australians dont talk that way!! im from queensland and i have never said struth or shiela or marvey!!! why do you think that people talk like that here?
Author's Response: Sorry to break it to you, but I am from 'here'. As in Australia. And sorry if you don't like it but I personally wanted to poke some fun at American movies and tv shows who portray us in that way. I always believe you should know about a subject if you're going to write about it, so I wouldn't put two Australian people in my story if I wasn't Australian. I love my country and think it's the best so i don't think you should judge me before you know the truth. So I exaggerated a bit but if had of taken the time to contact me and find out a bit about me and the fact i'm a born-and-bred Australian, then I would have listened to your opinion and told that my intention was to poke fun at Americas portrayal of Austrailians. But instead you out-and-out asume that I'm not Australian and that I have no idea about Australia. I live here. I was born here. I am Australian and proud of it, and I don't appreciate you insulting me before you find out who I am. You're assuming you know me and who I am, but you dont.
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha sorry i am super hyper and that seemd totally funny to me but it was good. i liked it
Author's Response: That's excellent. To many serious people in the world right?
Wow~!!!! Awesome! Keep it up and update soon! You Rock!
Author's Response: Thankyou
I think you portray LIly awesomely! Can't wait for the next chapter!! 10
Author's Response: Good. She's a bit like me in a crazy way. The next Chapter is in que.
ok, this might sound realllllllyyyyyyyy weird, but I sat threw the whole fan fic! Usually I never read it in one sitting! Lol tom
Author's Response: Not weird, excellent! Means I'm doing something right!
do u read the life of Georgia Nicklson?
Author's Response: Oh yes. A couple of people have comment on that.
Whee!! Haha, loved the weird dream. I couldn't stop laughing. XD Lily has the funniest thoughts. =) Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Lol, I think everyone has crazy moments but this lot more than anyone.
I LOVE it. write more!!!
Author's Response: Thankyou. the next chapter should be up soon
i still don't know how to improve your story!!1 sorry, i kniw this isn't very helpful but its so good as it is!!!!!!
i still don't know how to improve your story!!1 sorry, i kniw this isn't very helpful but its so good as it is!!!!!!
Author's Response: Fantastic! So I'm doing something right.
that.was.amazing!!!!!!!!! omg you are so good! that dream was so ... i dunno , different? uncanny? that i dont blame lily for telling him to go away *politley* to improve, i dunno,i'll get back to you if i think of something.....
Author's Response: Thanks, its always heartening to know people cant think of ways you can improve
LOVE IT!!! Cant w8 4 the nex chapie! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks it should be up when the que reopens
Whoa..I love it..keep it up..update soon..hah..animal magnetism, nice one!
Author's Response: Thankyou!
Yea! An update! Great job on this chapter! Lily's thoughts are perfect! Except I don't like cliffhangers.....
Author's Response: Oh sorry, I'll try to do it less...except i just love leaving you all in suspense! Sigh. I'm so evil I scare myself sometimes. Lol.
keep updating/! love it! 10/10
Author's Response: I shall!
10/10 OMG!!! Sirius got abused?! When you wrote that his dad was abusing him it made me cry and relive some horrible memmories...
Author's Response: Aww, thats one of the saddest parts in my story except for another coming up in the next chapter...
LOVIN IT! Excellent! Keep it going!
Author's Response: Oh, the lovely moderator finally accepted it. I'm so happy, I'm going to cry.
Ok ge tting tonnes better - you'd better update soon though with a cliffhanger like that!
Author's Response: Ahaha. I'm so evil. Guess What? Sneaky peak - chapter seven ends in a ginormous cliffie! Ahaha.
i like it apart form the whole aussie/italiano/spanish thing. Australians REALLY DON'T speak like that - i'd know. Maybe more about Lily and James as the story is about them...
Author's Response: I AM Australian, trust me, i'd know. I'm making fun of american and english movies and shows because they portray us in that kind of ridiculous exaggerated way.
Oh my god you are bloody brilliant! My favorite part (heaven knows why) is "Jacko: the bartender's name". I don't know why that had me laughing so hard, but it did. Love it! Jade
Author's Response: Lol, hilarious. Thanks, I always knew I was brilliant (no actually I didnt, my therapist said I'm special, but not brilliant.)
