Reviews For A Second Task
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/28/07 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1: Back Again

This seems really good, hope the next chapters up soon. I'd like to think that Draco will change his mind about kidnapping Ginny once he's spent time with her, Ron and Hermione. I think he'll like the feeling of being trusted or at least having genuine people on his side and will opt to help them. Either that or his plan will take so long that it'll give Harry enough time to defeat Voldemort and kidnapping Ginny will be pointless. Sorry, I just love to speculate, not to worry, I'm usually wrong.

Reviewer: dragon mystique
Date: 10/11/06 22:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: Back Again

Wow... I really enjoyed this. I can't wait to see how Draco's plan works out. I think this is one of the few 'book 7' type stories I've read where only two of the Trio return to Hogwarts. Usually it's just the girls or everyone comes back after some epic battle over the summer and everything is just dandy afterwards. I'm really looking forward to how you continue with this plot. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 06/12/06 11:53
Chapter: Prolouge:

Great start. Let me take a stab at what you are doing with the opening. If Draco goes to The Order, they may or may not help. If he succeeds and takes Ginny, the Dark Lord will reward him. We all know what will happen IF he fails. So what will you do during the course of this story? I'm thinking of writing one myself about Bellatrix and her (hidden love)? for YOU KNOW WHO.

Reviewer: The Minister of Darkness
Date: 10/09/05 15:25
Chapter: Prolouge:

Very good setup. The only problem is that I couldn't see the image in my head. It was very good though. I expect a lot from this story.

Reviewer: The Minister of Darkness
Date: 10/09/05 15:25
Chapter: Prolouge:

Very good setup. The only problem is that I couldn't see the image in my head. It was very good though. I expect a lot from this story.

Author's Response: Thank you. This prolouge was mainly meant for understanding the situation Draco has placed himself in and the setting wasn't all to important to me. I enjoy writing more or less about the opinions and views of characters, but you will find that the rest of the story is written in a slightly different style than this part. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. ~Undividable

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