Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 05/16/06 19:37
Chapter: Trust

good chapter! so glad to see you updating!!!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 05/16/06 19:36
Chapter: Trust

good chapter! so glad to see you updating!!!

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 05/16/06 14:19
Chapter: Trust

ohh wow this just keeps getting better and better and a quick update this time too!! woohoooo!!!! you go girl!!! i love the story as i ahve said numerous times!! i just can not wait for another update!!
i am soo curious as to who her parents where in teh wizarding community!! i cant wait for more!

Reviewer: siriusluvr1333
Date: 05/08/06 19:19
Chapter: Home

WOOOOAAAAHHHH!!!!! that rox . . . . i totally love how harry goes to the US and Sarah is just sooo cool, i mean standing up to hermione like that . . .talk about AWESOME!! luv your story PLEASE UPDATE!!!
~Siriusluvr~

Reviewer: BrianBoggart
Date: 05/08/06 14:53
Chapter: Home

I think you've created an interesting story thus far. You've created a wonderful new character (admittedly at the expense of one my personal favorites :( ). A few things: first, make sure to go back and not have Sara say Harry's name in front of her parents. She said called him Harry in one sentence and James in the next. Secondly, but probably more important, the story seems to have a "rush" to it. Not sure if you're pushing it to a crescendo or just feel you need to push it along for your own needs, but there are areas you should go back and add more depth. I do like the general story and you obviously are a good writer. I will continue to read and I await your next chapter. Thank you for taking the time to share with us.

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 05/08/06 13:03
Chapter: Home

it may have taken awhile for the update to get here but ohhh it was a good one!!! im glad hermione and ron are getting married!! im glad they waited on harry for thier best man! im glad hermione and sarah are getting along! whew alot of im glads there isnt there lol seriously though it was a very good chapter! and i hope there is another update soon!! good job on this one!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 05/08/06 7:39
Chapter: Home

an update!! hurrah!!! this was really good! update soon!

Reviewer: hermycurls91
Date: 04/28/06 20:47
Chapter: Departure

When is the next chapter? I love this story! It is really good.

Author's Response: Thanks! And i'm working on it, I promise, I promise!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 04/16/06 16:30
Chapter: Departure

Great! Update soon?

Author's Response: It's coming. I promise. =)

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 04/07/06 23:33
Chapter: Departure

i hate that it wasn't accepted!!! but ill be a good girl and wait patiently lol no need to be sorry ill admit i was dissapointed but... i know it will get there eventually lol

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 04/06/06 7:36
Chapter: Departure

Yippeeeee!!!!! woohoooooo *happy dances!!* lol

Author's Response: I've got bad news...chapter nine was not accepted again. I'm gonna look it over and have some other people look it over and then I'll try again. I'm really sorry..

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 04/05/06 18:46
Chapter: Departure

i know i must be getting annoying lol but was just wondering how soon you were going to have the next update ready lol

Author's Response: you're not annoying! lol you are my most devoted reviewer lol here's a little update on the update situation: chapter nine is in queue and it has been in queue since last week. I'm hoping that it will be up soon. I'm writing chapter ten also, so the wait shouldn't be too long. Hang in there! lol

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 03/23/06 11:58
Chapter: Departure

YaY!! updates on the way!! that makes me happy lol

Author's Response: I'm so glad that my updates make you happy! :-D

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 03/22/06 14:16
Chapter: Departure

just wondering if an update is coming soon?? lol i keep checking back i cant wait to see the reactions of everyone to harry coming back!

Author's Response: I'm working on it, but don't worry, I've hit a bit of a bump along the road right now. Chapter nine was rejected for a couple reasons and I'm working on fixing them. I'm hoping to update within the next week. I also haven't been working on it as much because I have been a little preoccupied because of softball tryouts, so this is just to let you know that I haven't forgotten about my story. I just need some more time. So I do see an update in the near future, thank you for being so patient! :-D Updates are on the way! Hope you enjoy the next chapter too!

Reviewer: snufflesismyidol
Date: 03/10/06 20:14
Chapter: Loss of Hope

Hey Kate, I love this cliffie at the end of the chapter. I was so eager to read on after this! I hope chapter nine is accepted soon!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 02/24/06 14:57
Chapter: Departure

Just found your story. I like it so far. I can't wait for the Weasley's reaction to a muggle! Please update soon.

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 02/23/06 21:04
Chapter: Departure

I really like the story so far. But I thought the whole parents say sure to go to UK thing was a bit quick. Found it hard to accept. Other then that I really think your writing is great.

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 02/22/06 14:05
Chapter: Departure

ok now that was a mean cliffie!! lol which weasley did he encounter? how does his visit go? are ron and hermione going to be mad?? ohhh i cant wait for the next update!! good job on this chapter! love the story!

Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie, I'm working on the next chapter now. It shouldn't take me too long to get it up. I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story! =)

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 02/17/06 2:36
Chapter: Truth

I think the story is great, but the only thing I thought that felt fake was when Harry was describing his life to Sarah. Just think it was quite easy for her to accept something so strange (from a muggle point of view)

Author's Response: Thanks, and Sarah, is well, different than most Muggles. I haven't really gone into detail about Sarah's life yet, but she's a special person. Harry doesn't even know everything about Sarah, but he'll find out soon, and so will my readers ;-). Don't worry. =)

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 02/11/06 20:46
Chapter: Beginning

i have read the whole story and just wanted to let you know although i was heartbroken that Ginny died and is no longer with Harry that i think you are doing a really good job on this story and i would love to read more!! cant wait to read more! keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I really hope that my readers are enjoying reading the story as much as I enjoy writing it! =)

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