Reviews For Lover of the Light
Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:59
Chapter: Reproba Morsmortis

I completley agree. I think snape is good and Dumbledore isn't dead. I'm really happy you came up with that curse and all. amazing story, keep up the great work.. P.S. Do i see an engagement any time soon???

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:57
Chapter: Fighting, Forgiving, and Almost Forgetting

Yeah i knew they would get caught, lol. Honestly, getting it on in the HOSPITAL! They were bound to get caught..but i still find it extremely funny. I love this story and you are an amazing writer

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:55
Chapter: First Fall

Very good. I love how this story seems so real and i feel like I'm reading J.K.'s books themselves. Excellent! 10 stars

Author's Response: That's such a huge complement! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:52
Chapter: Everything Changes

OOO! I love this story so far! It is sooo cute! Good Job! Excellent! I love this! BRAVO!!!!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:51
Chapter: First Accusation and a New Friend

Awesome!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:51
Chapter: Confusion

Amazing! Love this story! You are an amazing writer!!!!!!!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 03/18/06 16:50
Chapter: Getting Things Settled

I'm loving this story so far!

Reviewer: Kiena_HPfan
Date: 03/18/06 15:42
Chapter: From Sunrise to Sunset

God! Holy cow! Taht is one of the best stories i have ever read. And to no offense to JKR but i wish her story would have that knid of plot twist somewhere. I have anotherquestion CAN YOU GYUS RAED TIHS? Because if you can, then your brains working well. (Off topic yes, so sue me!) Lovely story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 03/16/06 22:31
Chapter: From Sunrise to Sunset

Yessssssss Dumbledore is back!!!! I'm surprised at what Ron did!! It is funny but I want Snape to be o.k. Weird. I LOVE your story!! I was surprised to see the 10th ch. up. I really haven't been checking. Really nice surprise! Update soon!

Reviewer: Harrysgirl21
Date: 03/13/06 7:03
Chapter: From Sunrise to Sunset

Yeah Dumbledore is back! Great chapter. Still can't wait to see what's going on with Ginny. This is a great story, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: indierocker
Date: 03/10/06 21:54
Chapter: From Sunrise to Sunset

I love your story it has a great plot

Reviewer: slumbery_sunshine1
Date: 03/07/06 0:56
Chapter: Reproba Morsmortis

Good story! I love it so far, write some more! Quick!

Reviewer: king
Date: 02/26/06 18:30
Chapter: Reproba Morsmortis

It's a good chapter! Keep up up the good work because it helps us all to pass the time while waiting for the 7th book to come out. I think it is quite unlikely that Snape is good and Dumbledore is alive in JKR's version of the story. But it's possible, so if that's a plot twist you want to use in your story, it's fine! Did Harry buy a new house or did he fix up 12 Grimmauld Place? I hope Ginny's OK. Harry may love Hermione more than anyone else in the world, but he still cares about Ginny.

Author's Response: Yeah, I realize that won't happen in JKR's story but I thought it'd be interesting in mine. It's a new house, by the way. And, yes, he does care about Ginny, and you will hear more about that in Chapter 11. Chapter 10 is a reuniting of two people. Keep reading!

Reviewer: ylseeb
Date: 02/26/06 12:05
Chapter: Nothing Compares

I really like the way the story progressed and the stages you put the characters through up to this chapter. I like how you gave the sense of a very personal bond with Harry and Hermione, and it's exactly how I think they would come together. However, I think it was a little fast. Chapter 6 is a good place for them to come together, but your chapters are relatively short and a lot of action happens in each. I think from reading your writing so far, you'd be really good at adding in sensory. Harry and Hermione are sitting in front of a lake? Tell them about the reflection, the smell, and even the fish swimming around beneath them. Other than that there were just a few punctuation and spelling problems. Have a friend or even someone on Mugglenet whos writing you like look over it before you submit it. There weren't very many, but its hard to catch them after you've read over your own writing a lot you know? Like I said I really love the storyline and the conversations between the characters! I can't wait to see what happens in future chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Idealy, all your ideas would have been put to use in Chapter 10 but I already wrote it and it's in queue but I will definatly take them to heart in Chapter 11. I've been feeling my chapters have become too much dialouge and not enough detail. That's where what you said comes into play. The sensory idea is fantastic and I thank you so much for suggesting it. I really think it will help my story come together much more! Keep reading and definatly keep helping me out in the reviews!

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 02/22/06 19:32
Chapter: Reproba Morsmortis

Well it was good, but I think you should have said something about Ron getting taken by Snape. I LOVE that Dumbledore is alive!!! :) But Snape being good????? Oh well, if Dumbledore can come back alive in JKR's 7th book then it's o.k. I also like that Harry bought a house. It sounds beautiful. I can't wait to see what's up with Ginny. I really like your story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks! chapter 10 is in queue!

Reviewer: Harrysgirl21
Date: 02/13/06 12:12
Chapter: Reproba Morsmortis

Hmm... very nice chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happen to Ginny. I have a hunch but I could be wrong. I don't recall Ron being dragged off by Snape in the last chapter, but I probably just need to go back and read it again. Excellent work as always.! :)

Author's Response: it didn't happen in the last chapter, just this one. but i'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mugglemaddness17
Date: 02/01/06 8:27
Chapter: Fighting, Forgiving, and Almost Forgetting

i thought this was a good chapter and i like the story i was laughing out loud in my computer class when i read the end keep writing and ill keep reading

Author's Response: Haha! Yes! I'm so glad you liked it/ it made you laugh! Chapter 9 is in queue!

Reviewer: hawkeye555
Date: 01/29/06 14:48
Chapter: Fighting, Forgiving, and Almost Forgetting

Hey good story, i think there is a good plot here, though i was struggling with some of the characters, first of all Hermione isnt the kind of girl who would take off her top and jump on top of Harry in a public hospital i mean seriously how many of us would do it. But otherwise a good piece of work, i enjoyed it please update soon.

Author's Response: haha yeah, i know. i mean, it was really out of context for Hermione but it felt like that's how she'd act at this point. I mean, if you're looking to read fanfics without that kind of stuff you won't find that many good ones on mugglenet because it appears thats how everyone is feeling about the story. I think Hermione and Harry have just grown to a much more mature age and are totally different people than in the 6th book. But I'm glad you liked it. Chapter 9 is in queue!

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/28/06 15:37
Chapter: Fighting, Forgiving, and Almost Forgetting

That was very good. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I updated and it's all in queue!

Reviewer: Witch Wannabe
Date: 01/23/06 7:21
Chapter: Fighting, Forgiving, and Almost Forgetting

I have been following your story and I must say that it is excellent. I do feel, however, that this chapter may have deserved an R rating for strong language and sexual insinuations. I have no problem with reading R rated fics because I read fics based on the scenarios in them, not the rating. I just thought that other people may look at the PG-13 and read this chapter without worrying about it. ANYWAY...excellent chapter. Keep up the good work and update soon. 10/10

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I don't believe it deserves an R rating, nor do the mods. I haven't really described anything in a way that would need an R rating, but I will take your advice to heart. If other people believe it deserves that rating, please feel free to tell me because I really wouldn't want to make anyone uncomfortable. Thanks for the great review though!

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