Reviews For Love and Tears
Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 06/16/09 13:30
Chapter: The Letter

Oh, that was....well, that was sort of depressing, to tell the truth! But it was also beautiful and hopeful and sweet...now I want to know the rest of the story for Harry and Hermione, and their futures. I do believe that if this is the way that things had turned out, Ginny would have stayed there and waited for him, just like she always had. Her hope at the future that she was certain they would one day have would always be there. Great work and beautiful writing!

Reviewer: 11phoenixtears
Date: 04/14/08 17:52
Chapter: The Letter

that's so sad!! but very good.

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 02/16/08 0:46
Chapter: The Letter

Wow, i'm speecheless. It was short but was very moving. I really liked it. Could there possibly be another chapter so we know if Harry wakes or not. I like the whole letter idea. It made it more heart breaking. Great job.

-- Sophia

Reviewer: Oppungo
Date: 07/29/06 6:20
Chapter: The Letter

What a heart-breaking story! I loved how you started it, with the Ginny's thoughts to the start of the letter, and then again at the end, it made it seem all the more real.

I loved your use of the shattered glass metaphor. In fact, that whole paragraph was lovely, I think my favourite line has to be, "this hurts more than any curse ever could." It's so beautiful, so sad, so true.

(My one nitpick - "healers" - I think should have a capital H.)

I felt so sorry for Ron and Hermione too, but at least he has hope, with each flicker of her eyelids perhaps being a flicker of recognition? I hope she gets better. And Luna's death too - even though the war has ended, the darkness has not.

It was all so sad, but it was nice to see some light there too, Ginny trying to be optimistic, saying when Harry wakes up - saying how he will wake up. Oh, I hope he does! Overall, it was really sweet, nicely in character - but so sad! Well done.

Author's Response: Hey Kiara, I'm glad you liked it! It is rather sad really isn't it. Poor Luna, she really is one of my favourite characters and I killed her! :_( Sorry about the Healers.. I'll go and edit it now. There is some hope... poor poor little characters. Why do I like to do this to you all? Thanks for the good review! ~ Roxy

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 06/27/06 20:49
Chapter: The Letter

I liked it but I have a question. Is she leaving him romantically, or just physically for a rest?

Author's Response: That is the big question. I'd feel wrong answering it. What do you think? /JKR style riddle. Glad you liked it! ~ Roxy

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 12/30/05 22:49
Chapter: The Letter

I'm glad that I found this story. I've been reading your other story, so I know that Harry ends up with Ginny. I hope that you update the one soon,but..... This was a very touching story. I like learning that Lupin and Tonks are married and have started a family. I'm sad that Luna is gone. I think Neville will be able to find someone else, but it will take time. Maybe he got lost in his garden! :) I'm just speculating, but that is what a good story does!!

Author's Response: lol, speculating is good. Broaden your minds my trying to work out the future of my fics :) Thanks for another good review, xx

Reviewer: Zooby666
Date: 11/09/05 1:17
Chapter: The Letter

that was SOO good, omg just the way you wrote it amazed me, its a pretty long letter, why cant there be another chapter, aww =(

Author's Response: I'm sorry, there is one letter and one letter only. I'm glad you liked the fic! ~ Roxy

Reviewer: UnnamedElement
Date: 11/05/05 15:39
Chapter: The Letter

That's very well-written and really emotionally compelling. Very, very nice! I'll check out your other stories, too. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad this one shot inspired you to read my other fictions! I love to make the audience feel for my characters so emotions are important. Thank you again, ~ Roxy

Reviewer: silver_tears
Date: 10/30/05 7:54
Chapter: The Letter

WOW! I loved it! Well done Roxy! BUT I have a couple of questions: Did Harry wake up? How did he react when he read the letter? I'm really curious! :) Keep up your brilliant work! Rating: 9

Author's Response: Ah, the questions. yay, someone asked :) Ok, here are a few ickle answers. Did Harry wake up? - Yes! How did he react? - hmm, well, if you read my fic, Love Wins... End of. I sort of carries on the story ever so slightly. Ok real answer... I can't say too much incase people read both this and LoWi..EnOf, but he was very touched and she was very happy with what he told her in return!

Reviewer: brighteyes
Date: 10/12/05 15:16
Chapter: The Letter

Wow! That was so good! One of the best stories I have read! It's really sad thought. But, 10/10

Author's Response: Aw! thank you so much! I love reviews like that, puts you in a good mood for the rest of the day! :) Sad stories are often the ones with the most emotional appeal which makes people believe it more! Good little tip there for all aspiring authors! Sad = Good!

Reviewer: meltonm
Date: 10/09/05 22:40
Chapter: The Letter

Wow, it takes alot to make me sad while reading a fan fiction, but this one almost had me running for the klenex. This is a really awesome story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Wow, really? I nearly made you cry? aww, is it really that good? :) Thank you for almost crying!! lol, if you really like this story so much, try reading my 'Love Wins... End Of.' story, it's not finished but if you like this, you should like that one too! Thanks for the good review! x

Reviewer: Dawn Lionheart
Date: 09/29/05 7:27
Chapter: The Letter

Really, really, really sad - why did you kill Luna? But I have to give it a 10/10. Definitly.

Author's Response: aw, thanks. I'm sorry that I killed off Luna! Please don't start sending me hate mail about it! If you want to read stories where Luna is alive, check my other fics! This is the only one (as far as I can remember) where Luna is dead. Soo sorry about that! Please keep reviewing guys, it means a lot! Thanks xxx

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 09/21/05 13:34
Chapter: The Letter

Oh, I really like this, why did you kill Luna...she is young girl innocent, anywho, 10/10, you have to update and please don't kill Harry, au revoir.

Author's Response: Eek! No, quadruple review! Either you really really liked this story or there's a glitch in the system! lol. x

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 09/21/05 13:27
Chapter: The Letter

Oh, I really like this, why did you kill Luna...she is young girl innocent, anywho, 10/10, you have to update and please don't kill Harry, au revoir.

Author's Response: Nope, triple review...

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 09/21/05 13:21
Chapter: The Letter

Oh, I really like this, why did you kill Luna...she is young girl innocent, anywho, 10/10, you have to update and please don't kill Harry, au revoir.

Author's Response: oop, double review

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 09/21/05 13:15
Chapter: The Letter

Oh, I really like this, why did you kill Luna...she is young girl innocent, anywho, 10/10, you have to update and please don't kill Harry, au revoir.

Author's Response: Unfortunatly, this is a one-shot so there will be no update and no further on this particular story. I don't know why I killed off luna. I needed something and she was the logical choice! Sorry! Luna is one of my fave characters really. Thanks for the good review. xx

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