Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 06/17/08 16:27
Chapter: Another Battle

isnt it the summer holidays? why would students be there?

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 06/17/08 16:22
Chapter: Familiar Faces

tolks, remus, and moody didnt even seem worried! i would be worried and i'd help them look! i mean, for goodness sake, they went missing!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 06/17/08 16:17
Chapter: Dumbeldore Was Wrong

ok, im really sorry but ur writing is very unrealistic and u dont explain everything enough. its very hard to folow and i cant picture any of the scenery.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 06/17/08 16:09
Chapter: The Search Begins

your story has too much conversation. it doesnt descride the cenery of anything enough. i just cant picture it, is all.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 06/17/08 16:01
Chapter: Dark Surprises

that chapter went way too fast! its like you shoved it all into a few small paragraphs! it was really hard to keep up!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 06/17/08 15:55
Chapter: Final Farewells

im sorry but that chapter seemed so unrealistic! especially the beginning with ron, hermione, and ginny.

Reviewer: HannahBabes
Date: 05/24/08 7:56
Chapter: Chapter 28

please write more its a very interesting story

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 10/11/07 16:07
Chapter: The Search Begins

It was good, but Mrs. Weasley relented too easily...

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 10/09/07 11:15
Chapter: Dark Surprises

oms.... Mundungus... w0w.

oms: Oh My Severus

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 10/09/07 11:03
Chapter: Final Farewells

Great start, but Ginny has to be apart from harry. They can't just get back together so fast.

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/30/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 28

i would realy lik the next ch. please

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/30/07 6:06
Chapter: Old Times

well i hav a good idea that the child is not Malfoy's but harry's..........or maybe by some freak accident......... both?

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/29/07 18:33
Chapter: Dreadful Deeds

GGRRRRRRRRRRR.................................i can not believe that u had gin sleep w/ draco that is just............ .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..wrong is the only word that i can come up w/ i hope u hav her hav a miss crage or something

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/29/07 18:25
Chapter: Surprises of a Different Kind

ya no,the fact that i put up w/ Dr/Hr thing was one thing but an ALMOST Dr/Gn thing i just could not continue reading this story its realy good but that is just crossing the line if u ask me sorry if i sound lik an ass b/c of this:):):)

Reviewer: danielsgirl
Date: 08/21/07 20:05
Chapter: Chapter 28

Hiya!!!!

I love your fanfic. It's awesome! I want a sequal please!

Reviewer: Antonio
Date: 08/20/07 14:12
Chapter: Chapter 28

I wish you'd update, this is a remarkable story... like what you said: a 'tele-novela', or a T.V. show full of problems. This story is pretty cool, and though it's not funny, it's still full of unusual problems - cool still. I'm not berating you but PLEASE update!

Reviewer: CLL042
Date: 07/13/07 23:51
Chapter: Final Farewells

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS STORY IS GREAT
U GOTTA FINISH IT!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: litfreak81
Date: 07/05/07 9:19
Chapter: Chapter 28

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL AND I HAVE BEEN ON TENDERHOOKS FOR MONTHS!! UPDATE!
UPDATE!...please.

Reviewer: hermione610
Date: 06/23/07 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 28

I have enjoyed reading what you have wriiten of this story so far! I do hope that you will continue to write when you have the chance!

Reviewer: AIMAddict
Date: 06/10/07 14:07
Chapter: Chapter 28

This chapter is really good!

This story is great kepp going with the story

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