isnt it the summer holidays? why would students be there?
tolks, remus, and moody didnt even seem worried! i would be worried and i'd help them look! i mean, for goodness sake, they went missing!
ok, im really sorry but ur writing is very unrealistic and u dont explain everything enough. its very hard to folow and i cant picture any of the scenery.
your story has too much conversation. it doesnt descride the cenery of anything enough. i just cant picture it, is all.
that chapter went way too fast! its like you shoved it all into a few small paragraphs! it was really hard to keep up!
im sorry but that chapter seemed so unrealistic! especially the beginning with ron, hermione, and ginny.
please write more its a very interesting story
It was good, but Mrs. Weasley relented too easily...
oms.... Mundungus... w0w.
oms: Oh My Severus
Great start, but Ginny has to be apart from harry. They can't just get back together so fast.
i would realy lik the next ch. please
well i hav a good idea that the child is not Malfoy's but harry's..........or maybe by some freak accident......... both?
GGRRRRRRRRRRR.................................i can not believe that u had gin sleep w/ draco that is just............ .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..wrong is the only word that i can come up w/ i hope u hav her hav a miss crage or something
ya no,the fact that i put up w/ Dr/Hr thing was one thing but an ALMOST Dr/Gn thing i just could not continue reading this story its realy good but that is just crossing the line if u ask me sorry if i sound lik an ass b/c of this:):):)
I love your fanfic. It's awesome! I want a sequal please!
I wish you'd update, this is a remarkable story... like what you said: a 'tele-novela', or a T.V. show full of problems. This story is pretty cool, and though it's not funny, it's still full of unusual problems - cool still. I'm not berating you but PLEASE update!
THIS STORY IS GREAT
U GOTTA FINISH IT!!!!!!!!
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! THIS STORY IS WONDERFUL AND I HAVE BEEN ON TENDERHOOKS FOR MONTHS!! UPDATE!
I have enjoyed reading what you have wriiten of this story so far! I do hope that you will continue to write when you have the chance!
This chapter is really good!
This story is great kepp going with the story