Was Sirius really going to say eyes, or was Lily just PMS-y?
This is a funny story. I like it.
“Sirius Black?” Natalie inquired. “He’s cute,” she added thoughtfully.
^^Nat rocks. She is simply one of the most hilarious, original characters II have ever heard of. In the middle of a crisis, she can just change the topic like that.
Poor Sirius. But I have to admit, Lily was awesome. I love how you have, like, the same characters in all of your stories (Miri, Nat, the OCs are all in them). Great job! {BEccA}
This story ROCKS This serve Siris Right
My favourite line: "Don't hate me because I'm beautiful!" Even better that it was said by Sirius. He He. Wonderful job, it read really smoothly!
lol i love how lily isnt just a sweet innocent girl in this story!
I found this funny and enjoyable. I didn't think having both group of friends at the beginning and then the flashback was necessary though. Other than that, this was well written and quite humorous.
great job. i luv it wen guys get thiers buts kicked by girls.=P
LOL! Sirius got beat up by Lily! Ha! You go girl!
very funny ^_^ and no, thats not sarcasm o-o
LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL.....HAHAHAHA....this was hilarious. I've never imagined Lily as the kind of girl who could beat up sirius. she's got serious girl power
Bwah-ha-ha-ha! And other stuff...nice story.
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"...almost complimented me."
This is just too funny. I was nearly crying from laughter. : )
this was prealy funny!! i just had to imagen that Lily was beating snivillus. I do luuurve sirius. When I imagen Him He's so.... un belevably Hot!! i love him (well just look at my bio)
i just went and read your other story s'mores, so i checked out your bio and am now going to read all your stories :) his was very very fun. sirius definetly had that coming! good read!
Haahaa!! Go Lily! Show him who's boss!
Go Lily! Oh my god that was funny! Even if I absolutely adore Sirius, that sure put him in his place. 10/10
haha, good job! I loved it!
ROTFLMBO this is definitly one of my favorite stories 10000000000000000000000000/10
