Reviewer: Sekhmet
Date: 10/09/06 5:29
Chapter: I'd Go Out With Her in a Heartbeat

Again, another excellent chapter. I think the last line has got to be my favorite. It was clear I needed a new death glare–this one was losing its potency.

There are so many lines and words in here that I find so highly amusing that I want to add them to my own daily usage. You have done a spectacularly sarcastic job with this story. I love it.

In all of this wonderful writing, I think this may be one of the very few mistakes that I found: And of course there were the other array of faint scars he sported all over his body in various places that I’d had glimpses of over the years

. Nothing even that major, but it did sort of interupt the lovely flow.

Reviewer: Sekhmet
Date: 10/08/06 18:58
Chapter: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black

I really do enjoy reading this story, although, this chapter wasn't formatted properly, I think, and therefore it is one long paragraph. I still enjoyed it, however. I like how the relationship between Tia and Sirius is very slow to evolve. It's very realistic.

Reviewer: fredandgeorge4ever
Date: 09/29/06 18:46
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

Loved your story, it was hilarious! The ending didn't make so much since, but I loved your story anyway!

Reviewer: Sekhmet
Date: 09/28/06 19:28
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

Pointless fluff?! (referring to your A/N) How could you call this pointless fluff? This was brilliant. Not only is it funny, but the writing is excellent, the characterization is excellent, and so is the imagery. I really enjoyed reading this. My favorite line has to be: “Don’t be silly. It was going spiffingly–up ‘til the point Prongs hit puberty.”
I had to lay my head on my desk and laugh after reading that!

Can't wait to read more and it's only the first chapter. I'm hooked!

Reviewer: froggie
Date: 09/20/06 21:28
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

hey...i don't know if your still reading reviews...but this is one of the best ffs i have ever read. First of all it is hillarious and i laughed out loud like every chapter. Second of all, i love tia. she reminds me a lot of myself and my personanality. She is mainly the one who makes me laugh. i love your portrayal of sirius, james, and peter. The only problems i had were your kind of cliched portrayals of lily and remus, but they had their moments. So GREAT JOB!!!! i hope you write more stories similar to this one.

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/19/06 18:31
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

OMFG!!! FUNNIEST FREAKIN THING EVER!!!!!! i swear to god...i almost pissed myself laffing so hard. ive read it twice and its still hilarious!!!!

Reviewer: HarrynHermione_06
Date: 09/10/06 1:07
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

OMG OMG OMG I LOVED this!!!! I sat here and read chapter 14-25 practically all day! I read the others yesterday and thursday. I LOVED this!!! The Tia/Siriusness was AWESOME!!! It was like, the perfect story! You are freakin awesome!!!!! I hope you keep up the good work!

Kelsey Lee

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 09/06/06 11:21
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

ok. I lurrrrve this story an your other story and you are on my faves so could you be really nice and write a Remus/OC fic pleaaaaaaase. I have tried but the rejection emails were clogging up my inbox.
oh and 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10!
Samuri Rose xxx

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 08/24/06 21:10
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

U know what? u make sex sound so fucking scary. u're completely freaking me out. Not the actual activity but what they feel. u hav ruined my life (i'm not actually being serious).
otherwise, god I luved that finishing touch. it was perfecto. just that regulus was so...good didn't fit. it was nice that he was good though. you just didn't make him sound evil at all. i'm not making any sense, i think. don't pay any attention to me.

Reviewer: xostupidcupidox
Date: 08/22/06 18:50
Chapter: This is Me Sighing

Very good and funny and all that stuff, but I won't go on so I don't start sounding all corny and stuff. I have a question though. Was Sirius ever dubbed most humble armchair?

Reviewer: queendiva4evr
Date: 08/21/06 14:48
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

VERY amusing!! I simply adore our vocab!!!

Reviewer: zestylicious
Date: 08/04/06 17:07
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

OMGG.. i loveeeee the way u write.. ur hilarious.. i've been reading for the past couple of days.. its like one of those things tht u just cant stop reading.. i seriously think u've made me fall in love with sirius hahah.. but wowww im really impressed.. u really have a way with words.. it made me think a bit.. made me laugh, cry.. all the good stuff... going on my faves!

Reviewer: confidentialroze
Date: 07/22/06 17:41
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

awwwww! luv it! can u write somemore fics????????? cuz i love both of urs! 10-10 ~fiona

Reviewer: confidentialroze
Date: 07/20/06 7:35
Chapter: When Toadstools Run Rampant

hey! sup?? i love this story! you should write a sequelto it! and u should write a sequel to april rain, too! cuz i am rather fond of draco and other character fics! *sigh* well, either that, or else i would advise you to keep on writing all those wonderful sotries! :) 10/10 ~roze

Reviewer: randitheshort
Date: 07/17/06 21:27
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

Wow, you are an excellent writer. Most the time, the stories I find on here are so-so, but your style is just complete awesomeness.

Reviewer: firefly13
Date: 07/12/06 17:49
Chapter: You'll Not Be Wanting That Hat Back

Well hello, Mr. Pot, I really think you should leave that poor kettle alone.....

Reviewer: firefly13
Date: 07/12/06 17:23
Chapter: There's the Thing

I love that quote. "There's a hole in our door!"

Reviewer: firefly13
Date: 07/11/06 12:53
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I lve this story. Totally going into my faves. Kisses and hugs my wonderful writer friend. Perfect.

Reviewer: firefly13
Date: 07/11/06 12:38
Chapter: For Hire: One Girly Mate, Will Do Back-Rubs, Expected Wages to Be Paid in Chocolate

Hah! I love it. Toast crust. SO childish, but hilarious.

Reviewer: firefly13
Date: 07/11/06 12:15
Chapter: Blokes are so Mean

Oh my god. I love her when she's pissed. She's just hilarious. Big words. HAH!

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