it was going sooooo well, the most accurate fanfiction to the actual story, the scene of harry and ginny talking in the beggining was beautiful. but then they died!! omg i mean, yes i guess some people would have prefered harry dying because it was a deffinate possibility, but just i can't take that. greeat story tho. i just wouldn't have been able to cope if JK Rowling had killed harry, i would have died too.
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talk about bittersweet!
i loved it though!
That was so sad! But it was really good too. (and it was a great distraction from studying!)
was fantastic, but am in denial. harry will not die. actually im not denail because it wont happen. oh yes, fantastic story. lovely. apart from the end. waaa!
Great job. Not Rowling's writing style, but I thoroughly enjoy how you write. Dark, but touching. Hope to see more of your writing.
that was amazing, so much of how i imagine jkr would write it, except, Harry and Ginny would live. I think you should write an epilouge of them meeting together beyond the veil and do the whole meeting Harry parents thing like they talked about, b/c that would be awsome and totally sweet. do you know what I mean? Email me if you do, it would be worth a read
OMG! This is the best story EVER! You had written it amazingly! 10/10! This story was just...wow!
Oh, my.... This story was so brilliant. You could FEEL the passion Ginny and Harry had for each other, and the plot line was immersing, making you want to read more and more. Definatley one of the better fanfics I've read in a while! Keep up the good work!
it was good im glad they are going to be together at least.
With this story, you have managed to creat the only fanfictoin romance that I have ever liked! Your story is absolutely amazing, and stayed away from the 'fairy tale happy ending'. Wonderful work, I hope to see more of your work soom!
Author's Response: Thank you : )
Oh, oh, this fic was amazing! I actually wasn't that sad that Harry died. I mean, I was, of course, because who doesn't love Harry, but truly, the only reason I hate the idea of Harry dying is that he will leave Ginny behind. Since Ginny died, Harry is not leaving her behind. Ron and Hermione have each other, and everyone else will get along without Harry, but the idea of Ginny being left alone with Harry dead was just too heartwrenching. So great resolution of that conflict! It was veryvery well written, but I think they yelled a bit too much at the wedding. = ) 10!
Author's Response: Oh man, I'm happy you were able to see something optimistic about the demise of those two characters : ) I'm sorry you think they yelled too much at the wedding, but I accredit it to the fact that Harry is Post-traumatic stress disorder, and has been for some time, and Ginny, well Ginny likes to get her word in. Thank you very much for your input!
Oh my goodness. Very good, it seems very realistic too, just like how JK would write it, was how it seemed to me. Good job! I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: I was going for realism... although i wasn't trying to write like rowling... hmm, i'll work on that, thank you
Very chilling. I absolutely loved it! Great job!
I can't decide whether to be mad at your or praise you. That is such a difficult topic to address and very controversial, I might add. How much would Harry sacrifice to destroy Voldemort? I can see him giving up himself, it was no shock that he would die. But it brings up the question, would Harry sacrifice his family, best friends, the woman he loves for the greater good of a world without Voldemort? Would he? I don't know the answer to that. Hmm. I guess I will praise you for this. Bravo, for a splendid job! It's very dark but it is offset with some great scenes. It was great for you to do the backgrounds so we could understand the great love they had for each other and I like that Ginny didn't go on the dangerous journey with him. Brilliant again, and I'll put this in my favorites.
Author's Response: I appreciate your views. I'm also glad you can consider being mad at me. It means I did my job. Anyway, thank you for your praise.
Loved how you intertwined their past with present! I liked the argument at the wedding. Sucks that Harry died in the, but oh well. Made more interesting to me for some reason.
Wow! I loved the arguement at the Burrow! Wouldn't it be perfect if thats the same way JKR interprets it in book 7? I much prefer a strong Ginny, instead of a frail one, more in character..you did very well. Sorry it had to end sad, and short.
Author's Response: Yeah, I like the idea of Ginny being a very strong person. I really enjoyed writing the whole argument, myself. Great distraction from homework. Thank you for your input
Well written, powerfull, heartwrenching. But I hated it! Ug, no! Harry would never kill Ginny to get to Voldemort! Arg!
Author's Response: Hahahahaha! I was hoping someone would hate it for that reason!
It was great...! i read it really fast because i dont have much time, and it was a little confusing because of the flashback thing, but when i get home i'll read it more carefully and leave you a longer review... but it was amazing, really. Update soon!
i was a little confused about the flashback stuff cause there weren't any lines or anything to tell us it was a flashback, but great story!! i enjoyed it!
dark but sweet