Reviews For What is Real
Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 02/06/06 19:43
Chapter: Home from Hogwarts

omg, this story is amazing!!! one comment: for a story about ron/hermione, we're not seeing much of ron.

Author's Response: Thanks, hpboy13! This story is only about half completed, there's still plenty of time for Ron to come into the picture. I know I keep saying it, but I really have not forgotten about him (not even close)! :)

Reviewer: LuckyRatTail
Date: 02/04/06 10:02
Chapter: An Answer

Another subtly crafted piece - more of a lyric chapter than something to move the plot along. I like the way you're making them seem like a real couple, but (my infernal pessimism again, sorry) I have a horrible feeling that you're merely raising them up to bring them crashing down... Great stuff, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks, as always, LuckyRatTail. Just a bit of character development this chapter and next. Then I think I'll unleash the melodrama. :)

Reviewer: lovinsirius
Date: 02/02/06 7:48
Chapter: An Answer

mcgonagall in a new hat???...wow!!!

Author's Response: Hey, you never know. . .

Reviewer: Hermines twin
Date: 02/01/06 6:55
Chapter: The Unbelievable

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i just love your story!!! :D well rons out of the pic. i wonder how hell take it and will they(the order) keep draco and his mother safe? anyway love this chapter as well as the other1s!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!!1000*10

Author's Response: Oh, don't count Ron out just yet! *evil author laugh*

Chapter 10 is still in the queue, sorry for the delay. The mods must be really busy!

Reviewer: EvilRockess
Date: 01/26/06 18:01
Chapter: The Unbelievable

Ok there's only one thing to say. TOTALLY AWSOME!! I've been reading your story for a while now but i just got an account so now i can review YAY! Your story was the first Hermionie/Draco story I read and now I'm hooked, meanwhile the Ron and Hermionie shippers update i spend my time swirling around a daring couple. And its all thanx to you. Hope you update soon so i can read! *Does victory Dance) 10/10 my friend! and you deserve it! :-)

Author's Response: Aww, this makes me so happy! :) I dragged someone into D/Hr land - yay! They are such a fun couple to write. I'm glad you're enjoying reading as much as I enjoy the writing.

FYI - Chapter 10 is in the queue. . .

Reviewer: forgotten_poems
Date: 01/24/06 17:28
Chapter: The Unbelievable

It's up!! *sqeeeeeeeee* Now on to the actual review: I felt that it was very tastefully done; I can't tell you how many fics I've read that had every miniscule detail of it, but that's usually just some angsty teen trying to get attention. You told us enough to get the idea, but left out the right amount to hook the reader. This can be very hard to do with potentially graphic scenes, I know from experience. You managed to do it with them still in character, which is a point that escapes many D/Hr authors. I don't think you've offended any R/Hr shippers, but I'm all for Leather and Libraries, so I could be biased. :-)

Author's Response: Well, I can say for certain that I am not angsty, nor am I a teen. LOL! :)

Seriously, I was concerned about this chapter so I'm glad to hear that it wasn't too much. I can appreciate a graphic love scene, if it's well written, but that's just not my writing style. I think that leaving as much to the reader's imagination as possible makes for a more intriguing scene. Especially with characters like Draco and Hermione - that's half the fun of the ship! It's all fanon imagination! Keeping everybody in character is a struggle, but I have to say songbook99 slaps my hand every time so I've got a good beta to keep me in line. Poor Ron, I really didn't forget about him. In a few more chapters he'll be around in full force and then we'll get into my favorite canon ship. *sigh* I'm such a ridiculous shipper. . .

Reviewer: LuckyRatTail
Date: 01/20/06 12:30
Chapter: The Unbelievable

Potentially awful... but, of course, not. Well done, look forward to the next chapter. ;o)

Author's Response: Fabulous! I was really nervous about this chapter - not because of you specifically, LuckyRatTail, but overall - because I thought it could be a disaster. I'm glad you liked it, I hope everyone else still reading does too. *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: flossie
Date: 01/17/06 10:27
Chapter: Some Discussion

I found your story very entertaining and greatly satisfying. As I long for the next book in the series, your story seemed to temporarily quench my thirst. This is my favourite chapter as it made me laugh out loud. You set the mood perfectly. It's hilarious how draco keeps smiling at hermione, ha ha ha! Like when they were lying on the bed and she looked over and his head was really close, and he smiled. Another bit that made me laugh was how well you worded the bit about him saying he won't peek, though he seems like someone who would. The way you portray Draco is very attractive and now I actually like his character as you have made the continuation so believable. The transition through chapters is smooth, yet suspensful. I can tell you are a great fan of J. K. Rowling as you write alot like her. I found your story as enjoyable as hers.

Author's Response: Thanks, flossie, that is a huge compliment! I'm glad you are enjoying the story and it's making the wait for Book 7 a little less painful. That's one of my big reasons for writing, too.

I'm also glad that you are starting to like Draco. I love him for his complexity and attitude. The more people I can turn over to the "love Draco" camp the happier I am! :)

Reviewer: Hermines twin
Date: 01/09/06 10:32
Chapter: Some Discussion

i just read your story all of it today its absolutley fantastic!!!!!!!!! i would give you a 100 but scence i cant 10/10 UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!:D

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it, Hermines twin! Chapter 9 is in the queue. . .

Reviewer: AuraS
Date: 01/08/06 1:20
Chapter: Some Discussion

I'm new here and this is one of the first stories that I read. Very well written, just excellent all around. Can't wait for the rest. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: A newbie! Yay! Welcome and thanks for comments.

Reviewer: forgotten_poems
Date: 01/04/06 0:09
Chapter: Some Discussion

Yay, chapter 8! Come on people, victory dance with me! But that cliffhanger...such a cliffhanger should be illegal but I can wait. So when's Ron going to come back into the story?

Author's Response: Yay!! *dances because readers actually dance for updates*

Sorry for the ridiculous cliffie but it just worked so well. Chapter 9 is with my beta now for intesive review (given upcoming subject matter). We won't see Ron for another few chapters but he's lurking. First we're going to find out what exactly is going on with Draco - another cliffie, I know, sorry!

Reviewer: dixylixy
Date: 01/03/06 17:37
Chapter: Some Discussion

that is an awesome story keep up the good work. it is very interesting and greatly written.

Author's Response: Thanks, dixylixy! Glad you're enjoying - please keep reading! :)

Reviewer: LuckyRatTail
Date: 01/02/06 2:57
Chapter: Some Discussion

Very interesting... fabulously portrayed and very subtle (totally devoid of cheese!). I might be completely wrong here, but I now have serious suspicions about Draco's intentions, especially with the sudden appearance of those injuries... Oh well, will just have to wait and see. Beautifully done.

Author's Response: Oh good, no cheese this time around! :)

Still doubting Draco, I see. In my head, he isn't always the bad guy but he does bring a lot of mess along with him. So there's your little hint, if that makes any sense. *evil author grin*

Reviewer: LunaLady92
Date: 12/29/05 8:49
Chapter: The Hotel Room

wow! it was really gd! can't w8 for the next chapters! Way 2 go! Keep up the good work! 10/10

Author's Response: Cool! You liked it so much your computer double-posted?! Hee!! :)

I hate when that happens. . .

Reviewer: LunaLady92
Date: 12/29/05 8:47
Chapter: The Hotel Room

wow! it was really gd! can't w8 for the next chapters! Way 2 go! Keep up the good work! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks, LunaLady92! The next chapter is currently waiting in the queue so keep checking back.

Reviewer: Applekissis
Date: 12/10/05 11:25
Chapter: The Hotel Room

brillant...Cant wait for more...I like this story so far..Its really good!

Author's Response: Thanks, again, Applekissis. I probably won't have Chapter 8 up until after the holidays, but I am working on it!

Reviewer: forgotten_poems
Date: 12/04/05 12:27
Chapter: The Hotel Room

Hi! I haven't had a chance to review since the first chapter but ooh, how suspenseful...

Author's Response: Glad you're still reading, forgotten_poems!

Reviewer: LuckyRatTail
Date: 11/30/05 11:15
Chapter: The Hotel Room

Wow...can't wait for the next chapter! I love the idea of someone like Draco watching reality tv. I did think the 'having to share a bed' thing was a little cheesy but...who cares! Update soon!

Author's Response: Hahaha! A little side of cheese with the story, LuckyRatTail? I must admit, I feel a little bad. I really like that line! Well, I'll try to keep the cheese to a minimum in the future.

As for Draco and the TV, yeah, I thought he'd enjoy some reality programming. It's just ridiculous enough for someone who doesn't like Muggles to find amusing. :)

Reviewer: Prefect1991
Date: 11/28/05 21:50
Chapter: Making Sense of It All

Great chapter, and great story!! Keep this story going!! Great work...

Author's Response: Hey, thanks, Prefect1991! The next chapter is in the queue, so check in soon for the update.

Reviewer: Applekissis
Date: 11/23/05 0:42
Chapter: Making Sense of It All

Bravo!!!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks!

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