where is the next chapter? i love the story. a little grown up, but ok.
jacki
Got this far. Couldn't bear to go any further. Plot not coherent, characters poor - draco? please..... just getting worse.
You aren't ending it, then? Wicked! I like the way you got rid of the horrid baby and left room for Ron to comfort her. (And maybe fill the baby void...)
*grins wickedly* However...You forgot about Albus. Or Fwakes. Whatever he's going by nowadays. The last time we mentioned him was at the reading of Dumbledore's will...
i had too read this chapter several time and to tell you the truth i didnt like it at first but you did a damn good job on the entire story and i agree that this chapter is nesscary to the plot i like it and hope you write more
i had too read this chapter several time and to tell you the truth i didnt like it at first but you did a damn good job on the entire story and i agree that this chapter is nesscary to the plot i like it and hope you write more
i had too read this chapter several time and to tell you the truth i didnt like it at first but you did a damn good job on the entire story and i agree that this chapter is nesscary to the plot i like it and hope you write more
We absolutely hate the idea of Draco/Hermione! The idea of them together makes us want to throw up! And yet, you wrote this chapter very well. Good job!
-Hermione (AKA Hannah)-
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~Luna (AKA Marni)~
No offence i really don't like the way Draco Malfoy is there i really hate that they had sex(hermione and draco)it just doen't seem right and god these people are obviously really having fun being alone that's like three people having sex in a 5 hour period and thank you for having hermione chose ron that is so much better please make malfoy disappear i really don't like him in any way!!!
~lucky Girl~
No offence i really don't like the way Draco Malfoy is there i really hate that they had sex(hermione and draco)it just doen't seem right and god these people are obviously really having fun being alone that's like three people having sex in a 5 hour period and thank you for having hermione chose ron that is so much better please make malfoy disappear i really don't like him in any way!!!
~lucky Girl~
Your story is quite good, except I think your characters, apart from the central foursome, are slightly out of character. For instance, I don't think Moody's reaction at learning the whole Weasley family has gone missing for several days would be '[...]'sorry I couldn't be of more help[...]''.
On the other hand I apreciate that you got quickly into action, I hate it when it takes ages for anything to happen!
So overall, good story! Keep it up.
yay, i really like this story, great job!
PLEASE PUT IN MORE!!! I WILL DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!!!! (dies a very overdramatic and obviously fake, but funny, death)
HOORAY! It is Harry's! (does a celebratory dance and sings nonsensically)
It's really Harry's baby isn't it? Yay! I love this story. You have great ideas!
What will happen 2 Lupin??? He's my fafourite character, I LOVE him!!!10/10
Hi. This story was just so crazy that i hasd to read more. When is the next chapter coming out? It is Killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im really enjoying your story. the only thing i was wondering about was how the characters could yell in the house with mrs. black's portrait.
just a thought.
xoxo HP_romance_13
that was a flippin' short chapter!!!!!!!
