Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 18:32
Chapter: And I Had a Sudden Craving for Powdered-Sugar Doughnuts


Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 18:05
Chapter: Essence of Me

I almost didn't leave a comment, I just want to go right to the next chapter.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 17:00
Chapter: This is Me Sighing

I love Sirius. Not only is he gorgeous and sexy, but now you've made him sensitive and caring. Kudos.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 16:36
Chapter: A Pile of Outraged Marauders

Ooooh. Now Andrew's out of the picture and the plot thickens...

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 15:01
Chapter: The Happy Fairy

So have you like spied on my family? Because everytime I get really upset my mother dances around and makes me where this stupid halloween halo crown thing and calls me the happy fairy. Luckily she can't turn me yellow though. But seriously, when I read that part I just couldn't believe it.

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 08/30/07 12:26
Chapter: For Hire: One Girly Mate, Will Do Back-Rubs, Expected Wages to Be Paid in Chocolate

okay siriusly... this is the most well written, absolutely HYSTERICAL, realistic, wish i was that witty, thing i have ever read in my entire life

Reviewer: Siva2478
Date: 08/30/07 10:33
Chapter: I Am Downright Indecent

okay so ive been reading this story straight sorry about the no reviews, but really it's not like you woulda missed them. i LOVE this story. Your humor, wow, brilliant.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 8:00
Chapter: I'd Go Out With Her in a Heartbeat

Everytime I read a chapter I nearly die laughing. I so can't wait to finish this fic!!!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/30/07 7:28
Chapter: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black

Sirius is the coolest person ever. I just had to put that out there.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/29/07 22:33
Chapter: When Toadstools Run Rampant

I looooooooooove Sirius! And I absolutely can't wait to find out what they've done to Snape. (And here's to being Canadian! Woohoo!)

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/29/07 21:38
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

I love Sirius! And I completely love that you've added a new character to narrate. It's extremely funny.

Reviewer: snapey_rapeyx3
Date: 08/28/07 0:26
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

this story is amazing. thats all i have to say. good job!

Reviewer: jhfh3112
Date: 08/21/07 16:52
Chapter: When Toadstools Run Rampant

Letters between Tia and Sirius were the most hilarious thing iv'e read in a long time. This is easily my favourite Marauder fic, partly because it's veiwed from a new character's perspectiv, therefore making not one of the many, many clichéd ones out there.

Normally when reading, i'd nitpick to my heart's content, and now is no different. If Tia is half-blood, and her mother is related to james' pure-blood side, then her father would be muggle or muggle-born. But you say it is her paternal grandmother who is also called Portia.

God, I'm a prick.

Love it, love it, love it. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: No no I don't mind, i would rather be told than going on looking like an asshole haha. but i'm kind of lost, why is her grandmother also being called portia contradictive to the other facts?

Reviewer: Mrs_Moony_Lupin
Date: 08/10/07 10:25
Chapter: I'd Have Him in a Dither Next

ha sounds like my family!

Reviewer: Mrs_Moony_Lupin
Date: 08/08/07 22:04
Chapter: Allergic to Idiots

I forgot how much i love your story!!! I was in a bit of a sirius (i really hate JK Rowling at the moment. What has she got against pranksters anyway????)mood and started to read this again for like the third time. LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: BritishWitch
Date: 08/08/07 16:52
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About


Reviewer: godricz_girl
Date: 08/01/07 23:47
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About all i can say.....woah!

Reviewer: danu23
Date: 07/28/07 2:43
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

I looooove this fic!! It's brilliant!! And I went to your livejournal and began reading the sequel but I noticed you didn't continue! Is it on hiatus or are you never going to finish it?? Because was amusing and it would be great if you could update it! Anyways great work!

Reviewer: Mistycloud
Date: 07/24/07 11:04
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

You know, I think I might be lucky in story-picking or something. The first one I read (Ever, here on mnff) was April Rain, and finishing that, thinking it was brilliant, I went to your profile.. Or, yeah, thingie, to see if you had written anything else. And I found this. And so, of course, I read it too, and it was, if possible, even better than April Rain. And so I just have to say that you are an amazing writer, and seriously, you should think about making your own stories, and not fan fic's. (If you haven't already.) And not only is it oh so romantic that I just want to grab the first boy I see, but you really know how to be funny. I even managed to make mom worried about me when I read about Lily's little comment to James about him being Zorro, and having to take off his sword. She almost ran down the stairs to see if I had hurt myself, and must have been thinking that I hurt my head when all I could to was laugh.

Anyways, apart from this "I think I just told you too much about my own life, when really I should be worshipping you" part of the comment, I have to say it again.

Me luffles your stories, and I'm going to check out your LJ right now.. Or after dinner, judging the way my mom looks.

Reviewer: parryotter4lyfe
Date: 07/24/07 1:18
Chapter: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About

aaah this whole story is hilarious. im in love with your imagination!

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