great sounds like j k herself wrote it
Ron took that alot better than i thought he would.....alot better......oh well still awesome chapter!
all of it was good but I didn't like the part with hermione jinxing Ginny.
great story.. i've read it in one go...
well, i really like the way you've developed harry and hermione's relationship..
actually, i can't stand Ginny and will never.. and i very very glad and thankful that you've paired harry with hermione..
i hope you update soon coz i really want to know what will happen in the next chapters..
i love the paragraphs u put about truth in the beginning and ending of this story this hole chapters was good but those to paragraphs were awsome. they really tell it how it is and they make u think... **great JOB!!***
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked those! Yeah, I felt that my earlier chapters were lacking something. Those opening and closings really helped me wrap up my chapters.
This story is in my favorites. I love it!!! Very good.. I hope it gets updated soon with more Harry/Hermione moments!!
Author's Response: I'm working on Chapter 16 right now. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
im sorry but this chapter bored me. i like your story but this is a really boring chapter. umm i like your work though! Keep it up!
Author's Response: i'm sorry if you didn't like the chapter. it was essential for the story line. not every chapter can be full of action and excitement. so again, i'm sorry if you didn't enjoy this chapter, but it was very important for the rest of my story. i'm glad you liked everything else. keep reading, there's more to come.
That was cute but the whole "Hes got you on a pedestal - and me in his arms" that was kinda wierd. But I did like the chapter.
Author's Response: sorry if you don't like my description. i like it, and thats all that really matters to me. but i'm glad you liked the rest.
OOOOOOO. Thats so suspicious. Is she one of Voldemort's helpers or something? Oh man..
I 'm glad that your chapter's are updating faster!!! I really like your story and I hope that you finish it!! I really liked the part with Kreacher and Sirius!! *_* Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: I'll do my best! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
it seems very unlikely that a wizard of the caliber of lord voldemort would b so easily taken by an average wizard such as Ronald Weasly.. but this is ur story i guess
Author's Response: ah.. well you think you know, but you have no idea. i'm sorry if you don't like that part, but as you said, it is my story.
lolz i love this chapter very exciting
that was a great scean i always wanted harry to end up with hermione
that was a great chapter. ron took that alot better than i thought he would. but the harry,hermiine, and ginny is still up in the air but i love all the same please update soon
haha! that wos great i loved it this storey is soooo fab im luvin it, yes i was a bit confused about hermione and harry in the hospital, i dont think hermione is that type but thats ok! wow your story is great!
I can only say this: I am a H/Hr shipper as well, but even if it was another pairing, Like Ginny and Harry, or Ron and Hermione, I would STILL say that this story is an amazing one, and the author has a sense of writing that can only come in imagination, and I can also say that it is pretty hard to write something with this much amazing potemtial on a paper. (Or rather, your computer) Either way, you are a great author.
Author's Response: thank you so much. that is quite possibly one of the greatest compliments i have ever recieved. i'm so glad that everyone likes it as much as they did. i wasn't so sure about this chapter but everyone seems to have recieved it really well. thanks for the support! keep reading!
I can only say this: I am a H/Hr shipper as well, but even if it was another pairing, Like Ginny and Harry, or Ron and Hermione, I would STILL say that this story is an amazing one, and the author has a sense of writing that can only come in imagination, and I can also say that it is pretty hard to write something with this much amazing potemtial on a paper. (Or rather, your computer) Either way, you are a great author.
