Well, this is off to an interesting start. Hormones do add an interesting complication to otherwise close friendships.
I love the one on one interaction you've got going on and I also really loved the fact you hit upon something that most people have only speculated on...the fact that there might have been a time or two that Hermoine really did like Harry more than as a friend. Excellent job! Look forward to seeing more chapters. Hope you don't keep me in suspense for too long.
Yay, first review. Good! I liked it. Keep writing! ~snuffles