Reviews For Internal Exile
Reviewer: unique_normality
Date: 10/21/07 13:22
Chapter: Out of My Mind


Reviewer: erisal95
Date: 08/17/07 22:44
Chapter: Reprieve

You should make a sequel for Harry and Ginny!!!!!LOL..

That was Wicked Awesome!!Its Fantastic!!Wonderful!!Great!!
and did i metion it was Awesome??..Cause it is!!!
Thats Really Great!!

Reviewer: Ryligh Christine
Date: 08/12/07 23:22
Chapter: Reprieve

very very cute

Reviewer: Fanfic Fanatic
Date: 03/12/07 18:46
Chapter: Reprieve

This story was very tragic and beautiful. I think you should write a sequel.

Reviewer: MustLoveTheTrio
Date: 12/10/06 16:51
Chapter: Reprieve

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/20/06 15:24
Chapter: Afterimage

Geez, Mrs. Weasley's a b***ch here...

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 07/15/06 22:26
Chapter: Reprieve

Yes, I saw Mudblood428's picture... which is why I came to read it! (She's such a good artist...) It was a great fic, written very well. I haven't read many R/Hr stories in my day, but this one takes the cake. Good job!

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 07/14/06 18:10
Chapter: Reprieve

Collective AWWW.

I love Ron and Hermione. Fluffy stories like this make me extremely happy. Nice job. =)

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 07/14/06 18:03
Chapter: Afterimage

This story is very very sad.

At first I was going to say that it's a bit out-of-character to hear Harry explaining things that happened (like when he's trying to explain how Hermione told him to make sure Ron doesn't go back for her) but I suppose it's because he never really does that in the book so that we have to re-read the whole situation... The part about Mrs. Weasley not knowing that it was Ron and Hermione sounded kind of forced in a way.. but that's just me being very picky.

I really enjoyed the fic so far, though. You're a very good writer. =)

Reviewer: potterisbomb
Date: 07/09/06 1:27
Chapter: Reprieve

that is a really good story. =]

Reviewer: ambush
Date: 05/02/06 15:45
Chapter: Reprieve

That was so sweet! I really liked it, I just love Ron and Hermione.

Author's Response: I also love Ron/Hermione, I think they fit well together!

Reviewer: ronandharryluver
Date: 02/05/06 12:14
Chapter: Reprieve

awwwwwww i just can see that final moment in my mind and it looks sooo cute!=D

Author's Response: Thanks! Mudblood 428 drew a BEAUTIFUL picture based in that scene. I will try to post the link in my bio.

Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 01/01/06 20:08
Chapter: Reprieve

yes, yes indeed.

Reviewer: diamonddust1414
Date: 12/28/05 3:55
Chapter: Reprieve

That turned out to be a really cute story. At the end of the second chapter, however, I thought that it was going to turn out to end in Ron's suicide before Hermione came back, saw Ron's dead body, and killed herself too. I was really disappointed at first. But after reading the ending, I saw that I was wrong, and really, thouroghly enjoyed. A very good read. Very nice job indeed.

Author's Response: That would have been the more dramatic way, but my inner romantic wants Ron to end up happy. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 11/28/05 17:26
Chapter: Reprieve

THis is a VERY cute story, and I like it very much. Thanks for the read, and thanks for being one of my mods- you're awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you for all of your sweet comments. Of all the stories I have written, this is my favorite. From a mod point of view, I appreciate the hard work that has gone into your story. Thanks

Reviewer: ron_hermione_love
Date: 11/21/05 0:08
Chapter: Reprieve

I was so sad when he was upset about Hermione! But they FINALLY sorted it out! And the cutest little ending! Hehehe! I only have one thing: I think-no, I KNOW-that Mrs Weasley has always known the feelings between Ron and Hermione. I don't think that she ever expected her with Harry. Other than that, an awesome fanfic!

Author's Response: Molly is a most interesting character; I never know for sure exactly what she does or doesn't know. Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: Free_Phoenix
Date: 10/26/05 6:14
Chapter: Reprieve

Very very sweet! Ron was SO upset but I'm glad he's happy now!!! 10/10

Author's Response: I hated torturing Ron, but it was worth it in the end. Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: Ginny and Hermione clone
Date: 10/22/05 19:31
Chapter: Reprieve

So sweet! I ab-so-lut-e-ly loved it. Very romantic. 10, 10, 10!

Author's Response: I have never been described as a romantic, so I am very pleased that you think my story is! Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: willow_wand
Date: 10/21/05 0:01
Chapter: Out of My Mind

OK! A Happy ending after all!

Author's Response: I couldn't leave Ron hanging!

Reviewer: willow_wand
Date: 10/18/05 0:28
Chapter: Afterimage

Poor Ron. I hope they find Hermione. It can't end up being this sad.

Author's Response: It won't. The last chapter will enter the queue today!

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