Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 05/01/11 17:47
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

Was Sirius really going to say eyes, or was Lily just PMS-y?

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/22/09 19:23
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

This is a funny story. I like it.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 07/03/08 14:12
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

“Sirius Black?” Natalie inquired. “He’s cute,” she added thoughtfully.
^^Nat rocks. She is simply one of the most hilarious, original characters II have ever heard of. In the middle of a crisis, she can just change the topic like that.

Poor Sirius. But I have to admit, Lily was awesome. I love how you have, like, the same characters in all of your stories (Miri, Nat, the OCs are all in them). Great job! {BEccA}

Reviewer: Come_What_May
Date: 04/01/08 19:23
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

This story ROCKS This serve Siris Right

Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 02/26/08 16:10
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

My favourite line: "Don't hate me because I'm beautiful!" Even better that it was said by Sirius. He He. Wonderful job, it read really smoothly!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 01/28/08 13:52
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

lol i love how lily isnt just a sweet innocent girl in this story!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/22/07 10:45
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

I found this funny and enjoyable. I didn't think having both group of friends at the beginning and then the flashback was necessary though. Other than that, this was well written and quite humorous.

Reviewer: N_ReadeR
Date: 08/10/07 13:36
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

great job. i luv it wen guys get thiers buts kicked by girls.=P

Reviewer: BookWorm77
Date: 04/04/07 11:01
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

LOL! Sirius got beat up by Lily! Ha! You go girl!

Reviewer: alohamora21
Date: 02/26/07 18:51
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

very funny ^_^ and no, thats not sarcasm o-o

Reviewer: Chickimonkey
Date: 01/20/07 17:50
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

Go Lily!

Reviewer: unicorngirl22
Date: 09/20/06 16:20
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL.....HAHAHAHA....this was hilarious. I've never imagined Lily as the kind of girl who could beat up sirius. she's got serious girl power

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 08/16/06 15:26
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

Bwah-ha-ha-ha! And other stuff...nice story.


Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 06/29/06 15:24
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

"...almost complimented me."
This is just too funny. I was nearly crying from laughter. : )

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/28/06 20:57
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

this was prealy funny!! i just had to imagen that Lily was beating snivillus. I do luuurve sirius. When I imagen Him He's so.... un belevably Hot!! i love him (well just look at my bio)

Reviewer: bookworm247
Date: 06/28/06 4:43
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

i just went and read your other story s'mores, so i checked out your bio and am now going to read all your stories :) his was very very fun. sirius definetly had that coming! good read!

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 06/11/06 14:50
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

Haahaa!! Go Lily! Show him who's boss!

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 06/08/06 6:14
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

Go Lily! Oh my god that was funny! Even if I absolutely adore Sirius, that sure put him in his place. 10/10

Reviewer: dumbledore_lives
Date: 05/30/06 9:39
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

haha, good job! I loved it!

Reviewer: Nevermore135
Date: 02/26/06 9:42
Chapter: Lily Lays the Smackdown

ROTFLMBO this is definitly one of my favorite stories 10000000000000000000000000/10

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