AHHHHHH!!! I love your story!! 10/10 please update soon!
Author's Response: thank you soo much! THANKS FOR BEING SUCH A LOYAL R AND R- ER! you were my first ever reviewer, i think! anyway, i should be able to update soon. I anticipate this story to be ABOUT 40 chapters long. give or take.
Very good! I like how you add in little details from theoriginal books (hangingby the ankle, Sectumsempra, etc. It took me a while to figure out how to reveiw. :-)
Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you! thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: OMG i just realized ur the author of one of my favorite favorite fics! I love I'll Hate you forever (I think)! You should all read it!
Great story, I can't wait for the next update ...
Author's Response: thank you sooooo much for reviewing! glad to know you care! ;>)
OMG i luv ur story so so so so so so so so so so so much:-) sorry i'm a really obssesed reviewer. he he! P.S: ummm, that is how u spell "obssesed"...right? PP.S: me luv story. PPP.S: nothing, i just like post scripts.
Author's Response: PLEASE STAY AN OBSESSED REVIEWER FOR ME!!!!! I LOVE OBSESSED REVIEWERS!!! and yes, you did spell obsessed right. p.s. thank you for loving my story! it is like my baby, i love it when people love it! chapter 5 is in queue, I hope it doesn't get rejected. pps- getting your chapter rejected is a major blow to the self-esteem. ppps- gotta go. my science homework awaits. ;))
Author's Response: sorry, you spelled it wrong my bad.
Author's Response: EVERYONE, CHAPTER FIVE IS NOW UP! PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! THANKS SOOO MUCH! ~luv, MK~
i was wondering if u could clear something up 4 me. in every fanfic i read it always says James has glasses. i have checked all the HP books and have never read anything that suggests that he had glasses when he was at school. Really great story! keep it up!!
Author's Response: James actually does not have glasses in the real books, i think. for some reason when i was writing that, i was just like, 'who cares what JKR wrote, i want him to wear glasses, darn it!' so he does, in my story. i really think he doesn't tho, in the books.
Oh no.... you made a mistake! you made a mistake! you made a mistake!! HeHe great chappie:-)
Author's Response: thanks. i'm sure it's the "lily potter" thing, I'm going to change that right now. see my response to loonymoony. THANKS FOR REVIEWING and chapter 5 is in queue. should be up very soon!
Author's Response: NEVER FEAR, LILY POTTER IS NOW BACK TO LILY EVANS. EVERYTHING IS BACK TO NORMAL!!!!!
You know you made a mistake? You wrote Lily Potter instead of Lily Evans, she wasn't a Potter until later and the professor wouldn't say Potter instead of Evans. But anyway, good job! Great chapter(s)!
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me!! I'm so embarrased. you know, I always notice that stuff when I'm reading someone else's but when it's mine it just goes right over my head! i guess i'm just so used to hearing Lily Potter cuz of the real books. I'm going to change that right now!
So far, your story is progressing nicely. This chapter definitely advances the movement of the relationships, but I was a little suprised by some of the reactions. I thought that the squealing of the seventh year girls about Cassie and Sirius might have been a bit overdone because they are seventh years. To me it almost seemed like the reactions of the first years to James were more mature than the reactions of the seventh years to the budding romance between Cassie and Sirius. However, I really like the way you have Lily reacting to James and how she is really the only one to pick up on his slightly odd behavior. You definitely highlight her quick mind with the connection she makes about the obituary being for James' dad. I look forward to seeing how her "discovery," as you titled the chapter, will affect the way she acts towards James. Keep up the good writing.
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing again!!!! i can understand what you mean about sirius/cassie and the squealing, but you have to think about sirius- he is hot and he has his own fanclub. he's kind of like a mini celebrity. also, Vega is more mature than most seventh years because of her older sister. (andy was not one of the squealers, she just really likes to gossip. hopefully she wouldn't be squealing about her own cousin, cuz that's just wrong.) anyhoo, I really appriciate your reviewing and I like to hear ways I can improve. I see what you mean on that stuff, and I will keep it in mind in later chapters. THANKS!!
I really like your opening chapter. Your two new characters really come to life along with the ones everyone knows. I like the interactions between everyone because they build a base as to what might be coming in later chapters. I will definitely keep reading as long as you keep writing.
Author's Response: thank you for your review! I appriciate it more than anyone can guess!!!!!
omg omg omg what's that supposed to mean? his dead dad disappears in the dream...does that mean lily will die too? well obviously not but will she come close? omg i need to know! darn suspision! update ASAP
Author's Response: well, she may... or maybe not. who knows? me, actually! but that will happen later in the story! I hope to update this week. thanks for reviewing again!!!
Author's Response: i can't string you along any longer. lily disappearing in his dream was just to show how totally alone he feels, and how he thinks Lily hates him. he doesn't think anyone understands, and in his dream he was hoping to find comfort in Lily but she just left him.... he's very alone. poor james! however, that doesn't mean the dream doesn't have another meaning james doesn't undersatnd!!!! lol and keep those reviews coming!
this one is sooo amazing! i cant believe im the first one to read it! umm to answer your question, im in sixth grade. and to be quite honest with you i find it hard to believe that your only in eigth grade i mean these chapters could have come straight out of the book!
Author's Response: thank you soooo much! You have NO idea how good it is to hear that!!! Chapter 4 got rejected TWO times for different reasons. I liked it, but whatever. And I wish I got to read Harry Potter in school!!! U R soo lucky!
u rok!! i love reading ur stories!!! they are like my hobby! i just want you to know that i think you are the coolest, most awesome writer in the world!! i printed out your chapters and showed them to my english teacher and she was extremley impressed... see were reading Harry Potter (or should i say the bible!) in school and when it ended we were thouroghly dissapointrd, but now i print out your chapters and mrs. mallsy rteads them to the class! i love u!omg!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm soooo flattered!!!! I can't believe you like my chapters that much! My chapter 4 got rejected today (it has to do with oompa loompas- don't ask!) I'll resubmit it in a few minutes, it should be up tomorrow. Thanks so much for your praise!!! Thank your english teacher too! ~MK~
Author's Response: I have a question for you- what grade are you in that you get to read Harry Potter? I am in 8th grade and 14- I just wanted to know what age group of people heard my story!!! :))) (don't worry- I'm not a stalker!)
Good job, that was cute! Please update soon!
Author's Response: thanks. i don't think it was as good as the other two, but it's just that chapter- don't worry! I had a brilliant idea for the plot yesterday, so the story now has a very real and defined ending! **cheers loudly** four will be up soon, I'm hoping to finish it today, 10/21. ta ta!
Author's Response: chapter 4 is in queue!
great story! how's lily going to react? how's james going to react? i want to know! lol i dont have any storied on here but i have some on harrypotterfanfiction.com under grape_2010
Author's Response: I really appriciate your review! I submitted chapter 3 yesterday, 10/19, so it should be up soon. You will see how they both react. It was really hard to write, so I hope you like it! I'll be sure to check your story out!
This is a really god story, I like the plot so far, The only thing is, just so that I know, did JK Rowling actually say that Lily was short, because it seems that in every story I read she is....Good story, update!!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing! I think she may have said that at some time or another, but it's just how I see her- small with a huge personality.
You did a wonderful job on the first two chapters! I love your story so far, it's great! I'm sure you'll write great upcoming chapters. Speaking of upcoming chapters, when are you updating? 10/10
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review!!! Actually I updated today! so it should be up this week. It's pretty short and I almost cried while writing it. but i'm really emotional, ya know, so you might think I'm crazy when you read it. But it was tough to get it right. Thanks again for the praise!
Author's Response: CHAPTER 3 IS UP!!!!!
Loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! I'm really excited to see how Lily acts towards James now that she knows what happened to his dad. 10/10--please update soon! (My story's called "Ending Up Together" if you want to read it [and hopefully review]! It's different from yours...but I hope you enjoy it)
Author's Response: I will definitly read your story and review, since yr so good about it! Gtg to bed now coz it's 11:30 and I'm sooo tired. I was just reading like 30 chapters of I'll Hate You Forever (I think). Good story. anyway, thanks for reviewing! And we will both have to see how Lily reacts, when I write chapter 3, hopefully by this time next week! I'm bad at planning ahead. :) anyway, I'll r/r and update soon.
That was excellent (told you i'd review)! Nice little twist having andromeda as lily's best friend
Author's Response: thx lydia! although andromeda is Tonks' mom and was sirius' favorite cousi, so I doubt she'd be too mean. maybe a little more than I wrote! :)) yr my third reviewer!
Author's Response: *cousin*
Hey Mk totally great keep it up. Its totally worthy of Five stars!!!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! guess what!!!! 24 reads!!! can't wait for yours! ttyl
Author's Response: sar- ch 2 is up. thx for telling me they wouldn't change the rating... my new bffs the mods did not!!! yay!!
I really enjoyed this story! I'm adding this on my favorites, just so you know, and please update SOON! 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you soooooo much! Next chapter is going to be called Malfoy's retreat (I think). You're the first person to review! For my first ever fanfic! Thank you!
Author's Response: sorry, Lily's POV got so long that I couldn't even insert Malfoy, let alone have him retreat! :)) I should be able to update today- I hope!