Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/30/08 20:25
Chapter: One-Shot

That was incredible. I've never ever been so proud of Ron.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: kita123
Date: 05/27/08 1:22
Chapter: One-Shot


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Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 01/20/08 14:06
Chapter: One-Shot

That was great. I love how you portrayed Ron. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: Metamorphmagusgil
Date: 01/06/08 3:20
Chapter: One-Shot

wow, you should win an award for this. I am really impressed...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ginnyhermionefan123
Date: 10/06/07 15:36
Chapter: One-Shot

:.I *salutes Ron* well written story

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 06/29/07 0:40
Chapter: One-Shot


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Reviewer: Padfoot101
Date: 02/27/07 17:58
Chapter: One-Shot

um all i have to say is wow. i dont think i can describe how this story moved me.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 12/17/06 18:28
Chapter: One-Shot

Nice story, very sad. I like how you made Ron a true hero- he never gets enough credit.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: DracoLover13
Date: 09/11/06 13:51
Chapter: One-Shot

sniff sniff. nooo!! ROOOOOON!! great uh storie thingy i loved it.

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Reviewer: BuffyXO
Date: 08/21/06 20:35
Chapter: One-Shot

Another tragic tale of Ron ... again, you are a great writer and I just wanted to express my gratitude toward you and your talent. Thanks for your fortitude and wonderful ability to tell the tale of our silent hero.

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Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 08/19/06 11:30
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow...that was beautifuly written. You description was amazing, I've never heard anyone describe that stuff like that. It was beautiful in every way and I will always rememmber it.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: muggleclaw
Date: 03/20/06 23:57
Chapter: One-Shot

"He died the brave person he had always wanted to be and he died having had the last laugh." That is SO Ron--your characterization and descriptions are wonderful throughout. I'll admit I found the final line of the fic to be a bit on the cheesy side; overall, however, this is a great story. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: charmed3
Date: 01/05/06 22:33
Chapter: One-Shot

*weep* suggestion: how about when Hermione finds out he's dead?

Author's Response: I try to respond to all my reviews but for some reason this is only just letting me so for this one and all the others dated for so long ago, sorry and sorry again.

Reviewer: megan_lupin
Date: 12/15/05 17:13
Chapter: One-Shot

Great job on this story! At first, I can honestly say that I hadn't expected the encounter to take place with Ron, but it was a pleasant surprise, and it really worked in the story.

You also did a wonderful job with keeping Ron in character --- His thoughts and statements were very realistic, and it was quite easy to picture Ron thinking and saying those things. Terrific job on that!

I particularly liked the ending paragraph of the story: He died the way he had wanted to die. He died without betraying the ones he cared for the most, the ones he loved, his family and friends. He died in silence and with dignity. He died the brave person he had always wanted to be and he died having had the last laugh. He also died a hero, (I really liked that phrase; :) because that was how the ones he left behind thought of him. He died to save them all, to allow Harry the time to discover the way to end it all. It was an excellent way to sort of "sum up" the feelings, and it expressed some definite "Gryffindor Bravery."

I'll also comment quickly that I loved the parts where Ron was thinking back to Hermione. (Again, very true to his character). And other than a few typos, this story had very few things wrong with it.

(Hope you don't mind slightly longer reviews.) Again, great job. This story deserves a definite score of 10.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: the nutty imp
Date: 11/29/05 22:07
Chapter: One-Shot

I like the dark atmosphere you managed to weave here, especially the way you described Ron’s suffering / torture, and how the thoughts of his friends are all that kept him together.

This story has such a tragic ending but somehow it’s not too sad for we know that Ron did triumph in the end … at least in a way –

Now am not really that nit-picky (at least I don’t think I am but there’s just a few tinselly bit that wish to point out. This is an excellent fic, but .. okay .. I admit I am a bit nit picky so…below are just some suggestion for correction: ^_^

It had taken him nearly seven, long, angst filled(,) years
It had taken him only mere months to discover, just how deeply he loved her
He wasn’t going to die, shouting out a betrayal. (and) (h)He wasn’t going to die screaming in pain.
Placing this on a new sentence will give it more emphasis.

You managed to show in this short story of yours the strength and loyalty of Ron. Most fan fics dismiss him as the mere sidekick, for he paled in comparison to Harry and Hermione. You made him shine and greatly so – without making him OOC in any way.

I love this line: He died the brave person he had always wanted to be. For this short phrase reflects Ron so well. He always was brave, (we all know that) but he tends to dismiss himself as secondary .. I mean everyone seems to knows that better than he himself. He has always been outshone… always surrounded by brighter stars – his brothers and even his friends. (Although they never see him as less, it must have always been at the back of his mind.) He wants to be equally grea,t and in this tragic end he was.

Great fic WinkeeJR. Sad and tragic so I can’t say it’s fun, but I did enjoyed reading this. :)

Author's Response: What else can I say but, Thank You!

Reviewer: Beloved star
Date: 10/05/05 10:38
Chapter: One-Shot

*sniff* That was an amazing story! It was extremely realistic, you stayed so true to the characters that I felt like I was reading JKR herself! The fact that Ron dies is definitely sad, but it had to happen, otherwise the plot would have been too fairy-tale like. Anyway, I rate this a perfect ten!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much.

Reviewer: Bic
Date: 09/26/05 15:42
Chapter: One-Shot

:cries: why!? its a great story! keepe writing stories like that!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Siriusly_addicted2HP
Date: 09/26/05 8:29
Chapter: One-Shot

OMG I'm crying!!! This cannot be...Ron, why Ron?? He's my fav character!! But still, i know that if Ron was in such a situation, he would do exactly what he did in ur story...die bravely, and not betray Harry nor Hermione...*sob*Excellent story!!! Giving u a well-deserves 10!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry for Ron's death too but it came to me one evening while I was trying to plot another story. So, I wrote it. I'm glad you liked it even if it made you cry. Oh, and thanks for the review.

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