Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 01/28/12 2:47
Chapter: Of Faces and Burning Prefects

Brilliant start and very well written Zayne! I hope you post the next chapter soon. I absolutely love James/Lily and Marauder Era stories, this one is no exception. I do, however, think I've found a spelling mistake. The word 'being' is used towards the end of James' point of view when I think the word was meant to be ‘begin’. I am currently writing my own Marauder story and your story has inspired me. I hope to read more of your stories soon!

From Shelby of Hufflepuff

P.S. My little sister was wondering if your last name is 'Malik'! Please reply whenever you find the time.

Reviewer: Zoecster
Date: 02/11/07 15:46
Chapter: Of Faces and Burning Prefects

it was cool... some parts confusing but otherrrrwise nice well done

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 11/24/06 8:21
Chapter: Of Faces and Burning Prefects

Enjoyable and unpredictable.

Reviewer: Loup_garou
Date: 07/28/06 4:43
Chapter: Of Faces and Burning Prefects

This is a nice first chapter. It's at ease with its own pace and fleshes out the characters of Lily and James with a well-observed, humorous slant which is neither an attempted rewrite of the Potterverse nor a regurgitated version of what we already know. Keep it up!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/17/06 20:32
Chapter: Of Faces and Burning Prefects

Great job! Let me guess, James isn't in love with Lily yet? Update soon!

Reviewer: rileyowen
Date: 10/13/05 11:14
Chapter: Of Faces and Burning Prefects

i like this romance fic. So good! Keep writing. 10/10!

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