very good. i am a cative audience.
Author's Response: This is the chapter I like the best, writing-wise that is.
oi. I smell trouble.
Author's Response: This one was fun to write!
very good.
Author's Response: Yeah we had to have another sweet one....
That was...well...um...yeah.
Author's Response: Yeah, we had a dark chapter to show what Talitha's life could be like...
Awwwwwwwww! I was waiting for that to happen.
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing the photo album scene with Tonks and Andromeda.
Awwwwwwww!
Author's Response: Yeah she needs some sweetness in her life...
That was good.
Author's Response: Thanks! This chapter is one I am particularly proud of.
ooooooo!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
woah tell me more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Keep reading and let me know what you think.
wow wat a story! ok i loved it but the ending didn't really float my boat! but it was very well written and i look forward to more of ur stories!
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your honesty and your praise!
all i can say is wow, that was amazing
Author's Response: Thanks! You made me smile! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I'm waiting for another inspiration to strike me so I can write again. I really enjoy it, but I want it to be quality, you know? Thank you again!
the ending could have been better but it was a good story anyway.
Author's Response: Are you talking the ending of the chapter or the ending of the story? I had a hard time trying to tie up the loose ends at the very end of the chapter. I might edit it later. Thanks for your honesty!
GEEZ! lol... i am SO not a Harry+Ginny fan! argh! ah well.. this is quite.. good, i guess... poor Talitha! argh! why'd u have to kill her! hmmm... well, i can't hold that against u as it IS a good story...
Author's Response: I don't know, don't you think JK wants Harry and Ginny to be together? I think they suit each other, but I think it would be more interesting if they just don't ride off into the sunset together. I don't think Talitha could have survived in the wizarding world, she was quite firmly trapped and would not have gone through with the DE's plans no matter what drastic measures she had to take. Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: I don't know, don't you think JK wants Harry and Ginny to be together? I think they suit each other, but I think it would be more interesting if they just don't ride off into the sunset together. I don't think Talitha could have survived in the wizarding world, she was quite firmly trapped and would not have gone through with the DE's plans no matter what drastic measures she had to take. Thank you for the review!
Wow this story was amazing. I couldn't stop reading! Im really glad you had the last paragraph too, it was so sad. I thought for sure she would survive and live happily ever after... but then again, the twist, it was different from all the other stories, it was fantastic. I love it. Good work
Author's Response: I can't thank you enough for your compliments! Amazing? Wow. Poor Talitha, she wasn't destined to have a long life, but she made the most of what she had. As for the last paragraph, as I said, I was really on the hedge about whether to have it or not, so I'm glad you liked the way it wrapped things up. Thank you!
Omg. That was utterly amazing! Im actually in tears at this very moment! Your an amazing writer, and should totally keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I really appreciate it. I'm touched that I brought you to tears. I'm on a bit of a hiatus right now, my story didn't turn out the way I wanted it to, and I'm having a bit of a creative roadblock. Hopefully the original ideas will come raining down again soon!
That was sad! As well as unexpected. It didnt seem that Talitha should have gone down likethat. You are a greatly talented writer.I hope that you creat many other amazing stories such as this.
Author's Response: Thank you for your compliments! I really didn't think Talitha could live in the world she was in, and she had very determined people coming after her. She was not going to let other people run her life and if that met death, than so be it. Thank you again.
u made me cry...it's so good
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Fantastic!! That's all I have to say for the whole story. I balled like a baby. What a tragic love story. THANKS!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the kind review. I'm sorry I made you cry, but I'm touched that my words moved you. Thanks for starting my day on a great note!
Oh dear I'm not very good with sad endings I always want everything to come good but apart from that I thought this stoy was superb. I love your passionate way of writing and hope you continue with many more stories.
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments! Unfortunately, I didn't feel that there could be a happy ending to this story, but at least Talitha had a little bit of happiness in her life. I am working on a new story now, a Marauder-era story, so we'll see how that goes. Thank you again!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments! Unfortunately, I didn't feel that there could be a happy ending to this story, but at least Talitha had a little bit of happiness in her life. I am working on a new story now, a Marauder-era story, so we'll see how that goes. Thank you again!
Well, it seemed a little simple, but it works.
Author's Response: I really struggled with how to write this segment of the story....as I have said previously, I feel I write better action than conversation....thank you for all the reviews!
