It was okay, the death of malfoy jr. was kind of sad though
I like the story. Just like malfoy to 'use' ginny for sex. Kill him
YAY back to the story! Dankashane (Thanks) sorry for going mental on you earlier.
Hermione "sleeping" with draco was complete and total RUBBISH. I felt sick!!!!!!! How could you write that! (I'm sorry you prob. got tons of hate mail. I hate, hate mail. But these are my feelings, pleez pllleeeezzzzzzz, write draco/hermione stuff in that catagory) SORRY
oh it better be harry's cos i can't stand draco and ginny
“Hmm, I have no idea what it would be like to be on the top of every dark wizard’s hit list and try to lead a normal life!” Harry replied sarcastically. “I’m sure they’re way more interested in killing you than The Boy Who Lived To Be A Right Pain in Voldemort’s Ass.” He raked his fingers through his hair.
Funny! i like that line, most likely my fave. one in whole story! Keep it up! woo-hoo! yes, i am a bit random sometimes...
Forget about the accident, if Hermione is preg. with Draco's kid, have her fall down some stairs. i know, cliche, but it's the easiest solution for your problem.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! but cool problem. this is the time to get into an 'accident' right about now, but, the chapter is already out so i can only hope... oh well, till next time! wow, no criticism in this review...
Draco raised his wand and yelled “Avada Kedavra” just as Hermione yelled “Protego”. The Killing Curse rebounded off of the baby’s shield and blasted a whole in the wall behind Draco as he dodged out of the way.
“Hermione! What did you do that for?” Draco bellowed angrily.
“Because he’s only an innocent baby. And the Killing Curse is illegal, Draco!” Hermione shot back.
Okay, part one. the Killing curse CAN'T be blocked! part two, Everyone seems to be using the Unforgivable curses, so why stop now. and Voldemort would make his Horcrux more of a challenge to get and make it life threatening, like in book six and the fake horcrux.please, i beg of you, check the books of things you aren't so sure about and stuff!!!
now my horrible ranting is over, here are the good things! i like the whole 'Horcrux, baby' combo, not many people would kill a baby. the whole thing a few chapters ago with Hermione and Draco was interesting and stuff. well, keep it up!
I'm sorry, but i just can't believe that HERMIONE would use the CRUCIATUS CURSE on somebody! I'm sorry, but i think that Harry, Ron and Hermione would use any of those curses on anybody, even Death Eaters. it's all OOC and your writing is, well, not to be rude, but, it lacks believability and no one would just brush off the information of a phoenix living with them. I'm sorry, but you need to fix it a bit; write as if it's for J.K. Rowling and you want to be a Ghostwriter for her and your turning in your best work. i like the plot line and things, but do try to keep everything on what J.K. Rowling has provided for us. Luv, Little Old Me
dodgey cahpter u should have a real warning on that 1!! its a bit graphic!!!!!
Update Please I've Waited ForAlmost 10 Months 2More =1Year=(
please rite the next chapter. the story is so good! Its so awesome, can't wait for next chapter, don't give up on the story, everyone loves it!
please please please hurry up and rite a nu chapter i wanna no mor!!! Hana-Lou x
It was different, but I was really curious. The reviews let you know people are reading. Good or bad. Don't get aggitated, finish your story. It's yours, and I have a feeling you chaged a lot of it to make others happy... JKR keeps everyone on the egde of their seat. There is slways dispair. I seriously doubt Harry & Ginny will be together in book seven.... Unless, he realizes that love is the most powerful weapon he has....
where is chapter 29? i love the wrighting but i need more.
shrim5191
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
