So sweet! That was really great. It's nice to read James/Lily and this one made me happy, for lack of a better way to say it.
That's a good version of thestory of James and Lily.It's funny the way Sirius dared them to get married
Ooooo! Thats so cute! I love it.
great!!! james seems a little conceited at the end there though! great story! keep it up!
I hope this the way JK had in mind that James and Lily get together.
How sweet and stomach churning
aw thats really cute, i like it.
Oh, that's so beautiful!!!!! I loved it! How cute, I could just picture him being that nervous. very good. Are you going to have more chapters? Well done, 10000/10
Brillaint it was like reading a chapter written by J.K. herself well done!!!
clap clap clap!!!
its cute but you should have made it a little longer and i well i love it .
it was very good i normally don't read Lily/James fics but this was very good keep writing ur on to something
Cool story. I like that James had to be dared to ask Lily to marry him (he owes Sirius forever!... or would have...) It's also good how you have the word "yes" be sorta ambiguous (the answer to the questions of both of them). Well-written, too.
Normally, pepole has him pr0pose when they graduate, but i gues you no like normal
Awww Yay!! :)
this is really good, it gets your heart pumping. are you going to write another capter?
AAAWWWWWW that was really sweet!!!! I love the way you protraed James!!!!