Reviewer: cazthenorthender
Date: 02/19/07 22:53
Chapter: For Hire: One Girly Mate, Will Do Back-Rubs, Expected Wages to Be Paid in Chocolate

"Tossers have no predetermined gender"

Love it.

Caz xxx

Reviewer: cazthenorthender
Date: 02/19/07 14:24
Chapter: Herein Lies the Masked Swordsman’s Birthplace

This chapter was so funny! As someone who's had similar drunken nights myself I can completely relate! You've even got the drunk person's POV spot on (I couldn't do it, by the time I'm that drunk I tend not to remember anything). Looking forward to the next chapter! Caz xxx

Reviewer: Queen Of Ravens
Date: 02/17/07 23:13
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I lurved it! You MUST write more! PLEEEEAAASSSEEEE???

**sticks out lower lip**

Reviewer: cazthenorthender
Date: 02/17/07 19:42
Chapter: When Toadstools Run Rampant

Wow - this is really good! The personification (I *think* that's the right word) of Tia is fantastic and I can't wait to read more but it's 1.40am and I really ought to get to bed! Looking forward to the next chapter! :) Caz xxx

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 9:22
Chapter: A Pile of Outraged Marauders

Sirius/Tia!! WOOT WOOT WOOT! I thought Lily was great at everything...

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 9:13
Chapter: The Happy Fairy

Tutoring...hm...poor Tia...I bet James willl sue Tia to get to Lily! LOL

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 9:05
Chapter: I'd Go Out With Her in a Heartbeat

LOL! This is the funniest chapter yet! Especially the last line and the "Snogging Extraordinaire" pin.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 8:57
Chapter: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black

oooo! Sirius/Tia are a perfect ship! You really need to separate this chapter into paragraphs. It's very difficult trying to read it...especially with all of the dialogue.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 8:47
Chapter: Creepy Stalker-Types and Why I Love Them

OK I like your fanfic but it is too much like other fanfics...with the parts about Sirius being Hogwarts biggest lady's man etc.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 8:39
Chapter: When Toadstools Run Rampant

Excellent Job so far! Once again, I like how you write in another oerson's POV.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 02/13/07 8:26
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

I feel so sorry for Prongs. *sigh* Such a love struck teenager. Great chapter and I can't wait til Lily realizes she LURVEs potter. I like how this is in a different person's view instead of a Marauder or Lily...

Reviewer: JenniferLilyPotter
Date: 02/03/07 17:31
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

I LOVE your story. Your so funny...how do you do it?

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 02/03/07 14:46
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I love this story. It is in my favorites. You write wonderfully and this was so sweet! Tia is just great, and I love Sirius, whatever he does. It was great and I love it and I love the title of this last chapter. Great great great job!

Reviewer: Fizzing_Wizbee022
Date: 01/28/07 0:03
Chapter: I Am a Hummingbird on Steroids

I know this is a completely random place to review the entire story (well, up until this point, at least), but I felt like I had to pause and commend you on your work before I moved on. And yes, it is quite late where I am, so please excuse any misspellings that may occur...:)

Tia is such a fun character! I love her personality and the way that she interacts with the marauders. She is definately a part of the group, but stands on her own as well...she is very much her own person with her own agenda, which I find refreshing because you made her a very 3D character.

I love how you balence her boldness and strength ( which could be considered a negative trait because she carries everything to such extremes) with compassion and a mischevious nature. If she had any of these traits without the other, her voice and the flow of the story itself would be lost. Perhaps my favorite aspect of her personality, however, (and not just because I'm a hopeless romantic), is her vulnerabiltiy (sorry about the spelling!) when it comes to her feelings for Sirius. Yes, she is experienced in relaitonships, but by showing her softer side, you round out her character nicely and make her much more true to life.

Aubrey, also, is a character that I love. Her timidity and desire to please make her a bit of an enigma, but her genuine innocence and trust make my heart go out to her. I also love that she is beginning to come out of her shell!

Anyway, I'm sorry this is so long. Congradulations on your QQ award! I'm going to go finish the story now!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 12/21/06 23:06
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

I actually like this a lot.

Reviewer: hogwartsworm
Date: 12/20/06 17:22
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

That tale of sarcarsm and ironity complete with french words, was absolutely fantastic. :D

Reviewer: novalearae
Date: 12/19/06 13:39
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

good, very good.

Reviewer: iamonlyhereforfun
Date: 12/07/06 4:25
Chapter: An Olive Branch Never Tasted So Good

hey........um totally luving your story so far.......i read your other one as well and def rekon this is betta...u shud write more

Reviewer: Viv
Date: 12/05/06 9:36
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

Oh. My. God!!!! I just can't believe what an incredible story this is! I just finished to read it and believe it or not, I'm all sad that it's over. Tia is just a crazy character! She made me laugh a lot with her reactions, her pride, her sarcastic lines... And I like the way you portrayed the Marauders, especially Remus. Really, they needed to have a more serious guy around them. And like Tia said, I guess Sirius and her really belonged together! Great story!! I had a great time while reading it!

Reviewer: Aethonan13
Date: 12/04/06 16:33
Chapter: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black

I'm liking it... I'm just not quite sure how Tia fits into the picture yet. I get that you're not trying to base her in canon. It'll probably just take a while to get used to a totally new character in a familiar setting. Generally well-written, though.

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