This is so not logical Hermione, but it's okay, because we still love her!! Nice chapter!!
Author's Response: Could you be logical in the face of Draco being pleasant and sitting on a hotel room bed? *winks* I'm glad you liked the chapter.
It is a little bit OOC, but whatever. It makes sense nevertheless. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. You've already seen the reason for the OOC-ness by now, but I hope it made sense after the fact.
Your cahpters are short, but they are so interesting and hold a lot of information! Great chapter.
Author's Response: I like short chapters. That's just me, though. Get as much information in as you can and get out. :)
*double sigh* Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
All I got is shameless praise. No constructive criticism, because it was a very good chapter. The OOC wasn't even that big. Great job!!!! ♥♥♥
Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you, I appreciate it.
I still find Malfoy a little awkward here, but it will all fall into place about ten chapters from now. :)
Yay, I love cliffhangers!! Even small ones like these. =]
Author's Response: Trust me, there are more cliffhangers to come. I was not overly popular when the story was incomplete and I left a few cliffies dangling. :)
Ooh, reminds me of the fifth book with Harry's dreams of the Department of Mysteries. Connection? Ahh, only you know I guess. Whatever. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Someone else mentioned that as well, but I will admit it wasn't a conscious connection. I'm glad it works, though. *shrugs happily*
loved it!it was such a good story!although, i thought u got a little to detailed when hermine& draco were in the hotel.other than that i thought it was great!:)
Author's Response: Well, it is rated 6th-7th Years for a reason. Thanks so much, though! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Sweet. I love HG/RW and HG/DM shipping, so this story will be awesome!
Author's Response: Excellent! Glad to have you aboard, then! :)
It's great. But why don't you continue it? I'm dying to know if Malfoy and Hermione get together. Love
Riana
Author's Response: Thanks, Riana, I'm glad you liked it.
As for continuing, for me this story has reached its end. I think I've said it before, but sometimes I think Draco and Hermione's relationship is at its best when they don't end up together. Hermione has figured out that Ron is the one for her and Draco is safe with the Order. I'm pretty sure that's all she wanted from the beginning and as long as she's happy, I'm happy. :)
I absolutely love your story. I have somewhat recently discovered the delights of Hermione/Draco fanfiction, and been on a Dramione kick ever since. But of course, I love Ron Weasley. And, as most of us have come to accept, he is the answer to the ever-puzzling question of which male character was meant for Hermione. Therefore, this story had plenty in it to entertain me. You are a fantastic writer, and you have a very realistic sense of the characters JKR has given us to play with, even when taking them out of cannon temporarily for your own purposes. Thank you for your cure for boredom on an average summer day.
Author's Response: OH! Dramione fics are so fun, aren't they? So glad to have you in the bizarre, little club of D/Hr and R/Hr shippers! I'm glad that you found quite a bit here to keep your fancy. This story certainly falls into that category!
Thanks so much for the compliments as well. I truly appreciate it. Even more so, I appreciate being able to fight off boredom! :D
this is superb and ofcourse i'm enjoying
Author's Response: I am very glad to hear it! I hope you enjoy it stright through to the end. :)
OMG! That whole entire story was wonderful! It wa one of the best hermione/Ron fanfic that i hve ever read!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! There are a ton of R/Hr fics out there, and most of them don't have complications in the middle involving a certain adorable blonde Slytherin, so that is really a nice compliment. I am very glad that you liked it!
Wow. This is an incredible story so far. I really love Chapter 2.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
OH MY GOSH!!!!! draco and hermione?????
Author's Response: You'll just have to keep reading to see for sure, but they are having a bit of a moment.
oh i sense a love triangle coming...ah poor hermione
Author's Response: Poor Hermione indeed - having the attentions of both Ron and Draco. Perish the thought! [/sarcasm] :)
im definately enjoying... cant wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Excellent! I'm glad to hear that.
I'm enjoying your story; the style is easy to read, everything is clear and direct but still entertaining. I found it interesting how Hermione's dreams seem a lot like Harry's in OotP.
Author's Response: Hmmm, those following the baddie dreams often resemble one another? Really, the similarity was not intentional!
I'm glad you're enjoying things so far, though. :)
this is the kind of fics that remind me im a Dr/Hr shipper 'til i die
it was nice while it lasted tough ´:D
great story
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)
so whens the new story coming out? i really enjoyed reading this and i want to see what else your going to write. hermione/draco maybe?
Author's Response: Well, surprisingly enough something else caught my fancy and it is with one of my betas now. A little, tiny Draco/Harry idea for something different. The big Hermione/Draco idea is still stewing and trying to work out the details, though I did start writing. I really hope to be able to get that going in the next month or so.
In the meantime, "What Is Real" has been nominated for a Multifaceted award! I must admit, I am psyched. I've put a link on my author page - there's some really great stuff there (including some MNFF authors) if you're looking for more reading. Cheers!