Reviews For Lover of the Light
Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 11/11/05 16:02
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

Will you ever update?!? I miss this story, please update soon!!

Author's Response: Ugh, I know! I'm terrible, really. I have written chapters 5 and 6, I swear, lol. Chapter 5 has been submited like 18 times 18 different ways but it keeps getting rejected. Keep your fingers crossed. Next chapter is called "Everything Changes" and chapter 6 is called "Nothing Compares". Hopefully you'll get to read them soon though!

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 11/02/05 19:37
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I love this story! Fabulous detail and character development!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Keep checking back!

Reviewer: Darth Potter
Date: 11/02/05 19:00
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

awesome story can't wait to read more, please submit soon

Author's Response: They're coming! Keep checking back!

Reviewer: Hitomi_girl
Date: 10/27/05 16:07
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I'm sorry about my last review.But I would be glad to call myself mean and rude and bitch."I'm a mean ,rude, and a bitch"said by Brittany.

Author's Response: No, you are entitled to your own opinion, and I am just saying, you can't be that big of a fan if you don't know her name, and you don't have to read my story if you don't agree with it. I don't even know why you were in the Hermione/Harry section if you don't think they can end up together or don't like to imagine it..but okay. You are entitled to your own opinion and can do what you want and I wouldn't call you those things for having an opinion.

Reviewer: Callalin
Date: 10/26/05 1:19
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I have to agree that I'm not entirely convinced, but it's a good start. I think that the struggle between the two could have been built up a little more than what it is now. Overall still a great story! Don't let cannon comments stop the chapters coming! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I totally agree with you, I should have built that part up a bit more. But it wasn't really an intrical part to my story, I mean, it was a plot point, obviously, and will come more into play in later chapters, but I didn't feel the need, at the time, to make it a drawn out thing. But I'm glad you like it, well sort of like it, lol. Next chapter is coming soon!

Reviewer: Jennie
Date: 10/24/05 19:48
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I absolutely loved this story. The first two chapters had me somewhat confused, because I began to think that it was about Harry and Ginny, instead of Harry and Hermione, but by the end of Chapter 4, I loved it! I can't wait to read more of it.

Author's Response: Yeah, that threw people off a little, but it is a Harry/Hermione story! Chapter 5 is coming really soon, i'm waiting for it to be okayed, just keep checking back!

Reviewer: Hitomi_girl
Date: 10/24/05 17:01
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I'm sorry to tell you that harry and Hermione will never be together.Sorry but it's true.L.K. Rowling said that they will never be together.any way the story is werid.2/10

Author's Response: Awesome, I'm glad your such a huge fan that you think her name is l.k..when its really j.k. rowling. but whatever. I really could not care less if you don't like my story and if they won't ever really end up together. If you don't like it, don't read it.

Reviewer: indigoraven
Date: 10/23/05 15:54
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

this story really pulled me in, I can't wait for additonal chapters to dive into

Author's Response: they're coming! don't worry, i'm waiting for the next chapter to be okayed now!

Reviewer: indigoraven
Date: 10/23/05 15:54
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

this story really pulled me in, I can't wait for additonal chapters to dive into

Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 10/23/05 15:38
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

Wow, this story is great! I wasn't all that convinced during the first chapters, but ch 4 was absolutely brilliant!! I liked Lana, I hope she'll be a part of the story. Cute with the necklaces...I just get this vision: that Voldemort kidnaps Hermione and/or Ginny and they like find a necklace hanging on a branch or something...I have a very vivid imagination =P And the ring! That was so sweet! I assume that will come in handy later... Can't wait to read about Christmas Day, and when Harry hands over Hermione's present!! Please update soon, this story is sooo great!! Excellent job! 10/10!

Author's Response: Mystery, mystery. Nice imagination, there will be no hanging on necklaces on a branch though, but the kidnapping is possible..

Reviewer: moonytb
Date: 10/21/05 12:38
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

WOW i cant believve how good this story is getting please write more im hooked

Author's Response: It's coming

Reviewer: Harrysgirl21
Date: 10/20/05 10:58
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

Excellent story. I can't wait to see how Harry is going to give Hermione the ring. Update soon!

Author's Response: Ah yes, I had a feeling that one would interest people. Next chapter is written, I'm just waiting for it to be okayed. But the whole Christmas Day ring thing and all that won't be in chapter 5, but it will be in 6. And there's going to be a little drama in that chapter due to the fact Harry will be giving Ginny and necklace that says "I love you" when she's sad. Keep an eye out!

Reviewer: redsoxfan2204
Date: 10/20/05 9:04
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

OMG OMG! You have to write more! You just have to! How is Harry going to do it??

Author's Response: Haha, it's coming!

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 10/19/05 19:14
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

im not uaually into harry/hermione fics but this story has great potential (i know, thats not how its spelt) its got a flow 10/10 good job

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! The new chapter should be up any day! Check back!

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 10/18/05 19:08
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

Wow, deffinetly a story to keep an eye on. If I updated that often, my readers would love me. I love how you express emotions, and how everything fits together, (or will fit together). I cannot wait!

Author's Response: Next chapter is written and ready to go, I'm just waiting for it to be okayed. Keep an eye out for it, it'll be here very soon

Reviewer: lilly_evans
Date: 10/16/05 8:40
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

its very cool please update soon

Reviewer: Nic Potter
Date: 10/13/05 9:54
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I meant exactly Luna Lovegood, since Harry also had a crush for her (it is not going to be love rectangle?). But you might be right, she could be easily confunded with Lana the storeworker. Keep writing, it's getting interesting.

Author's Response: I didn't exactly mention Luna yet. But she will be back in the story, but not a love interest of Harry's. I'm glad you're liking it, and yeah, it is getting a bit confusing with Lana and Luna, but there is a purpose for the similarity in their names.

Reviewer: Zoltan42
Date: 10/12/05 19:18
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

I'm a little ambivalent about this chapter. The story itself is good, but Ginny hasn't seen Harry for months, and the first thing she does when they get back together is leave him for a few week? Obviously, you had to keep them apart for Harry to work out his inner struggle without her around, but it just seems to odd on her part.

Author's Response: It is, that was my point. Neither of them are truly sure about the relationship in chapter 4. I wrote chapter 5 and things will start to make a bit more sense then. I actually don't think anyone will really like the next chapter because I'm not so sure I like it myself, but it's important to the plot. So chapter 5, coming soon, but it's going to be kind of disapointing, I feel. Check it out anyway! The story is about to take off in a totally crazy direction!

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 10/11/05 20:10
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

awesome chapter! i hope harry figures out his dilemma! update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, I will. I'm about to start writing so I hope for it to be up soon, keep your fingers crossed!

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 10/11/05 20:08
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

awesome chapter! i hope harry figures out his dilemma! update soon.

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