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Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 06/15/08 20:30
Chapter: A Mother's Love

I love it. It was beautifuly written and it brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 06/15/08 20:29
Chapter: A Mother's Love

I love it. It was beautifuly written and it brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: St Jimmy the Sheep
Date: 08/12/06 14:48
Chapter: A Mother's Love

That was so sweet and sad! I nearly started crying. Loved it!

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 07/14/06 22:14
Chapter: A Mother's Love

That was so tear-jerking. Wow, I haven't read a powerful story in a while... and with Harry in it. (I've been drowning myself in R/Hr's lately). Omg, I love Harry (as I write "hairy"...). You also made me laugh for a while too in this fic at something completely random, but that's just me being.. me. It was:

"....soft fragrance floating near him.

“That was you?” he said, incredulous."

There is something else that is very special about this fic. It's like how dementors represents fear and inner demons, while Harry's dream in this fic represented how loved ones never leave. I really really like that. :) Great job.

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 06/11/06 18:24
Chapter: A Mother's Love

*sob* that was.....sad

Reviewer: Puertorriquena
Date: 11/23/05 19:47
Chapter: A Mother's Love

AW! So cute! You did very well with Lily. She felt so motherly.(duh) But yes very good. Made me cry! Reminded me of my mom, eventhough she's alive. Very good again. 10!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really liked this story. It was kind of a random idea, and I wasn't sure if it would work, so validation from one person is wonderful. Thanks!

Reviewer: Ronandchicken
Date: 10/13/05 22:45
Chapter: A Mother's Love

I loved it--I liked the idea of being able to... sort of... of Harry being able to get Lily out of his own memories. I feel like it's a very cliche idea when I say it (and I think of Lion King, which was almost the same thing), but when it's written well it does not *seem* cliche. So it doesn't seem cliche here.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Whizzbee
Date: 10/09/05 8:07
Chapter: A Mother's Love

Very good idea, and I liked the way you wrote Lily - it seemed very real :) A few typos, but nothing major, it's very good. I'm giving you 10 :)

Author's Response: Wahoo! Yeah, I put these up way too fast. *sheepish grin* Typos ...

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