Reviewer: TantePotter
Date: 01/30/06 6:31
Chapter: Loss of Hope

I haven't read this story, I just wanted you to know that writing that you won't update until you get so and so many reviews actually might scare readers away from your fic! I know I won't read a story when the writer is demanding reviews like you are... And that's a pity, from the summary, your story sounds like an interesting one.

Reviewer: Sydney McLeod
Date: 11/03/05 17:55
Chapter: Fate

It's really good! Sarah is one of the few original characters I've seen that isn't a Mary Sue. Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to make Sarah her own person. I think her personality overall, is a little cryptic. I don't think she's the kind of person that you would meet everyday. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tyco622
Date: 10/30/05 11:01
Chapter: Fate

katelyn! fabulous! btw, turns out i didn't have an account...i kno i had one on the main mugglenet site...maybe it just doesn't work here. w/e. ttyl

Author's Response: lol thanks! see you soon! thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: snufflesismyidol
Date: 10/28/05 20:04
Chapter: Fate

Incredible job, Kate! I still really like Sarah, I hope you develop her character really well! 10/10 ~Carolyn

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And thanks again for helping me make chapter 4 great!

Reviewer: snufflesismyidol
Date: 10/27/05 16:57
Chapter: Loss of Hope

Hey Kate! You're doing a great job, keep it up! 10/10, of course! ~Carolyn

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review and thank you so much for helping me with the story! You're awesome!!

Reviewer: TTOOMMYY11
Date: 10/22/05 14:19
Chapter: Trapped

Wow i read the first 3 chapters and was flabbergasted! This is a great fic and you could really make something out of this!! Just every once in a while watch for repetitive words. Thats about it! But great job! I could really feel all the characters moods going through me. Update!!

Author's Response: That's great! Thanks for the advice. Chapter four is all written and I'm just correcting a few mistakes, so it shouldn't be too long. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for the review. =)

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 10/21/05 21:42
Chapter: Darkness

A bit AU, especially jumping in with the Dursleys, but interesting.

Author's Response: Yes, I agree. Everything will be explained as the story progesses, however. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 10/21/05 21:37
Chapter: Loss of Hope

I like your story. It seems a little rushed, but it led me on and made me want to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hmm... Okay, I'll try to slow it down a little. I'm glad that you liked it, though. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 10/18/05 1:32
Chapter: Trapped

This story is getting very interesting. I find it especially good that you update so quickly!!! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I'm trying to write fast, but I'm just so busy with school and everything. There might be a little longer wait on the next chapter, sorry.

Reviewer: miss padfoot
Date: 10/17/05 6:27
Chapter: Darkness

Interseting story. It began with angst and the war and all, but Ginny dying was sad. Poor Harry! Where's Ron, BTW? Is he dead? If he's still alive, how did he react to Ginny's death? Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I feel bad for Harry, too, but I had to do it. Sorry! Ron is not dead. I believe that he actually did talk to Harry in chapter 2. I also said that he did not react to Ginny's death very well. It won't leave him alone. Anyway, chapter 3 is up and I'm working on chapter 4. Thanks, again.

Reviewer: KieLee
Date: 10/15/05 2:21
Chapter: Darkness

i just loved it please update ASAP

Author's Response: Thanks and I'm working on it. Chapter three is in queue again. They rejected it the first time, but I have a good feeling this time. Thanks for reading! =)

Reviewer: RavenKath
Date: 10/12/05 17:56
Chapter: Darkness

hmm interesting. I think I might add this one to my favorites. the only thing I want to know is WHY Petunia and Dudley decided to come support Harry, and what happened to Vernon?

Author's Response: Thank you so much. As for the Dursley's, all will be explained in time. I will tell you, however, that Harry is also wondering the same thing. I will say no more...

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 10/12/05 2:20
Chapter: Darkness

I just know that this story is going to be awsome!!! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review just lightened up my day. Thanks for reading, chapter three is in the process of being written. In fact, I was just about to write it when I saw your review. Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: ginny112
Date: 10/10/05 3:13
Chapter: Loss of Hope

I like the chapter. It's a good start and I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks. Good to hear it. Chapter two is in queue.

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