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Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/16/11 15:53 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
wow it was great and it is that amazing kind of story that u just wish it would go on forever but i a sure u dont have the time and will just read another story of yours. By the way i take back what said about lily being a b-word and so i no longer not like something about ur story therefore cling it perfect(almost i am sure there is another flaw though i cant find it.) thanks for giving me the privelage of readng ur work. u r a natural writer. (loved that it about regulas). ta

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/16/11 8:46 · For: Bigger Than Two Quaffles
i am on the verge of making u my favorite author just for one story
u r absoulutely awesome. there is so much voice in your writing that haven't read any other stories to match even rowling's. This story is so hilarious nd enjoyable. the only thing i don't like is lily is sort of a b-word lthough i think it i partly because it is from tia's pov. I can't wait to read more!!!!!

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/11 16:12 · For: Allergic to Idiots
oh i love this. i wouldn't change itone bit. This story is also completely hilarious by the way.!!!!!!

Name: Phoenixsong7611 (Signed) · Date: 01/19/11 15:25 · For: Allergic to Idiots
That was really good! I have a feeling I know how Sirius gets to the girls' domitory...does it have to do with his animagus?

Name: kimweasleyizahippie (Signed) · Date: 01/13/11 17:41 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
im crying. im in tears. this was sooo freakin good!! i was hooked on ur story from the very beginning (well if u saw my last review, when i didnt realize it was a series n read chapter seventeen and THEN from the beginning) but anywayssss u scared me to DEATH i thought they were going to end as enemies but then it got all better and i was crying even more n im such a prat but it was really good!! i luvvvved it!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe its freakin over ='((((

Name: kimweasleyizahippie (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 21:35 · For: Let's All Get Away From Those Good-For-Nothing Hippies
ohmigosh, ur an amazing writer!! u really caught my attention and ur use of voice and character is astounding! u really caught my attention with the title, but i think now i shouldve started form the beginning!! =P i think YOU r the person i am going to be reading stories from in my free time

Name: kimweasleyizahippie (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 20:52 · For: Allergic to Idiots
we have the same name.
and u spell it the way i do too =D
i just wanted to let u know....^.^

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 07/26/10 0:12 · For: Allergic to Idiots
i have the slight feeling i've read this story before, way back when it wasn't finished. wonderfully enough though while i find the details familiar i cannot remember what happens next. I love rereading good stories and feeling like it's the first time. Really good chapter

Name: missbea12 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/10 22:46 · For: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black
i love this already. this is probably the only sirius/jame's relative that isn't annoyingly cliche.

Name: areyousirius (Signed) · Date: 05/22/10 11:11 · For: Allergic to Idiots
Hi. Okay. I don't think you come on here anymore and have not come on here for quite a few years; I am well aware that you may never see this at all. I suppose my rationale is that you'll either come on one random day in the near or far future and read it and all will be well and good, or you won't. And both options are alright, though I’d obviously prefer the former. But both options are alright.

First off I’d like to say I’ve read this three times. I’m not really one to reread fanfictions; I’ve read a few twice, but I’ve never read one three times. Except this one. The thing about this fanfiction is that there isn’t this whole big epic plot involving love and turmoil and romance and angst; it isn’t complex and crazy with all of these goals and all of these obstacles and that may be why I love it so much. Now, don’t get me wrong; the characters do have hard battles to fight, but these battles are really just the battles of life. That’s why I love it. It’s just life. It’s life when it’s happy and life when it’s sad and life when it’s everything in between. Just a snippet of life, before things got really bad and after things were easy. This may not make sense; I just mean that most fanfictions I read are about how the characters need to stop the evil forces! They need to save the world! They need to fall in love! They need to find the bad guy! They need to crack the code! And though these fanfictions can be very good and very nice, sometimes I just want to read something where there aren’t all these crazy outside components pulling away from it; sometimes I just want to read about life, plan and simple. (And yet is it really simple at all? Hm…). It’s just the inter-workings of this slightly insane (and completely lovable) girl’s brain as she figures things out. It’s so honest and real and imperfectly perfect. And I love it. Have I mentioned that?

I read some of the previous reviews and I have to say I agree with the girl who said she appreciates how you made the guys believable. I completely concur with this. Too often do I see writers portraying males as either far too outrageous or far too polite – there’s a medium, a middle ground, there’s the reality of it. And you have that. You get that. And it is really so refreshing to see that. All of your characters were just so real. Sirius was seriously (no pun intended) nailed right on the head. Hysterical and ridiculous and stubborn and sexy and frustrating and completely, one hundred percent amazing. You didn’t overdo Lily’s snootiness, which is a really rare find. You somehow made me fall in love with most every character, honestly. I loved how you took each and every one and gave them this sort of purpose in Tia’s life. You clearly showed her relationship with everyone, instead of just focusing on her and Sirius, which is something I sometimes see. Each relationship Tia had served a function, helped better her (or worsen her) in some way. I have so much more to say about your characters and I probably will in a separate review; I’m actually only halfway through my third reading, but I felt I really had to stop and review, right this very instant, or I’d forget to. And I really didn’t want to forget to.

So now, we make our way to Tia. Oh, Tia. I like to think of Tia as every part of me I wish people would see. Have you ever watched a movie or a play or read something and then felt like you were a part of it? Like you start talking like you were there? Or maybe I’ m just weird and I do this, but I swear, this story makes me wittier. Just reading it. Tia is so quick and interesting and witty, so witty. So quirky, so bright. She makes me laugh and cry and cry because I’m laughing and laugh because I’m crying. You take ‘clever’ to a new level, really, you do. She’s also a complete psycho. And it’s terribly endearing. Everybody’s got a bit of a psycho in them, I think. No exceptions for Tia Spencer. I yelled at her in my head at points and I cheered with her aloud at points. Somehow you make her the realest of all; you explain her without making it obvious you’re explaining her; you don’t just list off her features and you don’t leave us wondering. You slowly reveal more and more to her as the story goes on: she’s difficult and she’s much more complex and much smarter than people think. I really, truly adore her. God, I can’t even right now. This story.

Someone in a previous review talked about how they didn’t get the ending. Now, I love the ending. I love how it leaves off with this message, this message how everyone has a good in them. Sometimes even the cruelest seeming of people can turn out to have a soft side. Everyone deserves a chance, because everyone is more than they initially seem. I think if I took anything from this story, it’s that. Everyone is more than they initially seem.

I have a lot more to say but I’m going to leave now because I’m being yelled at to get off the computer. Chances are I’ll review again as I’m reading. I’m sorry if you end up reading this review (and the many that will follow this) and wonder why such a complete nutjob is continuously gushing about your story. Well, I guess at least you’ll know you did something right, eh? I’m an extremely picky reader, if it’s any consolation, so the fact that I find this so brilliant is really saying something. A nutjob may be continuously gushing about your story, but that’s just because you’re brilliant. I hope wherever you are, you’re still writing, even if it’s about God knows what. Just as long as you are.

Name: bananaz13 (Signed) · Date: 11/30/09 17:04 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
wait... thats how it ends?!?!?! no epilogue or anything?!?!?!?! nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws herself into a vat of hot oil because she is depressed at the thought of this being the end* sincerely bananaz13 a.k.a. bailey

Name: La_Rubinita (Signed) · Date: 09/21/09 0:01 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
I'm glad they got back together, but I don't get the end.

Name: makeitsparkle (Signed) · Date: 08/31/09 14:21 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
Oh this did make me giggle. The Mary-Sue of this story should have made me run away screaming but the wit you executed it with made it bareable... in fact, really good! Very funny, endearing and just emjoyable to read.

The letters throughout were brilliant and a clever narration ploy and... whether intentional or not, a great nod to Jane Austen. I also loved the true representation of guys... you make them act and talk like real boys not fictional ones which makes them far more relatable (is that a word?), Sirius in particular. They're coy, they're crude and they really think they're helping when they tell you (when you're feeling like shit) that you look like shit... oh can't live with them...

So anyway, thanks for the laughs and a great Marauder read (because frankly there aren't enough!)

Isabelle x

p.s. The only tiny thing I think you should have considered was a Brit-Picker, your use of slang is adorable and a good attempt (well done for not a "mom" in sight!) but it's utterly out of context. But as I say only a tiny little error in an otherwise great piece. Loved it!

Name: purpleysnail (Signed) · Date: 08/28/09 19:26 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
I really loved ths fanfc, you got the perfect mix of hilarity and angst which is quite uncommon and very welcome.
One question: do you by any chance read books by Louise Rennison?

Name: delirioustk (Signed) · Date: 12/25/08 14:28 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
bravo!!! can safely say that u captured my favorite kind of sirius black!!!~

Name: jaymarthow (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 19:54 · For: Cleaning Supplies Are a Bit of a Mood-Killer
Sirius leapt up so quickly from his seat he nearly knocked me over.

“Fair enough,”

ok I'll stop

Name: jaymarthow (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 15:12 · For: Allergic to Idiots
Right, then,” he said briskly, bringing his other arm round to hook over James’ chest and proceeding to haul him (rather easily, I had to grudgingly admit) towards the door. “Let’s be off, Jamesy. Mustn’t frighten the lovely ladies. Or act like a bloody psychopath,” he added, in an undertone that only I caught.

god I lmao while reading the whole thing, but this part just killed me! OICNASIXNAOSICBSAOIDAJOIDAODANS

Name: hp_rox (Signed) · Date: 09/14/08 4:53 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
i'm sorry if this sounds vulgar or whatever..
but this story was FUCKING AMAZING!!
keep writing more like this... :)

Name: I-LUV-SIRIUS (Signed) · Date: 08/19/08 8:10 · For: The Noble (mmphmhahaha!) and Most Ancient House of Black
funny chapter even if da lack o pararaphs made it difficult to read. luvin your story!

Name: sirius132 (Signed) · Date: 06/27/08 14:30 · For: Follow the Big Green Arrows, They Know What They’re Talking About
amazing narration!!! simply awesum!!
i jst loved d way u hav portrayed sirius.....made me fall 4 him all over again!!
good job.....keep it up!

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