Reviews For She Knew
Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 01/30/09 16:53
Chapter: She Knew

This is incredibly, incredibly sad. I think part of that was achieved through the repetition of the words "She knew." Keep writing about her.

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 02/12/07 10:45
Chapter: She Knew

I rarely cry within stories, but I am. Wow.

Reviewer: pheonixtear
Date: 09/09/06 19:26
Chapter: She Knew

Oh my God, that was amazing. I am crying too just reading it. One would think that repeating teh phrase "She knew" that many times would sound annoying, but you did it magnificently. It all worked so well and was very beautiful. I have read many stories about James and Lily's last moments, but this one was by far the best. My favourite line was this:
"And she whispered love.
And he breathed desire.
And she cried intimacy.
And he smiled truth."

That was so amazing. Brilliant job, you are truly an outstanding author.

Reviewer: twistedtinkerbell
Date: 07/29/06 14:46
Chapter: She Knew

wow she knew!!! bloody brilliant

Reviewer: HELENz
Date: 12/08/05 20:57
Chapter: She Knew

First review, alright! This is really good! Well written!!

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