I so hope that Peter still has something in him that will keep him from doing more harm to Remus! There has to be a way out for Remus. The others are trapped, and no Remus is unconscious with Peter right there!! PLEASE update soon! Cyns

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/28/07 8:12
Chapter: Man In Wolf's Clothing

oh no oh no oh no!

only your story has been able to keep me completly wondering what's going to happen next, while most other storys don't have that cliff-hanger at the end of just about every chapter.

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 05/17/07 22:39
Chapter: Buried Deep

So good! Every chapter you write is powerful. And thank you for updating so fast. It means alot to your fans. I want to know what is going to happen (cause you are a master of cliff hangers) and you keep the chapters coming. Awesome!
This story gets a 10/10. No criticisms.

Pax.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/16/07 10:25
Chapter: Buried Deep

That rat got away? Darn it!! I hope that someone is able to catch up to him. I also hope that Remus is able to hold his own again Dolph. It does make sense that he would be able to control his wolf form better then Dolph. Great idea!! I look forward to reading what comes next! Cyns

Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 05/15/07 10:08
Chapter: Buried Deep

very good

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 05/15/07 5:47
Chapter: Buried Deep

oh no. shaklebolt better show soon.

Reviewer: miss padfoot
Date: 05/08/07 21:49
Chapter: Caged

Wow. Just wow.

OMG, Pallas, you’re such an amazing writer! I was like completely sucked into it! The plot is just so amazing! I never would’ve guessed Dolph! And, Wormtail as the one impersonating was right there, and I never caught it! Brilliant.

And I have to say: I totally loved your Remus. He’s just so in character, yet we get to see sides of him that we’ve never seen in canon – like how he feels about Tonks. He was just so wonderful! There are so many things that we about him – his Dad, for one. And then his extended family. All of that makes Remus a really fleshed out character. Great job!

And Tonks is just so cool! I love how she’s dedicated to Remus and likes him for what he is. Her loyalty to Remus is great, especially when it’s needed for him. =]

And the bunch of OC’s – right from Reynard to Rebekah to Dolph – each of them are recognisable as individual characters. I like Rebekah in particular, and how her attitude towards Remus changes in the last few chapters. =]

Speaking of this chapter alone, the first thing that comes to my mind is the humour.

Chilli and raspberry. Oh, Fred and George were going to suffer…

*giggles* In the midst of all the action, that was such a nice touch! =]

And the reference to Marauderism was guh, perfect!

A few things you might want to take a look at:

Perhaps left alone in an isolated room, the doses of Wolfsbane consumed earlier in the week might have helped to calm them.

I think the flow of the sentence will improve if you left out the ‘to’ after ‘helped’.

The brother and sister continued to move forwards at a leisurely, if nervous pace, flinching every so often as they passed the growling, snapping jaws of a caged werewolf.

LOL, I love how put that Amycus and Alecto are scared – that ties in nicely with their reaction towards Greyback in HBP. :) I think there should be a comma after ‘nervous’ though.

And lastly, I have only one thing to say: please update! :D

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 05/06/07 20:54
Chapter: Caged

ACK!!! Things just keep getting worse! I really hope that things start going well for our heros!! I look forward to the next chapter. Cyns

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 05/06/07 16:23
Chapter: Caged

So Amazing!

Reviewer: Sharn
Date: 05/06/07 13:35
Chapter: Caged

You'd think I'd be used to your cliffs by now.... Impatiently awaiting the next chapter.

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