Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 06/01/06 14:52
Chapter: You'll Not Be Wanting That Hat Back

Men! I swear they are the biggest babies! Can't handle ovaries or drunken insults. ; ) Very enjoyable chapter.

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 06/01/06 14:31
Chapter: Blokes are so Mean

Sorry I've disappeared for a while. My home computer died so I'm sneaking in my reading when I can. Great chapter as usual!!

Reviewer: divhead
Date: 06/01/06 10:19
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

really good, nearly as good as the real hp! very funny :D

Reviewer: clj17
Date: 05/21/06 18:15
Chapter: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black

Love the story so far, some fantastic writing and cracking dialogue, but I miss paragraphs!

Reviewer: hp_princess
Date: 05/09/06 14:21
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I love it. Great job!!!! Tia is an excellent character and you do a great job with her and Sirius.

Reviewer: superstar
Date: 05/04/06 22:42
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

this is sooo my fave fanfic!!

Reviewer: pottersgirl87
Date: 05/04/06 13:48
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

that was one of the best stories i have read in ages :-)

Reviewer: Julybug
Date: 05/04/06 12:13
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I found this yesterday and, at the cost of all else (work? eating? who needs 'em?), read and read and then went to your livejournal page and re-read (cause I didn't know what MNFF took out) through to the end and then this morning went back and re-read a bunch of parts...and...hmmm. I want Sirius and I want to be like Tia (in some ways). Love her sense of humour. Cool family. I think I've fallen in love with her boyfriend, though. Who wouldn't, really? Where can I get one of my own? One who will sneak into my bedroom to talk and snog and...want me but like me too much to want to screw it up and with whom I get to have amazing sex. Do they grow guys like that where you live? Cause I don't have any around here.
Ok, seriously. This is the best fanfic I've read - and embarassingly enough, I've read more than my fair share. I'm really into snappy, funny, yet realistic dialog and you've got it in spades. You should consider script-writing although you're quite talented full-stop, you could just crank out well-done novels (hey, would ya? And let me know so I can go buy them all). No, I'm not a stalker. Seriously. I'm not. I'm off to your livejournal page again so I can read the "take off your sunday trousers" story. Sheesh. This is like crack, your writing...Work? What work...

Reviewer: notanotheridiot
Date: 04/18/06 18:34
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

one word (no, six actually): awesome!

Reviewer: hopelesslyhopeful
Date: 04/18/06 0:45
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I really liked your story a lot! I think it's really funny and endearing at the same time! Great work!

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 04/17/06 10:11
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I love this fic! I mean, sure, it's a bit fluffy, and poor Remus never got anything, but other than that it is actually excellent! Congratulations ... and celebrations ... There's no point me searching through the whole thing looking for mistakes and something that I can give constructive criticism for ... mainly because it's far too long a fic for that, and I suppose because I cant actually remember their being any. Ah, and it's finished, so again, it would be slightly pointless ... but no matter.


Well done, pretty damn good.


~ Ermine the One

Reviewer: sunshinedaisies
Date: 04/17/06 3:54
Chapter: Essence of Me

Ohhh I love your story. Especially because your female charachters stick up for thenselves. It is wonderful!

Reviewer: sunshinedaisies
Date: 04/17/06 2:42
Chapter: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black

Good chapter I like the depth your charaters have. It would be easier to read if it was corectly formatted.

Reviewer: styrofoamABC
Date: 04/16/06 20:10
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

Oh.My.God.I.Freaking.Love.You.

i think that you should try writing something of your own sometime. your ability to create a character, apparent with tia (and her family, which i found so hilariously amazing) could get you far. I really liked this story, and i cried and laughed at the same time during the last chapter with th letter exchanges. i think another great idea is to write a sequel..... i am dying to know what happens to tia and sirius and why they never had any children (whom tia would never kick. ever.)

I also love Morgan as a charcter, even though she was a background character, she and regulus really attracted my attention. You could write a side-along fic about them, their perspective on tihngs, becasue morgan is just so wonderfully funny 9giving a man ovaries is quite clever isnt it?)....

Oh well.. I have to get back to ym french Homework. But keep writing... I'll read all of your stuff after I succeed in failing my grammar quiz tomorrow, but hey, what can anyone do if I will never know what in G*d's name a gerund is.....
-Well.... BYE. and thank you for the most intriguing and funny marauder story i've ever read.....

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 04/16/06 16:49
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

There's and end? really? Are you sure? Well I'll be. (No I don't know what I'll be, I'll leave it to your imagination [wait, I don't want to live that dangerously, let your imagination mess with a cheese wheel instead.]) It didn't occur to me you had an end. Don't people have to be organized or something for that? Yes that does mean I had some sort of notion of you writing on and on into infinity forever and ever and ever amen. I wrote a nice review and the dumb thingummy logged me out and it was LOST. Mankind will never recover. I didn't think the making up was....sufficient. Talking wise. They didn't get enough out in the open. Not that they were terribly repressed at that point.

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 04/16/06 12:35
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

infinity/10

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 04/16/06 12:35
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

wow! ABSOLUTELY FAB! why can't i write that well!

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 04/16/06 10:50
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

Congratulation on being a featured fanfic! I was really excited to see this story there!

Reviewer: CourtneyW
Date: 04/16/06 4:11
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

Wow, that was really, really good! I really like your style and I loved the way you wrote the characters!

Reviewer: Infanitestarburst
Date: 04/15/06 21:42
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

it was good!

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