Reviews For Lover of the Light
Reviewer: Darth Potter
Date: 12/05/05 23:14
Chapter: Nothing Compares

great chapter, keep up the good work. it's every h/hr's fantasy!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

Reviewer: Remmy4193
Date: 12/01/05 13:57
Chapter: Nothing Compares

I must say this is a good chapter. Enjoyed it, I was waiting to see Hermione's reaction when Harry gave her the ring. Although I have to ask, nearing the end of the story you said that Professor... who helped Hermioen find the two rings?

Author's Response: Professor McGonagall. I guess I should have clarified. Hermione says before that point "McGonagall foun them in the trophy room" and later says "I asked Professor.." Sorry for the mix up, I'll try to clarify more next time. I'm glad you liked it though!

Reviewer: Nic Potter
Date: 11/28/05 11:21
Chapter: Nothing Compares

I could've written everything was perfect apart from the story but I assume you already feel the spirit of Christmas. Well I hope in next chapters will cease to behave as twelve years old deeply in love with each other. It could be delusional for readers. I'm not changing my rating though, because you've written what you aimed to.

Author's Response: Mmm, I don't exactly see where you are coming from. I don't feel I have written anyone as "twelve year olds in love". The next chapters will break away from being so much based around love and more dark, if thats what you mean. I just made these chapters very soft and light because, well, how else would Harry and Hermione gotten together without it being easy? I'm glad you still enjoy the story though.

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 11/26/05 21:49
Chapter: Nothing Compares

haha im the first to review!!! harry really does know just what to say! nice one!!

Reviewer: HP_GuiltyVerdict
Date: 11/24/05 23:56
Chapter: Everything Changes

I usually don't go for the H/Hr ships (Me being a R/Hr adn H/G Shipper and all) But I really like this story! I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Reviewer: king
Date: 11/18/05 15:41
Chapter: Everything Changes

Keep up the good work. Ginny and Seamus? Wasn't she with Neville? Or was it Dean? I'm sure I read something about Harry+Ginny. Is she a collector? Going through the whole set of available Gryffindor boys? Harry and Hermione are soul-mates. Every girl Harry has been seriously interested in (and I don't count Parvati) has been a Seeker. Harry is a Seeker. I think Hermione is a Seeker too, except she flies through books looking for knowledge.

Author's Response: Mmmkay? Haha, sorry, I'm slightly confused. Ginny likes Seamus but that will not last, I can assure you of that because I have planned the next few chapters. Hermione isn't a Seeker but she is Harry's soul-mate (I'll clarify later). But yeah. That's about all. Keep checking back!

Reviewer: flikchick83
Date: 11/17/05 7:28
Chapter: Everything Changes

It's really good. Keep going.

Author's Response: Thanks, I will.

Reviewer: ilooklikeradcliffe
Date: 11/16/05 16:29
Chapter: Everything Changes

I really liked this chapter. I think this is the best chapter in the whole story. I think this is my favorite story in fanfiction.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! That's such a compliment, all I can think of is wow! Lol. Ok well, thank you, again. Keep checking back. I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: darkmoon
Date: 11/16/05 15:25
Chapter: Everything Changes

omg! this story is totally the best. the characters are developing really well and the fact that they finally got together made my heart do a summersault, with twenty backflips after ward.lol. keep writing or i'll send my demon minions after you.lol.:)

Author's Response: Haha, aw thanks! I'm so glad you guys like it! Chapter 6 is done, I'm just not submitting get because I want more views on this chapter so people will understand the next one.

Reviewer: Harrysgirl21
Date: 11/16/05 11:50
Chapter: Everything Changes

Yeah an update! :) I loved this chapter, nice to see them finally get together. It was so sweet the way they told each other it was a 'secret'. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, yay, I'm glad you liked it. Next chapters all written, I'm just not submiting yet because I want more people to read this chapter first!

Reviewer: Waddiwasi chik
Date: 11/16/05 9:48
Chapter: Everything Changes

Ginny, Ginny, Ginny, such a socially active girl, eh? You'd've thought she'd have at least dumped him... Don't you think she has some decency? But 'twas a smooth chapter none the less! Cant wait for another!

Author's Response: Mmm, yes and no. The Ginny we know from the books would break up with him but you have to realize this is later. There is a war with Voldemort. Everyone has changed, in a sense. I mean, of course I could have had her dump him. But really, isn't it a lot more exciting this way? Ginny confesses she knows Harry and Hermione are soul mates; I feel it's a lot better than "I think we should just be friends".
But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! Keep checking back!

Reviewer: miasl09
Date: 11/15/05 22:43
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

it was a bit short , wasnt it? but it was good. i mean, the moment was needed. I want more action. Recover the way of writing you used with lana´s scene...

Reviewer: miasl09
Date: 11/15/05 22:41
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

it was a bit short , wasnt it? but it was good. i mean, the moment was needed. I want more action. Recover the way of writing you used with lana´s scene...

Author's Response: I didn't think it was that short..lol. More action will come in later chapters. The next chapter, which I wrote already, is about Christmas Day. It's not really a "great" chapter, I mean to say, it isn't filled with exciting action, but it's important for my plan for later chapters.

Reviewer: Darth Potter
Date: 11/15/05 21:15
Chapter: Everything Changes

not bad, can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Nic Potter
Date: 11/15/05 12:11
Chapter: Everything Changes

At least update and it was very time to. Well, it is out of all editorials but who cares.. Well, they really needed time to hook up with each other, so I consider this chapter as an interludium and wait for the wheels to start. Let's prod Voldy's buttocks with a minimum of violence!!

Author's Response: Haha...I think. I'm actually slightly confused about what you said, I'm hoping it was good, but not going to lie, I really don't understand. "At least update and it was very time to.." "out of editorials"? If you think I took my stuff from editorials, I didn't, lol. No offence. If you like it, thanks, lol. If not, I'm sorry.

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 11/15/05 11:59
Chapter: Everything Changes

woo hoo!!im the first to review =) lol. they finally got together!! yay anyway, i really liked this chapter. ginny must have known for a while if it was that obvious. nice one

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, they are finally together. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 11/15/05 11:58
Chapter: Everything Changes

woo hoo!!im the first to review =) lol. they finally got together!! yay anyway, i really liked this chapter. ginny must have known for a while if it was that obvious. nice one

Reviewer: miasl09
Date: 11/14/05 17:51
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

Great chapter! Congrats... The Lana´s scene was great , i highly enjoyed it. keep writing , i expect the next chapter soon , or ill begin threath the moderators!

Reviewer: miasl09
Date: 11/14/05 17:51
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

Great chapter! Congrats... The Lana´s scene was great , i highly enjoyed it. keep writing , i expect the next chapter soon , or ill begin threath the moderators!

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 11/11/05 18:47
Chapter: Back to the Burrow

it keeps saying you 'updated' but ch 5 looks pretty nonexsistant to me! i like this story alot plz update. for real!!!!!

Author's Response: Ah, I know! I really truly have updated, it just hasn't accepted it yet! Urgh, I really hope it comes soon, chapter 5 and 6 are both written but chapter 5 is just having some issues. Ugh, I'm trying! I have seriously sent it in about 18 different ways and it's not happening, so I totally re-wrote it yesterday and hopefully this time it will come through! Please keep checking back!

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