Okay, good story but also incredibly depressing
You definitely have talent, and this is very emotional and raw. But it's really, really pushing the boundaries of what's too graphic and what's not (in my opinion). It would be interesting to see if you can write something a little more toned down while still keeping the intensity.
Wow. Very descriptive, you can feel the emotion. It's a good story, especially when its 3 in the morning, and you can't sleep.
Wow. That's all I have. Just, wow.
oh. my. god. this is an amazing story. i don't need to say anything. it is amazing. P.S. i know my rating says 10 but it is really, like, a billion.
omg. im shaking . i feel like my hearts been ripped out. you are awesome but i hate you. sorry. i give you a 10/10. but im in shock.
Thats amazing, im crying here! Does this eman that you share my opinions of what will happen in the last book, the death eaters using muggle means to kill?