I'm glad they finally broke up. Now it is time to see some Harry/Ginny
That was a nice twist. I liked it.
So far so good! Keep up the good work.
Oh wow, that was wonderful *sigh* not to mention long awaited... : )
yjat was asome and even thiugh you bade it look like ginny dead i wouldnt of made you feel bad about it who ever did shame on them.
I love your story its nice to see that a guy can write such a heartfelt story. I love long stories and hopefully when you finish you other one it will be as satisfying as this one. It makes sense that Voldemort would have surrogate sons.
i think oersonally after the plot twists and such the best thing about your storey is your authors notes. it good when the writer is able to undermine the reader. i like it =)
noooooooo why why why!!!!!!!!!
blech! you are missing the point of jk's plot. there is a reason why a hero is alone. a lonely sole fighter, with or without a mentor. but not family!! no!
really. its typical american utopia! do you know!?!?
this story has a lot of american arrogance in it. nothing wrong, just wondering if you are aware.
HOW DARE YOU! HARRY SHOULD HAVE TURNED CHO DOWN! But it was good that Harry doesn't have to deal with Snape. The story has been good so far except Cho for now.
Very sorry about my last review. We didn't mean it.
i am sooooooo x100 glad that you fixed it
dont tell me that the dogs are the reincarnations of the founders cause that would mean one is bad. but it makes sense! so send each dog to take down their respective arch enemy(sons of moldy shorts).
yep ginny is an independent spirit but do they all i repeat all have to be dense geez, oh man im still lovin this story WHOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cho is just selfish, alright a little confused(probably what you had in mind) but still the attention seeking prat *last hp relativve sprints off in the distance drawing his wand muttering about stupid scarheads and flashy stupid girls*
