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Name: LovelyxLena (Anonymous) · Date: 11/13/06 19:13 · For: On a night just like this
*gulps lump in throat* I read this story once and I am surprised I didn't review before. This is such good writing! I personally don't think this situation will really happen since they are both so young and the series has to end in the seventh book. But besides that I love this fic! You are so descriptive, especially the end where you said "It was all over." Twice! Oh jeez! I can imagine it too. Like he's numb..

Name: wonwon_hermy (Signed) · Date: 08/14/06 18:08 · For: On a night just like this
wow great story alittle confusing at first but once i read it again it all made sense to me

Name: MarauderWannabe (Signed) · Date: 08/10/06 13:08 · For: On a night just like this
wow, really good, i didnt really like the lily and james part because it was a little out of canon for me, but i absolutely loved the part with harry and ginny!!

Name: FaunaCaritas (Signed) · Date: 08/09/06 4:11 · For: On a night just like this
Nice! I liked the idea of history repeating itself, but having a happy ending the second time around.

I had three suggestions, first, when you open the story you make it clear that day is dawning in Godric's Hollow. It seems a little odd that James and Lily are up at that hour 'putting the baby to sleep.' I've had experience with fractious one year-olds, and rarely do both parents get up at five thirty in the morning to cuddle by the fire while they get the baby back to sleep. (I guess what I'm saying is that I was a bit confused whether it was supposed to be morning or evening.)

Second, do you think Voldemort would give 'a soft knock' on their front door. I guess he might want to scare them, but it still seems out of character for him.

Third, when the story ended I was still wondering what had happened to Ginny and her baby girl. Are they ok? They fell down in the woods, and that is the last we heard about them.

I hope you like cc because it looks like I went a bit overboard in that department. Take care and keep writing.


Name: wolfdancer12 (Signed) · Date: 06/14/06 14:18 · For: On a night just like this
Wow!! That was really powerful! I love how you related the night of the Final Battle to the night Harry's parents were killed. But, what happens to Ginny? She's just running, how will she know he's dead?

Name: fairies_r_real (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 5:10 · For: On a night just like this
Wow!!! This is such a good story. I do think that it should be longer though. But, it's still a fantastic story. Full of love and pain . . .
x x x long live the fairies x x x

Name: amy4rupert (Signed) · Date: 05/26/06 16:26 · For: On a night just like this
great but i think you could add a bit at the end about ginny now voldemorts dead she can come back but we dont include her.Are you planning a sequel?I think you should about harry,ginny and the baby.

Name: alohamora90 (Signed) · Date: 05/15/06 17:13 · For: On a night just like this
It's different than most and yet still short and awesome. nice. I like it.

Name: Hero London (Signed) · Date: 03/10/06 18:28 · For: On a night just like this
I just have to say, I heaved a very deep sigh after reading your short story. Well done! I especially love Harry's victory (especially since I'm a Harry/Ginny shipper!)

Name: Benny (Signed) · Date: 01/01/06 9:49 · For: On a night just like this
Very good, I like how Voldemort's death is lead up to the best.

Name: longingforlight (Signed) · Date: 10/14/05 9:25 · For: On a night just like this
wow, very good!! i definitely liked the flow of action, it was very well written and worded!! the h/g time switch (or had it always been them) was very interesting, a tad confusing but good nonetheless. very good story, i liked it a lot!! -Chloe "Longing for Light"

Author's Response: Wow, your name is Chloe?! I love that name, and I used it in my most recent story, Not Our War, under Historical fics!

Name: muggledude (Signed) · Date: 10/13/05 23:51 · For: On a night just like this
That was good! I loved the part when it comes to Harry and Ginny's time. The story was a little wierd to me but it was still good.

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