Wonderful feel-good story.I've always admired and loved your writing style. You seem to say so many things in so few words. The story is very beautiful and descriptive, and yet it's easy for everyone to read and understand.
I loved how it turned out to be Hermione :-) I hadn't seen that one coming.
Amazing fic!! I liked your style. You described everything well, I could imagine myself there. Not all authors are the best at this, and I really liked how you portrayed everything. You put in a few metaphors and personifications in all the right places, and it turned the fic out nicely. I think that at the end, Hermione's words were a bit too dreamy. I would have put the same sentences down, but more subtly. I also like this whole plot. I wonder if Kingsley will tell her later....wonderful story, yet again. 10/10
Oh wow, that was very good, very different. I liked it a lot. The flow of words was very good, and I thought the message was wonderful.
First of all, I have to say I was really amazed by the fic. In the beginning, the plot seemed to be going nowhere, but at the end, it made perfect sense. Your writing style is really simple without any extravagant flowery words and it suits your style well. You do a lot of showing that helps move the plot along really well. And the basic message in your fic was good. Ron seemed a bit strange to me because of his constant complaining, and I felt that part was a bit overdone, but I see it was necessary. Overall, it was an excellent read!
Wow! This story really made me smile. And while I was reading through it, I kept thinking to myself- this is very nice but that kid doesn't sound like a 6-year old (I know- I've spent the last week teaching kindegarten). But you appeased me there at the end with the surprise that it was Hermione. I had no clue that was coming. I also loved the touches of humor- especially the line about a man missing his noise maker! Excellent work!
I love this story. I've read it about five times. It's so beautiful, how what Kingsley did for Hermione came full circle when they met later in life.
Wow...it was a very powerfull peice. I love the way it turned out to be none other than Hermione and how she remembers his words so clearly, but doesn't remmber him....=)
Wonderful story and such a beautiful sentiment. Fantastic work Seren!~~Kat
That was a beautifull story. Sometimes little gems like that drop in your lap right when you need them. For instance, when I try to remember what I work at a job that seems pointless. Answer: b/c then I can do volunteer work. Thanks Again!
