Reviewer: shrim5191
Date: 03/18/07 18:37
Chapter: Chapter 28

where is the next chapter? i love the story. a little grown up, but ok.
jacki

Reviewer: georgiegirl15
Date: 03/04/07 12:44
Chapter: Bad Memories

Got this far. Couldn't bear to go any further. Plot not coherent, characters poor - draco? please..... just getting worse.

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 01/31/07 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 28

You aren't ending it, then? Wicked! I like the way you got rid of the horrid baby and left room for Ron to comfort her. (And maybe fill the baby void...)

*grins wickedly* However...You forgot about Albus. Or Fwakes. Whatever he's going by nowadays. The last time we mentioned him was at the reading of Dumbledore's will...

Reviewer: Sage_1986
Date: 01/17/07 4:16
Chapter: Confusion

i had too read this chapter several time and to tell you the truth i didnt like it at first but you did a damn good job on the entire story and i agree that this chapter is nesscary to the plot i like it and hope you write more

Reviewer: Sage_1986
Date: 01/17/07 4:16
Chapter: Confusion

i had too read this chapter several time and to tell you the truth i didnt like it at first but you did a damn good job on the entire story and i agree that this chapter is nesscary to the plot i like it and hope you write more

Reviewer: Sage_1986
Date: 01/17/07 4:16
Chapter: Confusion

i had too read this chapter several time and to tell you the truth i didnt like it at first but you did a damn good job on the entire story and i agree that this chapter is nesscary to the plot i like it and hope you write more

Reviewer: The Marauderettes
Date: 01/15/07 13:12
Chapter: Confusion

We absolutely hate the idea of Draco/Hermione! The idea of them together makes us want to throw up! And yet, you wrote this chapter very well. Good job!

-Hermione (AKA Hannah)-

&

~Luna (AKA Marni)~

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 01/07/07 2:08
Chapter: Love or Lust

No offence i really don't like the way Draco Malfoy is there i really hate that they had sex(hermione and draco)it just doen't seem right and god these people are obviously really having fun being alone that's like three people having sex in a 5 hour period and thank you for having hermione chose ron that is so much better please make malfoy disappear i really don't like him in any way!!!
~lucky Girl~

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 01/07/07 2:07
Chapter: Love or Lust

No offence i really don't like the way Draco Malfoy is there i really hate that they had sex(hermione and draco)it just doen't seem right and god these people are obviously really having fun being alone that's like three people having sex in a 5 hour period and thank you for having hermione chose ron that is so much better please make malfoy disappear i really don't like him in any way!!!
~lucky Girl~

Reviewer: Frenchfan
Date: 12/09/06 12:51
Chapter: Familiar Faces

Your story is quite good, except I think your characters, apart from the central foursome, are slightly out of character. For instance, I don't think Moody's reaction at learning the whole Weasley family has gone missing for several days would be '[...]'sorry I couldn't be of more help[...]''.
On the other hand I apreciate that you got quickly into action, I hate it when it takes ages for anything to happen!
So overall, good story! Keep it up.

Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 11/09/06 14:10
Chapter: Final Farewells

yay, i really like this story, great job!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 10/26/06 22:22
Chapter: Chapter 28

PLEASE PUT IN MORE!!! I WILL DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!!!! (dies a very overdramatic and obviously fake, but funny, death)

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 10/26/06 21:51
Chapter: Knowledge, Power and Pain

HOORAY! It is Harry's! (does a celebratory dance and sings nonsensically)

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 10/26/06 21:37
Chapter: Old Times

It's really Harry's baby isn't it? Yay! I love this story. You have great ideas!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 10/22/06 11:19
Chapter: St. Mungo's Revisited

What will happen 2 Lupin??? He's my fafourite character, I LOVE him!!!10/10

Reviewer: shocka4eva
Date: 10/07/06 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 28

omg

Reviewer: MrsHarryPotter23
Date: 09/28/06 16:39
Chapter: Chapter 28

Hi. This story was just so crazy that i hasd to read more. When is the next chapter coming out? It is Killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HP_romance_13
Date: 09/06/06 14:51
Chapter: Old Times

im really enjoying your story. the only thing i was wondering about was how the characters could yell in the house with mrs. black's portrait.
just a thought.
xoxo HP_romance_13

Reviewer: Darth Bane
Date: 08/20/06 17:05
Chapter: Confusion

Very good

Reviewer: CannonChaser
Date: 08/09/06 21:37
Chapter: Chapter 28

that was a flippin' short chapter!!!!!!!

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