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Reviews For Imperius

Name: Natida (Signed) · Date: 07/13/07 18:05 · For: Backlash
Yes! How do you write so well? I'm working on my own fic, but I dont think I'll ever be able to make my readers feel so excited! We love you, Pallas! Keep writing!

Name: jimrach (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 23:57 · For: Backlash
Argh! We need more on Remus and Tonks!! But the rest was absolutely smashing!

Name: Divess (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 21:49 · For: Backlash
You are magnificent. Wordy at times but totally magnificent. 1-45 Brilliant.

Name: charlie black (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 14:02 · For: Backlash
FINALLY! Peter's going to get what he deserves!

But what about Remus? he better not be dead...

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 07/07/07 21:38 · For: Backlash
boo-yah!!!! wooo for catching the rat! but Remus and Tonks, those poor poor souls, If he even has a soul left.

Name: Laurelyn (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 19:25 · For: Backlash
You know, I hate it when you leave us with cliffies. My climbing boots have gotten quite worn out since I started reading your stories.

Telling the story from Kingsley's point of view was brilliant. It fills in the gaps we would have had if you had just had Remus or Tonks wake up with no idea what had happened. And thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for having Harry capture Pettigrew! About time the Rat was caught!

Please give us a happy ending. Otherwise, I might just follow you to your secure bunker on Neptune...

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 13:07 · For: Backlash
Wow! at least one good thing happened!! It does seem right for Harry to have caught Peter! I want to know how Tonks and Remus are though! It will be interesting to see Reynard and the Tonks. Please update soon! Cyns

Name: CrazyChimp (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 12:51 · For: Backlash
YES!!!! About time that little, stinking traiterous rat was behind bars....even if said bars are a cage. But thats good enough for me! Keep it up, the story is getting really exciting!

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 6:58 · For: Backlash
Yea! But let Tonks and Remus be ok!

I thought telling this chapter from Kingsley's point of view was brilliant.

Name: TheTrioLivesOn (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 6:26 · For: Backlash
yay!!!! no more pettigrew! but what about remus and tonks?!!?!?!?! oh no!

hope you find time to update soon!

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 15:22 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
Triple ACK!!!! This is the worse cliffie so far!!!! I did love the conversation between Peter and Remus. I really hope Peter doesn't get away. Please update soon! Cyns

Name: fishstep (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 17:14 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
I love your work! Your writing is why I got hooked on fan fiction. But I, too, am confused by what exactly Tonks did with that last curse. Is Remus now dead?

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 12:57 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
Woah. I did not see that coming. wow. i don't know what to say.just... amazing!

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 12:49 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
I hope this isn't the end! I love this story!

Name: TheTrioLivesOn (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 6:56 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
EEEKKK!!! Tonks! Remus! Oh no!

*hides under the bed while fearfully awaiting the next chapter*

Name: FaunaCaritas (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 6:15 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
I really couldn't give you enough praise for your portrayal of Peter Pettigrew's character and motives in this chapter. I that have never read an explanation that I felt went straight to the heart of the matter. I do not honestly think JKR could offer better reasons for Wormtail's actions, and I do not say that lightly.

I was very sad that Remus couldn't forgive Peter. We all have faults, and this one was a natural one for Remus to have, but the most noble thing to do would have been to forgive Peter. Please so not think I do not want to see Pettigrew get his just reward! But forgiveness and justice can go hand in hand. It is then that we see the height of human virtue. Ok, ok, I will stop preaching now.This scene between Remus and Pettigrew is the finest example of your writing I have seen. You really have a turn for the serious side of a story.

I love this chapter, but I do have to come down hard on the ending. It was terribly confusing. First of all, it has been a very long time (in text rather then time) since we read your account of the effects of the Imperius curse on werewolves. As I remember it, the Imperius curse only works on werewolves who have lost their souls. Is that right? Does that mean that Remus is now souless? (Please no!) At first I thought the curse was meant for the Dementor. Anyway, I have no idea what happened there at the end of the chapter. Please, please, please clarify soon! And if you have dared to kill off Remus Lupin I will... let's just say you will need that rocket and bunker.

(Just kidding really. I love seeing authors do their own thing, but all readers have their preferences. Please don't think I am really serious.)

I can't wait for the next chapter.


Name: princessesierra (Signed) · Date: 07/02/07 2:46 · For: Dies Irae Part Two
Hey!!! The scene between Remus and Peter was really well done. But now I'm absolutely confused by the ending. Please update soon won't you?

Name: DobbyElf (Signed) · Date: 06/25/07 23:12 · For: Dies Irae Part One
I dont like this cliff b/c its so unrealistic...we all know you arent gonna kill remus

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 20:32 · For: Dies Irae Part One
I hate Pettigrew. I hate him so much. I hope you kill him off soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Name: I lovesmesomeHarry (Signed) · Date: 06/24/07 20:32 · For: Dies Irae Part One
I hate Pettigrew. I hate him so much. I hope you kill him off soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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