Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: undrtkr
Date: 11/17/06 17:01
Chapter: A Fresh Start

great story keep writing

Reviewer: twa80754
Date: 08/06/06 13:59
Chapter: A Fresh Start

i love the story. You are probablly the best author i have read yet.

Author's Response: Why, thank you!

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 03/29/06 16:44
Chapter: A Fresh Start

Okay never mind. I guess they deleted it because i read your comment. too bad.

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 03/29/06 16:06
Chapter: A Fresh Start

I really liked this story, and I was really glad when you put up the first chapter for the sequal. But yesterday I decided to see if yoou updated, but I couldn't find it! Did you quit writing it?

Author's Response: Yes, it sadly got deleted. It went on hiatus for a looong time... but now that book 6 is firmly in my mind, I'm working on the sequel again! Only this morning, I spend several hours on a new outline... Expect chapters soon.

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 03/28/06 17:31
Chapter: Prologue

I know this story is over, but where is the sequal? did you give up? when i click on the link in your profile, it leads to this weird thing with four different stories. I thought it was good.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 04/15/05 16:33
Chapter: A Fresh Start

NOOOOOO!!! Eh im over it. Excellent chapter, and now I have 2 things to look forward to! :-) -LilyPotter

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 04/15/05 16:23
Chapter: My Illusion

I wish she could stay (tear-sniff) 10. Great Idea for a spell, does it have a special name?

Reviewer: Scarlet Crystal
Date: 04/14/05 15:34
Chapter: A Fresh Start

{Posting this here} OKAY. I've decided that I won't have time to write the sequel before HBP comes out, and it would screw me up majorly to be in the middle of a fic and then learning all sorts of new stuff (hopefully). Therefore, I will not begin writing until after I've read book 6. I'm sure that makes sense, and I'm sorry to disappoint anyone.

Reviewer: Scarlet Crystal
Date: 04/14/05 15:34
Chapter: Prologue

OKAY. I've decided that I won't have time to write the sequel before HBP comes out, and it would screw me up majorly to be in the middle of a fic and then learning all sorts of new stuff (hopefully). Therefore, I will not begin writing until after I've read book 6. I'm sure that makes sense, and I'm sorry to disappoint anyone.

Reviewer: Kneazle731
Date: 04/14/05 2:28
Chapter: A Fresh Start

AH honey that was so good! It was, by far, the best chapter of the story. "Frell you." lol what does that mean anyway. agh i can't wait for the sequel now. yeah, go ahead and make the last chapter great so now dashykins has to wait for the sequel like a poor wittle puppy dog, and i bet you like it too. YOU ENJOY TORTURING ME YOU DIABOLICAL FIEND. ha. he. ho. other reviewers probably think i'm weird, and are probably wondering why you're friends with me (which we are. hey everybody, yeah that's right, i, the insane girl, am GREAT friends with scarlet crystal, so FRELL. YOU. PEOPLE.) have i sufficiently embarrassed you? i believe so. good day. -prickly-armed russian jew

Author's Response: *hides*

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 04/10/05 13:39
Chapter: A Fresh Start

Oh my god! i can't wait for the sequel! it is coming in a feew weeks right? or is it more? any way, it is so good!

Author's Response: I haven't started it yet, but I'm going to have a status of sequel to AFS on my author page for people to check. Thanks to all of my readers and reviewers!

Reviewer: shimizu
Date: 04/02/05 20:22
Chapter: The State of Things

its a very good story! i hope you put more chapter soon!

Author's Response: It's in the queue!

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 04/01/05 20:49
Chapter: The State of Things

I saw you were lacking some reveiws, so I decided to leave one. Will she be able to back to hogwarts? Great chapter, 10!!!

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 03/28/05 17:58
Chapter: The State of Things

I just read the whole story in one sitting and loved it. this is going on my favs list!!!!

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 03/28/05 16:27
Chapter: Lost in the Corridor

you confused me cause in the summary you wrote "Ginny is in awe of Ginny's accomplishments" I just wanted to let you know ;)

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 03/26/05 18:24
Chapter: Christmastime

miss me? great chapter(s)! 10!

Author's Response: I'm glad to have such a dedicated reader.

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 03/26/05 15:27
Chapter: Aunt Melinda

Great chapter! 10!

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 03/26/05 15:18
Chapter: Truth Takes Time

Awww! A tear-jerker! I love it! 10! Exclaimation point!

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 03/26/05 14:37
Chapter: The Hall Window

I agree with kewii. The characterization is wonderful, and I like how you didn't throw everything at us at once. 10 :-)

Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 03/26/05 14:22
Chapter: Prologue

OH...MY...GOSH...My MOM used to have a DOG named Misty! (no offense, i thought it was funny) Brilliant chapter, 3 guesses what the letter says. I will try to reveiw for each chapter, even though there is a ton, besides, summer vacation is almost here, and i will have more time. woah. holy run-on sentence. 10! :-)

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