aw that was seriously cute! i love lily and james fics! seriously well written!
Gd one! Hehe that was superb, nice story. well dun!
oh itz so good
I like its very good :D
That was a sweet little story.
I liked it.
I loved the story. It was really sweet and short.
AW that's so cute =)
awwww... I liked that!
:) I LOVE JAMES! :) HE IS SO CUTE!
That was Bloody Brilliant loved it you made James all nevous i was smilling all the time when i was reading thei gooooooooood job I mean Greeeeeeaaaat job ; -D
Awww....I'm a SUCKER for fluff.
This was so cute! Cuteness! :) I've never been 100% sold on all of this fluff, but... It's SO cute!! Your story rocked! :)
that was so sweet and i think you got james' character spot on! it could have been how he really asked her
This was the first fan fiction I read. That was when I wasn't a member. It is creative and well written. Lily and james are my favorite characters. Good job! Keep on writing!
I like how you made it about Harry's parents and when James asked Lily to marry her.
lol THREE HOURS????? God he woz nervous... that was brilliant!!! a 10/10 for... spiffing brilliancly!!!!!!!!