I loved your story! It was soo good! I thought it was hilarious too!
My favorite was the last chapter!!!!!!!!!!
I love chocolate!
that was amazingly adorable too.
wtf. I loved that last bit of dialouge. It's just perfect.
Wow. Love the arguement between Lily and James. It was the best thing ever!! And the limbo. That is amazingly random. I don't quite get the bread crumb thing, but I think I'm not supposed to. 'It'll taint my innocent mind' loved that line.
YES I do think that he mght fancy him!!
another great chappy.
I love it when James plays matchmaker. I wanna see this poem about DUmbledore now! witty and laugh aloud. great job.
I love chocolate... lol. Very well written, my friend.
Scrummy yummy XDD
*two tumbs up*
I actually didnt like slash before I read your fics, so congrats
That was really good. I don't usually read these type of fics but a friend of mine said it was really good and its even better than i expected. Your writing is very good. In other words . . . IT FREAKING ROCKED!!!! ! ! ! ! ! Sorry, sugar rush!
love the story great intimate scene at the end, its a really great story
Wow. What I way to come outta the closet. I might use that in real life...
"Ooooh, I have a good one!" Sirius cackled maniacally. "Roses are red, Apples are sour, Open your legs, And I'll show you my power."
that is pure gold- hilerious!
Great story! I love the title.
Things went a little fast between the two, but it was still very sweet. I really liked the thing with Remus and chocolate. You really tied it in well with the last chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me!
I'm sorry, but can't write an appropriate review of this scene. If I could however the review would be a compliment once I finished...well I'll leave that to your imagination. : )
Author's Response: *giggles* It's okay, I understand, and I appreciate it!
that was really good
Author's Response: Thank u muchly!
Ha! Liked this:
"He seemed unable to voice the horror that was running through his mind. Believe me, the horror got tired from all of that running."
I think I could kick McDonald's butt when I say, 'I'm loving it!!!"
Author's Response: Haha, thanx! Luv ur penname!
I loved it! you did a great job
Author's Response: YaAaAaAaY!
"I love chocolate,"
Sums it up! Loved it! :D
Author's Response: I adore that part; thanks for mentioning it!