I'm sure you dont' mind that I'm clogging up your review page, but--really? (About the names.) Because I don't think, no matter how many times I see it or hear it, that I will ever be able to say or write 'Voldy' without puking. (I made sure I was near the bathroom when I wrote it just now. Lol) I just have them call each other by the MWPP names when they're being affectionate or something. It's really just my pet peeve; I can't stand 'Mione either. Or Cissy. Or Sevy. (Can't say I've actually seen that one though.) Probably any name that ends in a long eee sound, come to think of. But it doesn't matter; I still love the fic and I can't wait to read the slashy goodness!
Author's Response: I hate 'Mione and Sevy, but Cissy is actually used in the books and I think Voldie is funny, so neither one of them bother me. I understand about pet peeves; I have them too. Both of my sister's names end in the "ee" sound; therefore they do not bother me. No, I don't mind you 'clogging up the review page!' lol
*SLASHY SEX SCENE IN ORDER* i give this story a 13 out of 10 (why 13? same reason as why I always say 582 million when i'm exaggerating.)
Author's Response: 13 is such a swankified #! THANKS!
I don't mind, whatever you decided I'll read! This fic is amazingly brilliant! Remus/Sirius fic's are always one of my fanourite and this one is one of the best. 10/10
Author's Response: I love R/S too, and I'm flattered you think mine is one of the best.
Hmm I dunno about this one. They were a bit forward, weren't they? And I think I'm partial to Moony being submissive(at least more so) to Sirius than vice-versa. Anywho, I'm still liking it, and some parts are making me laugh(Peter's question about who the bitch was, just killed me) lol.
Author's Response: I prefer when Remus is submissive also, so if I do put the scene in...well, you'll see. Thanks for reviewing!
*does happy dance at prospect of more slashy goodness* I think the humor on this fic is perfect and I LOVE the bitch line. Really. (Even if I could never picture Peter actually SAYING it) I'm really enjoying the fic but I wish you would stop with the Remy, Siri, and Jamsie name-calling. PLEASE! Otherwise, love it! Did I tell you yet that you're on my favorites? Hm....
Author's Response: Thanks so so so much for the fave! Those nicknames used to bother me too, but they're used so frequently on FanFiction.net that I got used to it.
Nother chap! Nother chap!! i really like this story. its funy! i love the title! hee hee. I love padfoot/moony stories. im weird like that, lol. great story, lurv it, lol!!
Author's Response: Loving R/S stories isn't weird! Tis great, swankified, and awesome!!! And so is your review!
Great :) I think if you left it there it would be lovely but I'm not fussed either way and by the looks of it your other fans want the 'action' ha. Anyway favourite funny moments (besides the bitch line) were 'assuring himself that it was a very manly skip' because Sirius is O so manly.... 'Why Evans doesn't worship me I'll never understand' because it is that attitude which is the reason why James wont score Lily till seventh year...AND... 'forcing himself not to glance below Sirius' leather belt.'..because it was quite raunchy and hilarious. So there you go.. fantastic work and Ill check back later to see if we get one more chapter :D *10*
Author's Response: I am so grateful and happy when peaople quote the parts they like! I actually didn't intend for 'Why Evans doesn't worship me I'll never understand' to be funny; just to show James' arrogance, but I've had comments on other sites that people think tis amusing also. Imagine my surprise and pleasure of being humourous without meaning to!
SLASHY SEX SCENE! sorry... i love this story, i added it to my favorites. *10*
Author's Response: Oh, much thanks! I love being on faves even more than I love tens (which is a lot) and you gave me both!!!
Peter's reaction is BRILLIANT! And everything Remus says: '"Good Evening," he greeted cheerfully.' Bluntness & coolness rocks! Really great chapter! Aww, it's [nearly?] finished =(
Author's Response: Thanks! I like Remy's aloofness also. Do you mean you like that Peter says "Which one of you is the bitch?" because I think that line is funny. There might be one more chapter, but after that the fic is over.
sex scene!! sex scene!! come on!! no good slash story is complete without some *action*!!!!
Author's Response: LOL Thanx 4 reviewin' & votin'!
Hmm...I think I would prefer the sexy, R rated slash. Great story, by the way. Shame there's no 11 on the scale...
Author's Response: Okay, you're vote has been counted. You'd give me an eleven? ThAnK yOu!!!
Aww, Sirius realising he likes Remus is sweet :) Yay, not Snape! Hehe, Kingsley is cool. I like the name: ‘Emotion Potion’ (strange ingredients). ‘"Limbo." "Ooooh, me too. Can we play?”’ That’s a bit random. =S Looking forward to updates. *Cheers for weird emotion potion =D*
Author's Response: I'm truly estatic you like my potion! :.)
Argh! Snape as a tutor. It just has to be him doesn’t it. [Now, just watch me be wrong..lol] ‘Sirius felt his stomach do the familiar flip that Remus' smiles invariably caused’ Aww. Sirius was v. sweet at the end when thinking/taking about Remus. I like James’ bluntness. =) Nice chapter. Oh yeah, and a breadcrumb! Hehehe.
Author's Response: Thanx! I couldn't resist adding the breadcrumb for randomness. Writing Sirius as sweet while keeping him in character can be a challenge, but I think I did a good job. I hope everyone else feels the same! Bluntness is fun and I do not see James as a character with any tact.
‘This had been one of Remus' most terrifying nightmares, for his friends had all dyed their hair purple and had threatened to eat his precious chocolate if he didn't do the same.’ Hahaha, that’s brilliant. Sirius’ coming out of the closet is really good. ‘"Let's get one thing straight." Sirius gazed at his fellow Marauders and took a deep breath. "I'm not."’ V. funny =D Remus being politically correct. Hehe. Shakespeare, Quake-Sword, Shakespeare, Quake-Sword. Haha, William Quake-sword. I like how James knows about them, but you’ve got the naďve-unobservant-Peter who features in so many wolfstar fics, and is v. annoying. But apart from that, really good first chapter =)
Author's Response: I love the chocolate dream! William Quake-sword has a nice ring to it, doesn't it? Lol. I HATE Peter sooo much and to write him as someone with intellect is impossible for me. Thx 4 reviewin'
Well isn't Remus suffering from Dirty Mind Syndrome? Lol. Really liking this... Sirius is so dense...honestly...but I am somewhat surprised knowing how dense James also is, that it was in fact James who helped Siri figure his feelings out. He must've been damned obvious and Remus is so oblivious... and I am curious about how you're going to incorporate that potion of it playing a role in the plot. Should be good! :)
Author's Response: Yes, our favourite werewolf is suffering. The only that can help him is some Sirius medication! I think that James and Sirius have brilliant minds; they just rarely put them to use. Ah, the potion! Well, supposedly no one is going to have to drink. Will someone drink it after all? Thank you so very much for reviewing!
Awww Remus is crushing..and having raunchy daydreams hehe. I totally didn't expect Kingsley as a tutor...but hey..who would? But besides it being unexpected it was cool I mean who doesn't love to limbo HA! (again with the randomness, I love it) I thought it was just cute when Sirius says, "Besides, I don't even know which way he swings." I wasn't expecting that, so it was funny :) Poor Prongs can't catch a break with Lily...ah well. Anyway looking forward to whatever happens next! *10*
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to write such an in depth review. I can tell you're extremely into the fic and I cannot express how much that means to me! I knew everybody would be caught totally off gaurd by Kingsley being the tutor. Not many of my stories have unexpected twists, thus that was enjoyable to write. This is 4th year and Prongs and Lily didn't get together until 7th year so don't anticipate anything happening between them.
Ah simple minded Sirius...well more oblivious than anything hehe. Hurry and update. :)
Author's Response: Siri isn't oblivious to his feelings; he just does not want to admit what they are. Hopefully, James can help him with that. Thank u so much 4 reviewin!
Brilliant! It's a shame James is the only rational thinker at the moment.. *sigh* Anyway favourite moments!! "A bread crumb" HA ..I must admit that was totally random....and...the end ..when Sirius has this speech about Remus being mentally 'delicate' and James is just like.. 'Ever think you might fancy him?' That was great!! I know you wrote the story and all but I like to repeat my fave bits ...so yea. Aww I really can't wait to see how this pans out. Oh and a tutor.. I bet it's Snivellus .. but meh who really knows hey.. well besides you. Okay.. so Awesome! chapter *10*..Oh and Remus owes Sirius now..that should be interesting. Okay ..I'm done.
Author's Response: I absolute adore it when people quote their favourite parts, so THANK YOU! I love randomness, so the bread crumb bit was entertaining for me to write. Remy and Siri are both wont to daydream about each other. Remy has a great daydream next chapter! *giggles* 10? YIPPEE!
once again, love it!
Author's Response: You do? YAY! Thanx!
i love this pairing. you have a great start. i can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks bunches! This is one of my fave pairings too.