it's really really good :D excellent job. Where is Of love and Destiny though? i can't find it :(
keep writing!!! dont stop!!!! NOT HAPPY!!!
Oh, but you can't put this story on pause! I was so happy when I saw you'd posted another chapter, I've been waiting for it for ages! I love the unspoken tension and attraction between Harry and Hermione, and I want to know what's wrong with Ron! And Death Eaters, in St Mungo's! You can't leave us hanging now, that's just cruel! =/ No, I'm sorry, I'm not going to pressure you... I know from experience that that only makes writing even harder. But please, try to update soon? I love this story! =)
Please update. Is so cruel to leabe us hanging. Seriosuly good story, well written. Try to be a bit more obvious about who is narrating when you switch as it can be a bit confusing.
This is a REALLY good fictional fiction! I highly advise the updating of this story. KEEP GOING!
fantastic............hope the harry / hermione action starts soon
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICTIONS I HAVE EVER READ..................................
This chapter was great, owing to the fact that you included a Death Eater. The plot was great and a Death Eater in St. Mungo's is really wicked.
This is a great beginning to the story. I particularly liked the part when Harry splinched himself doing that side apparation. It made me laugh so hard.
Wow awesome chapter!!!! I just loved it.... It's sooo sad... I wonder if Ron's going to be O.K..... Please update as soon as you find some time.... I can't wait to see if Hermione's going to call Harry....
It's really good! Are there lots of chapters on their way? Bloody Brilliant first chapter though!
Are more chapters on their way?
Author's Response: Technically, yes. I have loads of ideas buzzing around my head for this story, so I'm really excited about it. The problem is, school this year has been extremely demanding in almost every aspect. I've been studying and doing a lot of work, and when I'm not, I've been with family and friends. I haven't been writing at all. So, I'll post chapter two, which has been writen for quite a while, but for the next few chapters a long wait will ensue, I'm afraid. =)
Thanks for your support, though! =) It's great to hear you like the story, really.
This is an awsome chapter! Keep going. I really like it.
*Donut impression* AWESOME!!!!! WHO-DA_WHO!!!!!!!! Okay, down to buisness. This was a GREAT story!!! I like it, I was hoping for PWF, but this one is good enough. I like it. It has a mystery to it. Just personal thing, I don't want to sound weird, but when Hermione and Harry were talking about all that stuff, about her being lonely, I think Hermione wanted Harry to...you know...c'mon...you know! I'll leave that for interpretation, but c'mon, you know. Well, school is back in session, and you know (you know...) what that means, Homework, oh boy!!!! NOT!!!! I have so many book reports due, its not even funny! I liked this chapter, update as quickely as possible, I want to know what happens next. Rock, Rock On!!!! You rule as always. Aslo, my fic shall never be written, my writing is terrible and very bland, so, no fic, I'll just review! Till next time...
Another great story, Croyez! I've only read a few of your one-shots, and I thought they were wonderful, as well as this. I haven't read any multi-chaptered stories, so this will be interesting. You've got a great start to a story here, I'm a stubborn H/Hr-shipper and I love that you still write HBP cannon. The flashbacks are a great way of filling in the gaps. And, as always, your writing is wonderful =) Great job, can't wait to read the next chapter! 10/10
Very good, please write more soon I can't wait and you were right the flashback are great, can wait to know what really happen an If Hermione was then with Ron or only in the middele of choosing. I'm waiting to konw and I can't wait till they will be in Hogwatrs and the tension will be build up more:)) Update soon.
It's really good! Hope you update soon! :)