Naw this story is sweet! Fleur started out as a mole head though! Good job!
~Love Sarah~
Ekk, Fleur is such a snob. But you're story was sweet, how Bill still loves her! Well done ^_^
wow, ive never read a bill/fleur story but that rocked! I really, super hope that you continue to write ur awesome stories, i love every one you've written so far! *10* as always..
Author's Response: Thank you, I am hoping to write a story like these for each of the Weasley children...I have thought about reworking this story though...One day.LOL
I thought that was pretty good. Bit of a random pair to write a fic about but I guess it works because we know so little about their relationship. Good job.
Author's Response: I amn working on writing a fic much like this one for each of the Weasley. Kind of like a series. I have thought of revising this one though.
That was a great story! But I cannot belive Fleur acted like that!
Author's Response: With the way she acted in book 4 I thought this is how she might act in the beginning, although I like to find the good in everyone.
GReat Story...Very Good. It goes with your other story too, I love that! Now how about one for Harry,being gone thoose two weeks.
Author's Response: Thank you and I am working on one shot fics for all of the couples.
I think that you should develope your characters more. If you could fix that one thing this might acturally turn out to be a good story
Author's Response: If some one is going to take the time to criticize then I would think that they would learn to spell correctly. Develop does not have an 'e' on the end. It is a romance fic and a development of characters aren't really needed...it's fluff.
I think that you should develope your characters more. If you could fix that one thing this might acturally turn out to be a good story
